 Alrighty, let's play this whole thing here. There is no sound That's right, that's what you get. I don't know who that is, but oh, they're here cool. I like this It's cool like that surprise with the car at the end. All right. I think overall it's very cool. I only have one Suggestion in terms of a bigger thing Maybe two it kind of depends it depends what you want to go for because the thing is This seems fairly casual Then it suddenly becomes much more energetic. So these are that's my main I Would say confusion, but I think that's something that could you could clear up or tweak a bit Where this whole section all of this is fine fine fine, then he looks hangs a bit looks this way Jumps that jump gets a bit more You know dynamic and it's posing It might be good to either put some depth of field and blur that or maybe take that detail out We'll see how this once you spline it, but this feels it's just episode busy Also with the value in the color for silhouette, but this is also stepped so it stands out a bit and I'm freeze framing but Let's watch out for that, but then this feels like all right. He is jumping. It's like the last day He has ever to jump With a very like somewhat uncontrolled Lending and then it's back to being all right Attitude and Then clearly is being chased by someone which is cool again. It's a cool surprise. I like all of this So my thing is this so I think animation wise especially with you I'm not concerned about the quality or anything like you're you know how to animate. So you hear my my Thoughts thinking out loud if he's being chased and he has that attitude here Why not have as he goes down here? he looks up To check if they are after him so it doesn't feel so casual He goes down and if he looks up and then back down then we feel like hmm He must be checking something then is looking here Maybe another quick look up or quick look over but something that's not just this side Then you have this and then all of this makes sense And you might even take out this where it's just not as long this whole section here It feels more like he goes down With you know cut that maybe in half from I don't still stepped but it just feels long So from here to here at this section here this whole waiting maybe cut that in half I'm spitball and could be just the third excuse me and Some more frantic looking around That could help Give this the whole feel of of they're after me but they have all of this and that's cool And that's that but here I feel like he's looking at me all the time Versus maybe a bit more screen left and it's even looking there is even looking up Is he checking multiple things? It just feels weird that He is so casual and then he rushes and then he's looking at us and being like alright I got it But then how does he know just because there's no one there it could be a moment where he does this and Then maybe he gets on his toes With shoulders down and looking up and kind of looking left looking right. It's kind of like a Pantomimey thing of okay. Let me just double check, you know looking almost over this right He gets on his toes to look over all of this here And then you have that clear distinction of ah, I guess no one's there no one followed me. I'm safe So it feels like you want to feel like he's being chased. He's checking behind this You know how his back is checking checking and then realize alright. Well, that's it actually no one is behind me I'm good and then One if this is a bit too much maybe now see how it is stepped. I'm just curious if That could be less energetic with that swing where it's really just the contrast of yeah I'm alright and then just kind of like about casual jump and walk not so much swinging and when this happens Then he has that Sun stop arms go up and this happens, which is really cool. Like I like again. I like that ending Dropping this Full suspension on the car. Yeah, I mean, that's all cool. So Yeah, that's kind of it. So it's mostly mostly content and maybe Making it potentially clear unless I'm missing something So let me know in the email what what your thoughts are on all those choices and suggestions and that's it. All right. Thank you All right, there's an email you can sign up You can start whenever you want you can submit whatever you want you get 16 submissions either way like and subscribe would be awesome Alright, thank you