 All right, new version Cool, I like it definitely more focused In terms of What they're doing where they're looking. I do like that we're you added that full turnaround And I think it's okay since he has the most attention here I think it's okay for her and I like that post too with this here. It's great Just careful what I would say is that upwards move they're weirdly in sync. She goes up. He goes up here Looks I think I would just go After it's raven. She's done This is for me No, that's the full screen here and there you go frame 42 That's when I would initiate this. It's you know, it's not much What is this two frames earlier? So maybe 41 Yeah, just a bit earlier just the smidgen Yeah He does have the reaction in his eyes, but it's this that I'm trying to uncouple Then going up at the same time This I don't mind that overlap here And I do like so she gets up and then over So the I have two notes in terms of I mean this this was already a note, but the two biggest things that That so three I would say not that this is huge, but I would still uncouple this the bigger one to me is This here when she starts turning Yes, he has a dart up, but there's no adjustment To me at this point He is looking up and past her I mean like here I buy it somewhere around the ear I was trying to draw but anyway And then now he's kind of spaced out and by now she took a ginormous step to the left And he just ate too high and too far to the side Here is better. It's a bit too low The two highs is in between This is not I don't know too high to me demonic cricket that takes chunks Now looking at her skin when provoked now looks back at her This is probably the one I buy the most in terms of eyeliner chunks And then this one's good too. This is the word that Google used Now suddenly slightly higher. I know it's it's very subtle, but A bit of a change there where suddenly this goes up But it works better the second half I guess, huh the first not so much to me the biggest one here It's just that that turn he would look down dart around because he is really focused on everything She's saying and does right you can see all the little reactions there on something this big To me he would he could even take a tiny step forward, but definitely readjust his eyeliner and focus Maybe not a step forward because he does it already here, but it's it's it's to me It's almost like she's turning Now she's more receptive to what I want to say I want to go a little bit closer But maybe just like a lean forward that then goes into the bigger lean so it's like You know like a double Yeah, instead of one big one you could do like a tiny like maybe this much But not high but to the left and you go forward to imagine he's starting to lean Like in your in your rotation It wouldn't be like right now It feels like you have a lean and then you could do a Something like that you lean slight pause not flat but slight pause around it in the curve And a forward some sort of demonic cricket that takes chunks out of That takes chunks slightly I like the asymmetry but and at this point we're suddenly To me to mirror even though we're low here and there's an asymmetry here just the action Suddenly feels cricket that takes chunks I don't it feels a to twin and also the chunks part because of this here It's to me. It's more like a dipping It's almost like oh man, this is such an old reference like palm leaf used to be Uh, I don't know how you pronounce that correct It's when I used to hear it as a kid in Switzerland But like you would feel like green dish soap or something and there was a commercial day that you put your fingers in your fingertips It would be good for your fingers. I don't know that's what this reminds me of it's so weird And not as in like a chunk Grabbing or being pulled or something. I'm not quite connecting that gesture, which is of course very subjective But that's my my kind of worry there chunks out of your skin when provoked chunks This one is the other big one. So for me, it's a turnaround in his focus chunks and this one is The up and down on the head It's a bit too bouncy. This feels to me suddenly overanimated chunks is and I think I mentioned that before but it's it's something where The action is so big in terms of eyes closed the tension here going forward this big move And then you listen to the voice Chunks it's just not quite there. I feel like chunks is the energy Visually and chunks is how he says it to me There's so much movement that I I would hear more strain and energy Change in the voice again picky, but that's just something I'm just usually picky about chunks To me, it's almost like you can do it instead of Instead of this far forward he could be maybe only this far And instead of up like this with the hand it could be like a side swipe It's just kind of minimizing keeping the idea But just minimizing the energy of it And don't do it They're throwing out an idea because it's always like this is a crappy idea or maybe could be Or a version of it could be better, but I'm wondering what if Chunks he's like this And then is the word that google used on that thing you relax the fingers And you close up Those three and you point and close this and it's almost like Is is what google use it's like a little pointy gesture. It's like I wouldn't say it's a sub pose. It's kind of it's a it's a deviation of this here But it's almost like oh, I'm already in this pose. I might as well Now get into a less aggressive pose and more into like an explaining pose like a little point You're like, oh, that's something By the way, that's something that google said that could be interesting So you're not stuck in that at the end again subjective, but won't have to throw that out there Maybe you like it. Maybe not. Maybe that gives you another idea for something else But that's kind of that and again, I really like how you tweaked it into her Because that's again the pose or like I don't really believe in any of this and whatever And I'm just going to take a step back because you're weird, but but I like this This is a really neat pose and it reads really well from like a tricky Profile back view. So that's really cool. All right. Now, that's that. 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