 All right, let's play this here a Couple of presentation thoughts that I have here. There's no sounds. I'm gonna play this again, but there's a longer slower walk there and You chose to do a walk cycle kind of a generic walk cycle and do the second one using the same poses But trying to achieve a heavier feel by just adjusting timing spacing overlap Without doing massive changes in the poses. All right Let's go back here. First of all, I would change the camera so that we are not losing the characters so much at the bottom and Then the top for the other character just kind of reframe things and I mean you could also show a you know a front view and then a side view Just to make it clear kind of look at things and you can always do you know a front side and then Three-quarter if you want But I mean it is also going from A to B now that it's not a treadmill But just just that's a general thing for presentation apart from that They would love to see a bit more on the hips because what I'm feeling right now is that the top part feels a bit stiff. I Don't think I'm seeing a lot of hip Involvement as on like on the passing pose all the weight is on this leg So the hip will go down. Don't forget why rotation on the hip as well You probably move the chest and why just a bit more. It just feels a bit timid on the upper section and I feel like you can On the passing I feel like there's a the legs just feel mostly bent And I think we can just go a bit more on a straight on that on that plant It's not always like this and there's a bit of early movement here and lifting on the toes on that peel But I don't see any you know crazy pops or bumps at least that that feels pretty solid I would sell on something like this. I would love to see like a straight, you know front and side This means nothing. I know why I do this This is the head and these are these are my legs. This is my drawing skills Yeah, it just seems like there's it just seems a bit timid it's overall Up a part and even how the legs how the legs are always bent. I would also reduce the The drag on the wrists. They're a bit flappy especially on the way back careful dragging of your Your hips your wrists that much And then if you go on to the this section this just feels more like the same animation Just you know, you have your keys and then you just kind of scale them out Where it feels like if you want to you know, is it? It's the character just I mean you're mentioning here heavier feel but I would still probably go into Boom like a bigger impact on the chest and on the head I'm probably not super extend those arms and keep those a bit more on the bent overall overall somewhat bent and Still the same idea of extending those legs a bit more on that step You also have to think about in terms of well if I do this is this kind of the scale reference meaning that This is the character and this is a giant next to it or are they the same size? You know, I mean you also have to look at that if this is a giant it could be you And a much more impact and potentially just overall more of a curved Light of action in the upper body is half, you know, it's almost like I have more questions than critique Also watch out you're gonna have to have some smoothing out like as the knee comes up kind of pops into a Stop and it's same thing here as this comes down That stop and going forward. There's some smoothing out there that you could but seeing this up close now I really don't see much involvement in the hips. So to me it seems like a Bigger extension on the long extending your gate basically you want your legs not to be always so bent On a step like this. I'll go a bit further Involvement in this a bit loosening up of the upper area here same thing on this. It feels like you can just I will go just a bit broader in your generic generic walk with your overlap in your drag and your swings and they can always scale down a Bit later. This just seems a bit a bit stiff That makes sense But I do want to ask you in terms of you know Is this one character the other character just as a giant and this is the scale relationship? Or is that the same thing and you I don't know I don't what like what your presentation idea is and what your thoughts are on that if you want to do that Maybe you want to both at the same time That's kind of that's kind of my question there. So let me know in the email Maybe you know as we discuss this you update can reflect that You can always submit it like this, but then still have a front and side Just for more a proper look at it. All right. I'll leave it at that. Thank you All right, there's an email you can sign up you can start whenever you want you can submit whatever you want You get 16 submissions either way like and subscribe would be awesome. All right. Thank you