 Alrighty, I haven't watched this yet. Let's check it out. Oh my That is really loud from here. It's all fun. I gotta put this down Actually, what would really help me is after critiques if you tell me Which parts are helpful or not? It's like my first instinct is okay. Let me check the feet Is there something where you have offset in the in the orientation which you do we can see this But then is that too picky like do you need? To know that seems like you have a bit of squash in there or something. I thought that's cool. Is that something that is important or Not like my main things I would mention are things like this when you got double-arm poses kind of twins There's a bit of a frame offset there, but overall Like this could be a bit more of a potentially go like, you know, maybe Open arms open fingers like the excitement and then and then you're here And that's the the tighter excitement where you got the arms together, but then I would try to not overlap He's too much to get a clean a silhouette for as long as you can like something like that And maybe on a turn like that not go so far that you lose that arm so maybe only this far so you can retain A silhouette there Also, it was like the head and the body turn as one piece. I would try to I always say chest Pelvis chest and head, but she can't really put that egg So it would just be mainly something in the head Maybe with people till towards us where the head leads towards us That's cute I like that he goes down That excitement but watch out it it's definitely offset obviously in the pose bend and straight us well I'll be careful generally do not have a bend towards straight towards camera or away, but then we don't see that the Structure this gives us a bit of idea. There's a bends. This just feels like a short arm and silhouette But I would just kind of try to avoid double arm mirror stuff It could also be like if he's playful Instead of can you believe it because you have the fists here, which you have before Here just variety, but also could make something cuter. It could be can you believe it? What if the arms are? down Hands are flat and it's almost kind of not flapping but kind of you know like swinging his arms and Kind of tapping the sides of the egg shell and excitement. Can you believe it like that? Maybe and if that's too Playful or too? I don't know. I am so proud of you. You have worked so hard and learn so Like that to me seems more like worked so hard Where the fists are okay versus the other one but again watch out. So what why is that arm? It's not as clear structure-wise as this one This I'm not sure it is almost was like are you insane much and then that is all like flipping someone off in some different language Put that in there If you do though watch out it feels like we're hitting bit of a sharp wall oops, hold on in the spacing of This how that hand just kind of stops there Same thing with this one here here Well, I like this like that gesture there going up there a slight hold nice offset in the fingers and They're going up into haha. I would just not go over once I just gonna go keep like that section of the face clear I hope you're it's really nice. I really like this part where he has that gesture then simultaneously walks backwards Yeah, that's cool like they're a lot also clean silhouette and also keeping the arm front of it and not hiding it's cool That's great too because you have to go back there, but you keep keeping it clean here There's more reading lessons in the storylands area books to read it. I like that too You go there, but then don't do much so that the eye goes and then we we can hold and look at it read it And there's nothing distracting in terms of movement area books to read Watch out almost off-balancer with no recovery of like that foot going further back or something Which I wouldn't go further than this books to read in my program and words to spell in the skills bank Yeah, that's great. I like that. It's all very cool That's Really cute. See now it makes sense because now it's a steering wheel and it's kids will get that That's really cute, I like that a lot Watch out. It's a little bit of a hiccup. There's a little spacing Yeah, how that body goes over this is a really horrendous color for me to critique you with Where that body goes over here? Right there this in real-time It was harsh stop there That's cute too, right away we lean forward so that that has to go up in the air when you're ready for something you try fast phonics or reading egg express This is cool, too. I wonder though if on that point you actually lean Towards it So it's everything's leaning and whoo-ho everything is leaning and pointing towards that versus back I personally would bring closer to the purse the point of interest Then that way you have somewhere to go when he talks here Then you can load you can lean back to bring the attention back to him Right, so you have this you have all of that But he's leaning forward and then well, how do I get the audience's eye back to him? This arm down might not be enough I mean, I'm sure it is but you know, it wouldn't lean back where the head was here body here to body here head here So the eye really jumps back to him so many new things to learn This is generally something I wouldn't do it. It's kind of the classic I mean not that it's that they're up that high, but it gets into that W pose Where I would potentially get something else Or reading express there are so many new things to learn in both of these The thing is you have just a lot of gestures generally So I mean this could also be told be fine do this Then he goes over there that arm just goes down and then he just swings his arms as he walks They're just there for balance And then they go back up because here's a new important point That way it makes the contrast to be a bigger because that's important now I'm talking and that's important but then when you talk and you do all this It's kind of dilutes the importance of the gestures Super cute. Yeah, that's great. All right, that's it All right, there's an email you can sign up you can start whenever you want You can submit whatever you want you get 16 submissions either way like and subscribe would be awesome. All right. Thank you