 All for a height Let's check the doggy out here. Oh cool. I like that slide. All I would do is By now right at the end like I don't know what this frame is 74 Start at what is where's my finger? You start adding a little paw forward and paw forward. These are awesome doggy legs meaning that you end up something where he's balanced All right legs, but then also legs forward And then looking at the guy So you slide and then you stop and then you take step forward step forward It's cool. I like it like that actually That fills up that feels a bit limp right through there And watch out you got a little frame pop here That leg goes and then kind of whoa, and then they stick in and the air here So by now this doggy needs to be here much if you actually move it forward. So with that push-off It really needs to go further So you might have to take this piece and just put it here and shorten this piece Right there this is a really fast drop you got the head Boop right there fool selling drops really really fast Boop right there Cool slide. Oh, I like it I would probably take these guys. It's just a thing but angle them So diagonal stuff is a bit more threatening And you might want to bring I don't know if you're gonna like this but like we're starting to lose the spikes of this guy So either bring those clouds over to the right or You know with this light. Maybe there's some lighting On the left that will illuminate the edges there It's cool though, so you're saying Ending rough camera actually the camera is fine Because it frames it correctly it would just be a one more layer of handheld which I can totally show you and I'm missing the uniform got to model it yet uniform I'm not sure about uniform, but yeah guys there Just let me know what you want to do with the guy if he's might just be passed out And then I would just to put the head sideways Eyes closed jaw open maybe tongues out, you know, maybe then that we don't have to animate the character And it's just about the dog coming over there and It's coming to the rescue type of thing. Yeah, the biggest thing to me the sudden drop not enough of a push and After that slide one two steps for adjustment It's cool down and This guy so you're saying I attached to be to the board for my ideas are about the ugly drawings Hopefully you would understand what I'm trying to do. You don't need help to maybe make the camera dynamic right now every frame is still Dialogue says the Empire is Interesting dialogue just reading it. This is exposition dialogue It's not something where the character has any Emotions attached to it or it gives us context some conflict some change This is basically someone explaining something which is usually not something you want to use As a like a loose loose rule. I mean obviously you can make this awesome, but The Empire of Izmir has long been a divided land ruled by the mages an elite group of magic users The lowly commoners those without magic are little more than slaves So wait that reading a story to his kids kids can be brothers inside a tent with flashlights That's a cool idea to offset the audio Meaning that I would then concentrate on the kids listening Maybe looking at like cool while he just delivers the line because the line is just kind of boring So this will make it much more interesting Dragon coming to frame flying a powerful magician on top ruled by the mages, that's a cool idea like this again not not really Focusing on the audio. I love it They're letting a powerful magician Magic users the lowly commoners those without magic It's kind of cool. I don't know if this is too crazy. I'm open to suggestions. Let me know what you think for the record I've never had a dragon in my life Um That's a problem because they're really complex Dragon coming in But I mean the first one is a flight. So the thing is If you're doing this, you need something interesting. I like your idea of the guy landing Especially if it's just that landing motion. I think we can work on that. I can I can teach you all this The tricky thing is besides, you know, I know what kind of dragon ball you're gonna use But you're gonna have the wing action the legs potential tail and the physics of Flat flat boom land and the weight and everything on top of that You have a human that has to react to all that weight and overlapping action everything That's the really tricky part as well. Cool idea though. And I think it would really push you and learn you learn a lot I think I'm all I'm all for that. So if you're doing this, it's pretending. This is for real It needs to be something interesting. Dragon comes into frame flying with the power of magic on top So it's all about the flight dynamics. So it will be You know, you could have a castle and maybe like another hill here and then suddenly out of You know, could be some tree line or something and suddenly as a surprise Dragon is like that it comes out Like a nice silhouette, maybe there's even like it's a sunset or something and as the dragon comes up Creates a silhouette and then comes down and then it's flap flap into a turn Lap type of thing. Maybe Comes past us, you know, it's it's almost like you got something here comes When and Passed thing us past flying camera thing That could be something depends what you want to do. It depends what you're comfortable with Or it could just be coming up. Well coming up this way Those little twin and towards camera, you know, it can be simpler It depends how big you want it to be is that actual scale compared to this. I mean, all kinds of ideas, you know, or Or it's something what's the line here the rule by You're not really talking about dragons so you could do anything you want So what if it's you know, what if it's the castle and then the castle is next to a bit of a rock And there are more buildings here. So it's all kind of built together and then you have this dragon Sitting on it kind of protecting the castle or whatever and then you have a jump off flap flap Past camera, you know, that could be something so lots of ways to make an intro or or show off some animation We should push off flap flap away from us or coming in fluff up away from us kind of depends what you want to do But I like the idea and actually I like the combination of this for him I would just have him read this but maybe like a slight smile and before he starts there's some emotion in touch Tell my kids something super cool, and it's all about the kids going. Oh, it would be cute to have both of them So you can have maybe one is They have as his arms and it lays his head on the chain on his arms And then the other one kind of rustles up next to him and Hold and gets his head on the other hand. They kind of like rough and tumble little boys It kind of but they're they love each other and they're kind of together in this That could be something cute some cute action there and then having just that voice over to show this I think it's a really cool idea So yeah, that's kind of it for that All right, there's an email you can sign up you can start whenever you want you can submit whatever you want You get 16 submissions either way like and subscribe would be awesome. All right. Thank you