 All righty, new version here. Let's go It is a different setup Ooh, I like it It's nice and clear Nice And the end, nice It's a lot of changes. I love it So let's go one by one here You can probably, this is up to you, not that it's wrong or anything, but you know, you can always push the The silhouette when he goes, ah, this is more like It's not, I wouldn't say hesitant, but it's kind of like a, I might eat it versus You might bring the arm up a bit higher and here Pizza is, you know, dangling and he has his head up here, mouth is open type of thing Ah, bigger if you want. You might argue that he would not see it But I think we can just assume that it's gonna make noise It will be fine, but careful. It's Not that it's overlapping, but it's like It's pretty fast, that was a very professional thought Going from this to this. I don't think it's too bad. Again, there's nothing wrong with this whole setup It's just a suggestion. You could potentially make the silhouette cleaner You know, maybe he really really wants to eat it. That's why he really really fights for it This is more like, I guess I gotta eat it versus, especially with the head up like this Like, ah, do I have to eat it versus, oh, this is a lot of pizza. I'm gonna eat this, you know So maybe that could be a pose where you can, you can push that idea He might, you know, fur the back with the shell or the head might be out here Like really I'm gonna eat this and then you can just always make that wobble bigger whatever to draw attention to itself That's, you know, just to look to you Then we have, that's cool. I think A bit fast. I wonder once you spline this, if you're gonna hold this a bit longer Meaning that you're gonna keep going up with the camera, but you're tilting up a bit too soon I know this is in step, so it might not be a problem once you spline it But I'm wondering just timing wise it might go and Maybe I wonder if you're gonna add 5 frames, 6 frames to this hang time and then drop That's all very clear and clean Let's see because he goes there. That should be okay I'm just wondering should be, should the camera be further out so that we understand more what this guy is But I don't think so because we see him here. I think it's, you're fine, but this is nice and clean You can always bring that maybe up a bit higher and over and then have like some pepperoni sticking out And then for this, he just seems bait, you know, just like with here with this pose It's kind of like when he gets to this it's a bit, you know, there's an offset there It's slightly mirrored I'm just wondering if he seems not that this seems bored But it's more like hey, like, you know, like what is this character? Is he just kind of like hey, who took my pizza? I'm not this martyrs guy type of thing and is is that something you can do it? I can like once you spline it's gonna have a waddle over there Or is he he's kind of like hey, I don't like this and he has his you know fists down here like I don't like this Like how far could you put this or push this so it's not just Movement but a bit more personality driven potentially, so that I will probably take that shoot out a bit This way is I'm gonna clean your silhouettes. It's not straight at us Then he gets ready. I do like this a lot though because we're getting into That's very cool. I like this you get to see the face. It's a good fake out I like that a look there too, and he gets ready You might argue maybe at that point that on could be lower this could be higher I don't you want to obstruct this for this long again, not that it's too bad because we get to see it here Just worth a thought. I want to maybe clean that up a bit and in this once you spline this might just be a bit simple in terms of Going up, you know, it feels like a very much. I got the pizza and then slurp Could this be like he enjoys it a lot like I stole this from you and it's awesome This is just a thought, you know where he You know when you have a basketball you twist it and then the walls So what if he throws this up like that? It does a bit of a twist into his mouth or you know, like a throw up or something and there's not much room That's why I'm thinking kind of it's kind of rotating in his hand and goes down to extra flourish and then Probably let me see he goes into this Ha ha again as a victory pose, it's a bit mirrored So you can think in terms of how you can go like this and at least maybe take another step into like a different kind of pose where it's maybe Just kind of push them or into three-quarter. What is he doing next? Hold on. It's punched. I mean that could work He was like this and then either Wonder thinking out loud here. I haven't thought that through if he takes a step back with this leg or this leg Just something where it's like, huh? Maybe a little taunt, you know, it could be like Take a little step back or maybe it's like one forward where it shifts his head left and right wiggles his shoulders It's kind of like and what are you gonna do now? What are you gonna do now? like a little bit of attitude and spunk and Then the guy does and I think instead of just rotating this up I will go and then rotate the fist over so that we have the fingers more into into a Profile view fist so it's less finger rotate but also wrist rotate into like a bent You know bent fist And he realizes oh This gets a bit wonky. What am I looking at? He brings this up into what so I'm sure what this is Side I don't that could be a bit cleaner where you can maybe cheat this into like a full-on fist here Nice clean green silhouette color silhouette But I love this idea that it punches that thing out and the same thing for clarity here You might as well bring that pizza all the way over here and this clean a little bit of arm And then the shell just kind of really nice clean silhouettes. It doesn't have a bit of a tangent there Then if that's cute, I like this Again, it could be something where he takes a step and it's maybe Slight turn so you can see that mouth a bit more open. Not that it's unclear. I think it's okay So I'm thinking if you have room there And then that's fun, you might need more frame Into this but once we splat in this should be okay. Huh? What's the camera doing? Let me just check just this the camera goes Yeah, that's mainly that little things here in there, but I think it's it's a lot more detaining subjectively, of course It's a lot cleaner than before. I think That works pretty well. Yeah. Thank you All right, there's an email you can sign up you can start whenever you want you can submit whatever you want You get 16 submissions either way the like and subscribe would be awesome. All right. Thank you You