 Welcome to church of the chair where we celebrate all the things we do while seated I'm your host E and I'm here today with my co-host Chad Lutzky. Sorry. I'm already stumbling on my words We are currently collaborating on a novel tentatively titled planet caravan this is an Educational experience or an inspirational experience. So if you want to sit down right with us or do your own art or whatever Take a break off work. Whatever you want to do come sit down with us Just relax. We don't have a whole lot of Chad interaction, but Definitely ask questions if you have questions. These have been also been going up on the channel as vods. So You can watch them there. You can watch them live All right, so I Feel like I'm forgetting something. All right. I don't know probably cuz I got a lot on my mind but uh, all right, so first order of business is Chad wanted to talk about something he has been Let me let me go ahead and share my screen so that you guys can see all the Everything that Chad has done. Let me start all the way up here. It's a lot But uh, I think maybe first order of business I need to read all this new stuff and get that in my mind before we go Um and the scene that if I'm gonna write today, which I am Um, I'm probably gonna do a scene well into the future um Just to get something out whether it's something that me and Chad talked about offline um, or whether it be something that sparks In my brain while I'm reading what he has to do you want to talk to me before I read it or after? um We can we can wait till after you read it. Okay. All right. Let me burn through this real quick All that talking we did over uh world war three and you did Yeah That's an important thing for everybody out there. So this section right here right where my cursor is Uh, well actually hang on uh right here used to be a very cliched line that I probably would have changed later Anyways, the the kid can sleep could sleep through world war three So me and Chad got to talking and he's like well, how do we how do we denote three? Uh Do we have to type out three th re or do we do the roman numerals? You know what we finally decided to do the roman numerals because you really only do you know really only type out numbers In uh in dialogue or if they're under if it's under a thousand in the narrative Um, so that that's it's like industry standard rules. You don't have to do it that way but um, and then Come after all that talking Uh, it's like a five minute discussion going back and forth until finally he just rewrote it completely And I think it's a perfect example of not killing your darlings, but realizing You know sometimes you don't even need to fix what's there. You just need something new so People first Talking about using a nuke to take out a fly that's hilarious full sleeve nascar tattoo, I don't I think we can trust everyone here boy talk about hopes and dreams Love that and while she taught me a lot. I never learned how to live without her Now I love The way you edited that That's that's great You really Yeah You really nailed that one if I agree with google dog service How the fuck do you know every single time where I'm at not that I was gonna delete ever but It's fucking creepy that I'll just be reading along and all of a sudden you'll click on Where I'm at. I don't know. I'm just trying to I'm trying to follow along where you might be at Well, we must read at the exact same pace because holy shit That's supposed to be a period here or comma, which one you want the next night? I heard her grunting then you got a cap period period. I figured it's just making sure I'm trying to with it with um I'm trying to not have I'm so tempted to throw in like what we were talking about the the other day when we were talking about editors not understanding When you're trying to do like uneducated speak like swapping out uh That for what and uh things like that And uh, I keep wanting to do that with Cassidy, but I want or not with Shane But I do I want him more educated than the rest of them. Well, he's a reader too. So yeah. Yeah. Yeah I agree with you completely so He still has he still has that that that kick drawl and whatnot. Yeah, that's all he really needs He left the push pull Not a hundred percent sure should it be Not quite asleep Yeah, yeah, yeah, yeah, okay. I just just make yeah, I didn't even catch that Because I wasn't sure if like asleep A sleep shouldn't be there at all like I realized they're not quiet And that I couldn't figure out which one you want which one you meant There's a chance I left that word in and just not maybe we should just take they're not quite asleep They're not asleep at all. So we should probably take take quite out Yeah, because they're not even down. Yeah, you do this too, huh put an e in laps I do that from time to time And then I don't put an e in churches Hmm Not that it's not saying you don't know the rules. I'm just saying yeah. Yeah. Yeah. That's something that I screw up Oh, I got my whole thing of things I do Oh, yeah Well, what's your word that you're always surprised when you type it out correctly like you spell it right the first time Which one's yours or do you have multiple? Uh Sheriff's probably one of them. It's just a it's a roll of dice, dude. Yeah, I got you Um, mine is separate. Um Yeah, I I think both actually are in the dictionary now There's a sp er and then there's an sp ar Uh, because shell looked it up the other day and she found both of them because I was trying to I was telling my son how to spell it Uh, because I because I always screwed it up as like sp er And that's the way he was spelling it. I'm like that that's not right It's a and then she'll look it up. It's like it can be both Yeah, can that and calendar is another one for me calendar. Yeah Um, my worst one is received. Um I always get that because the i before e except after c bullshit doesn't always It's not a hard rule like there's some words You you know, but uh that that one always fucks me up always and I'm always surprised when I get it right I used to have an issue with uh the word license until I just Took the time and like tried to do some word associations and like lice like head lice And then because I could never remember which one I know there's s and there's a c but which one goes where Yeah, so I'm I'm like, okay, it's lice And then ends got you morning. Hailey just seeing you. Sorry Hailey I've got to say this again every single time I like a sentence You've left it every single time. I've thought to myself. I'm gonna have to go back and change that You've already changed it. It's like it hasn't failed yet. Like you're you're 10 for 10. It's fucking weird Because this this uh, where is it the pour some sugar on me line I was like, I like that one. I hope he doesn't do anything with it and you left The goods and they're all them turds. It's almost fucking poetic You got the goods and they're all them turds. It's I don't know it sounds musical It's like it feels alliterative or like rhymy, but it's not either one of those. It just yeah, it's got a nice beat to it Yeah, when I started listening to things the things in the in the bottomless handbag Everything started with the tea by by accident. Like wow, um tissue Tylenol tic-tacs and something else But it flowed well like that. Yeah You you I love the way you edited that one too I just I I am struggling not to grin like an idiot while while reading this. This is already like Damn, they're publishable Not my my shit never looks like this this early. That's why I'm that's over here grinning like a fool. So It's nice. Uh, it's nice to have the other half of my nice to work with the other half of my brain Okay before going any farther I love this But I want to get rid of The entire beginning Okay, um, I want to well before you before you get rid of that beginning. I'll just say what I yeah, yeah, please do Yeah, yeah, I saw your I Don't like any of that. I don't like I don't like the whole story. Okay um, we can keep it I just I don't know it feels It feels weird there and it feels almost like Shoe horning a lesson or shoe horning a Maybe that's just me. I don't know. I mean it makes sense The story makes sense with the you know with the thing and the this illustration that's it's you know on here, but It also just feels kind of maybe it's because of where it's at and how I don't know there's a lot of meaning meaningful stuff before it and then it splits off into this All right, so where do you want to Story that it feels maybe even just too long like Instead of mama mama was said and then this profound sentence But it's more like mama was said this giant paragraph and So but that's just me we that doesn't mean it needs you know That's that's the you know Okay, well having it that's just either way. I mean like like I told you before I don't mind cutting anything because um I mean, I'll just use it in something else, but where would where would you want to stop here? Like where would you? um, maybe and that's when I hear or maybe The column is empty. I'm begging for rationale and for the seed to dry up and die It's in the it's in the middle of a Oh, it's in the middle. Okay. I was looking for a beginning paragraph um The last part of that same paragraph is uh memory makes itself at home Okay, so essentially the that last From that last sentence in that paragraph I'm down But again, you know, if you really like this If you're so long, yeah, but we both need to be happy with something if you're not happy with it Like I told you I don't it really true and I'm not just saying that it really doesn't bother me whatsoever See because I'm just going to put this over here in a blank document Okay And if you ever want if you ever want to go back like and see like your original version it was a lot wordier if you I Because it's google docs and I don't I don't trust it with my life. I I every day I save What what we've done So I have like, you know, um I just go to file Download microsoft word so so that we if something happens and something were to happen and crash and everything's gone Well, our world is going to have Most of what we wrote okay Up until you know, that's more that's more than I usually do the only time I like Uh, that was entry 692 in my cannibal file So I mean, there's shit in there that I'll probably never use but it's there anyways just in case I want to use it And then um, you know, we might end That chapter what is it called? Planning seeds might end up like that or might end it on a different kind of a note Or maybe could use yeah, it's probably good. I'm tired. I'm trying to I'm trying to Um kind of stretch out this thought of his where Because we've got a lot to do yet. We've got the fair we've got this next day The the grave the fair And then the final decision. Yep. This is what I'm to do So I was trying to I was trying to make it that with that last paragraph I'm trying I was trying to make it like I don't know what I was thinking. I'm you know like and then Like, you know, you have these thoughts I get I get them with book ideas all the time Wake up in the middle of the night or it's late at night. I'm like, I've got an amazing book idea I'll write it down next day. I'll say it out loud to my wife when I say it out loud. Sometimes I'm like, that's freaking stupid I'm not right And then I never write it And so that's I never I never have that issue like I'm gonna write Uh, like even if I do think it's it's a dumb idea. I don't trust myself So I will just I'll just go ahead and start it and that's why I am never at not saying you are but never at a want for like story ideas is because the the most ludicrous Asinine thought like um that novelette I just wrote um, I sharded in a cemetery and woke the dead like that That's a perfect example. That is a stupid idea, but I still went ahead and did it. Uh, it's just a matter of that That's I I just I'm showcase. I'm talking about that because it showcases how different we are Um and how we're still able to come together in this cohesive manner um but Yeah, so I do that quite often but with me Even when I tell shell and she's like that's really dumb like there's a uh one Called the patch that I had this idea for the sentient pumpkin patch that comes alive every year And I wrote a draft of it ages ago and I let shell read it and she's like, I'm sorry She's just laughing. It's like I'm sorry. I can't get past Any of these like living pumpkin things they just look silly the way I had it because It was like a vine would come that the vines are pretty much the bodies But there is no body. It's just like the vines carrying the pumpkins around The pumpkins are hanging from the vine and have the face on them Uh, so if they were like straight up with the vine the face would be upside down But since it's hanging over it's it's got the face right side up This is I don't understand why the pumpkin has a face or any of this stuff I'm just like it's just goofy shit and she just couldn't wrap her head around it That novel ended up being 157 thousand words And it was almost like I was doing it out of spite and I probably was to some extent But either that or she knows me she she does know me this well So I can't you know, she did it as a kind of reverse psychology on me Because she enjoyed it so much I don't know you one way or another but I ended up finishing it and that stupid little story Turned into like a 450 page book. It was ridiculous I've done that with before with my wife when I was writing a foster homes and flies. I said She's like I told her the synopsis, you know, I hadn't written it yet And she goes so let me get this straight You're gonna write a a book about a boy whose mom dies But he won't he's leaving the body there won't tell anybody about it because he has a spelling bee at school And I said yes and you watch I'm gonna freaking nail this thing and she's like Okay, you know And and I thought when she finally read it. She's like, you're right, you know, dude a good job But she did I had a earlier title for that Did she hated and she's like no you're not naming it that and that was uh over her dead body Was the original title. Oh lord. It was like my tentative thing Yeah, that that completely changes like the tone of Telling the book. I mean that that that sounds like there's some nefarious shit going on Uh in the book and there isn't so I'm glad I'm I'm glad you changed the the title It's kind of like a Stephen King's uh dreamcatcher was originally entitled cancer and Tabith That was like no no, no, you're not naming a book cancer. This is how bad things happen Um, and so he just named one of the parts of the book cancer instead called a dreamcatcher He he couldn't live without it either I don't know why I was about to change boot to boat I don't know why man. I'm like that's wrong. No, it's not Okay, um for consistency's sake you use cuz earlier You want to use that again here or yeah, uh, that's our um either one Well, I I was just wondering if we should use because because it's him speaking And he while he does slanging up a little bit. Um, I didn't you know, I don't want him to sound I know um So you want to leave that other instance just him like slipping into vernacular because that one was in narrative too. I believe Um, it's not a huge deal man. I don't think it's a huge deal I mean he is only 16 and he has lived the last four years of his life Uh in this yeah, so he's oh, I wasn't saying I had an issue with it I just wanted to make making sure you want to leave that other instance. I know I guess I'm just kind of talking to myself. Oh Sorry I should know better because I do the same shit. I just I just don't I don't I read stuff all the time. It's like When I when I write things like this that are first person I I try to make it sound kind of like Dialogue like someone's truly telling a story here and a lot of the language. I see people use it's it's so very proper It drives me freaking crazy And so I don't usually don't do that but Like because it's you've got the extra syllable and it just seems like You wouldn't say the whole word Yeah, there's uh, well, there's another I mean there's another reason to change it We got a repetition of the cuz here. I mean we could always just get rid of and this is for editing This is this isn't shit that and we could literally just delete this because I don't change my clothes period Opening my dresser drawer will rekindle the rage when I see the empty space where mom's jewelry box should be And there's multiple ways that we can change it. I'm just throwing that out there. Um, yeah um, well, we could We could put cuz susie for I'm thinking they didn't sleep at all Um I like that look at it And then just a slipping back and forth between him being educated and him slipping into their thing. I like that That's also the I mean I did like the same thing with uh, with south of here with the whole James jim jimmy thing So people thought that was an error There's even review. There's even reviews that mentioned mention it even though there's that bit in there's a discussion page at the back It's like, um, why do you think the narrator refers to him as James and jim right here. It says that I put a single dog turd because for some reason I was thinking I pictured uncle trav taking a dog turd out of the yard and putting it in the house There's some sort of excuse for killing the dog, but but he's never gonna say he killed the dog right so Um So yeah, whatever Sorry, there's a portian slip down here Look, look it says big ass it needs to be I meant big Big ass it needs to be but I like it. No, it's as much as I like ass. It's just it's a pretty fucking anyways. I thought it was funny. Uh It's so stupid. I damn I wrote a lot I'm sitting I've for some odd reason. I thought I stopped writing after after the yeah Yeah, I still there's still a lot to Holy shit catch up on I wish I could have got more in this weekend, but you did a you did a lot I'm trying to see what you I'm just waiting to see what you do with uh readus cornbread If you if we use it or not, or if you end up getting in there and going no That that needs to go Uh, I'm trying to remember. I don't even remember writing this post posted bills section That's hilarious It must have been in my own head man. It was it's been a I've been having a time of things lately It seems like I don't have I have plenty of time to myself But it feels like I don't and when I do have time to myself all I want to do is sit on the porch and stare into oblivion Um, it's like there's there's two there's so much going on and it's not don't get me wrong It's not just this it's like a bunch of different things projects are starting to pick back up and I'm still trying to do daily videos and Yeah, I still got a bunch of stuff to to post and everything's on my mind. Um, and I am I'm mentally Spent um, so whatever I write today. It's probably not going to be any good, but we're here So Watch I'm going to end up writing the best shit today just because I feel like that. I promise Because some stuff has been cut because some stuff has been, uh, you know, we Cleaned up. We're at 15,742 words noise Without any of our without any of our notes or outlines stuff, right? I got you Yeah, trip me out man. They claim that fucking video with the music playing in the background as alive, but they still haven't claimed it for That's ridiculous They still haven't claimed it. It's been over 48 hours and and when we went live um, uh, it was as soon as we ended the live we had got hit And anyways, it's I don't understand YouTube. I'm not going to try Uh, anyways, is there anything else you want to go over? Well, we forgot to we were talking about Having the family praise Cassidy for a job. Well done. Uh, yeah Um, I can go in and drop drop a couple little things. Do you want to um, okay? So here here's the thing Do we want to do that when they get back? when Because shame goes after Cassidy finds him brings him back Um, and he'll have the baking soda on him Do you want to leave the praise section for that because they're happy about the drugs whereas before they were still kind of You know, they're I don't know. It's not like they were waiting on drugs I don't it's not like they were going through withdrawals or anything But uh make it so this kind of cements cassidy staying home Um, or you know, even shame can have a thought like uh, well, he's obviously not going to come with me now So because they just got through praising him for uh getting back With the baking soda I I do have Excuse me. I want to have a another conversation with him Where after he's decided he's going to leave Or he thinks he's going to leave or whatever. Um Kind of a last-ditch effort You know like not saying I'm leaving or maybe he does say I'm leaving but just essentially feeling about and You know, would you want to If I if we could find a way would you want and he's it's very clear that no and so there's nothing that That shame could ever do and outside of kidnapping him. Yeah, right. Um But we could do we could call the next uh next chapter no go and start it with him with cast leave being praised for bringing the baking soda and then um We could have that one final conversation Oh, no, you want he's not a hundred percent sure he's going to leave I mean, he knows he's leaving. He doesn't know where he's going It's going to be one of those things after the carnival tonight He's going to be for sure where he's going what he's doing what he's taking that kind of shit So do we want the next chapter to have that praise section? I don't I don't know followed by shane. Now Another thing is I don't know if you want to write this section or not. Um The bit How how he how he leaves how you know that that kind of thing. Um Like does he just fuck off or does he let anybody know he's going or does he wait until The the drug start again do the drug start again um How do we want to initiate him going? Because they're obviously going to be like where the fuck are you going kind of deal? um Maybe find should pull a cinderella on him. Oh, you got chores to do or some shit like that They're not just going to be like, yeah, sure go to the carnival um Maybe Maybe that night before he decides to go to this carnival Uncle trav comes home with or somebody somebody brings something back for Cassidy to do um to keep him preoccupied like maybe it could be something simple as like coloring books um I can't remember how old is he nine? Yeah, he's nine. Um Not only is he nine but he's like Stunted like yeah, he's not had the fun of a childhood. So something like coloring book and crayons, which is like what back then is like two bucks um Would just send him over the fucking moon Yeah, it could be it could be a a stack of comic books Um, or not comic books, uh coloring books that are half done because there's a yard sale That's that's a great idea He couldn't even bother buying him a cheap ass fucking coloring book. Yeah, just grab a bunch So he's got like four half finished pages ripped out Um, what and then the crayons themselves are you know, half bro It's like a you know box crayons couple, you know, some of them have more broke. What if there's What if there's shibby's coloring books? That's a good idea. Yeah, there's shibby's coloring books and he's like Oh shibby's got some just like these and then he starts flipping through and he's like, oh summer color But that's not a big deal like Cassidy wouldn't like latch on to that Yeah, but shane sure as hell would so we can have shane's reaction to you know, they didn't stole this kid's friends Shit or something or maybe we I mean he wouldn't he wouldn't know Yeah, yeah, yeah Because I don't think Cassidy would would realize that they were shibbies and that could be one other Things like oh, yeah, shibby's got these. Thanks so much. Yeah. I wanted these because I know shit whatever whatever the fuck Yeah, yeah, I like that and then um, well Originally when you ask what I was getting at was that he's preoccupied So that gives shane and out So They're all getting high because they had they had their uh, let's just grab a little bit more. Yeah, you know Kind of thing the junkie maneuver. Yeah, just like just like shane said And they're not even gonna really notice he's even gone. Okay, that that's fine. I do have another thing to add to the coloring books Shane trying to get Cassidy's attention like to tell him goodbye Um, like he's or he's about he's about to go. I know he comes back again But he's trying to he's like Cassidy can I talk to you for a second and Cassidy's just coloring He's like, yeah, man, what's up? He's like, you know Just a really poignant moment where Cassidy is so involved with what he's doing He doesn't realize that Shane's trying to talk You know either confidentially with him or you know trying to reach him But he is just so fucking happy to have coloring books that and Shane finally is like now let the kid let the kid enjoy this shit and he ends up fucking off Um to the to the carnival. I don't know if you like that idea But it's uh, something that we could do just to have that understated moment where Shane's like Fuck i'm really he's i'm really gonna have to leave him here if I decide to go or something like that just a moment of quiet understanding That Cassidy no matter even though it's fucked up here Cassidy still has a happy moment and Shane's gonna let him have that So I don't know something like that. That's what that's what my brain fired on anyways And maybe we should have them move their party Uh, well like they've got a little bonfire in the back. So that way Shane has access to the house to the litter Yeah, that's a great idea. You know, yeah, let's do they could even do like a um Well, I was thinking maybe a barbecue, but they'd have to steal stuff from the barbecue because they haven't made any money up the coke yet Um, yeah, just a bonfire. Fuck it. Yeah Maybe they could know because we still want the reveal of like bodies being put into the hole, right? I was thinking maybe it could be filled in and they could have put the bonfire over it. Um I'm just my brain is working in plot modes. I'm just trying to make I don't know if I want to show anything I don't know if I want to show the bodies putting out there I kind of want the size of the grave to speak for itself. Yeah, that's pretty much what I always wondering. What is in that hole? Yeah, um So and then then we if we put the bonfire on top of the hole Shane is the one who dug the hole and he's going to be like what the fuck was the purpose If they're they already covered it. Oh, then he's obviously going to think it's a dog But you know, they it's already been whatever's been buried has been buried And then they put a fire right on top of it Um, and then maybe even he can he could think something like well, maybe that's where they hid the drugs And then he ends up finding it somewhere else anyway And I think oh go ahead. He knows the drugs are in the bottom of the litter container, right? Um Just I don't I'm trying there's something I got something on the tip of my tongue and I was wondering if to completely They put a definite period in how fucked up these people are Is if he comes home thinking he's gonna have to look for the coke and that shit is literally just sitting on the coffee table Like, you know, that it's it's open. They're all you know geeked out in in the back You know doing their thing or whatever Um, and he's just like well that was fucking easy and he just picks it up and just walks right back out with it Something like that. I don't know. Yeah, there's there's something brewing with a scene like that It's like he's like, how am I going to get it out of the house? Just build up this whole thing. I don't I don't know that might be anticlimactic But build up this whole thing the tension that he's feeling the anxiety. He's like, I got to get this I got to get it out of the house. I got to do all that And at the end of that scene, it's just like well, it's just fucking sitting I don't I don't know. I like scenes like that, but you might not. Um, Let's see here. Yeah, it makes sense to me. I mean Uh them taking the time to put these people are not intelligent. They're high. High is a kite For them to leave it out, uh makes perfect sense. I mean, uh, my only thing is I'm torn between Maybe they have some I'm torn between them dipping into the brick and them still having, uh A leftover from the baggie from the night before Because I almost don't want them to know about the missing coke for a little right away. That's that's a good it could be a thing where um, they're like Oh Hang on So everybody's out in the party, right? Everybody's out back Shane comes in for this is how this the scene just rolled out In my head So everybody's out back. Shane gets home The coke is on the coffee table. He's thinking about grabbing it. He's like I gotta go to the he goes to the bathroom Does something that goes into his room to pack up a few little belongings. He comes back out and hunter Is scooping from the brick and putting it into the baggie from the night before Like, you know, and then maybe the brick's not even there and he thinks he's gonna have to look for it He comes back in and sees hunter putting the coke in the baggie from the night before And hunter just does something like like puts his fingers to his lips And you know, then he rolls that baggie up and he forgets That you know, it's sitting there because he's already geeked out of his mind and he just goes back outside And he's like, hey, we got some left and you know, whatever And uh, and then it's just fucking sitting there and that's and Shane can be like, yeah So they wouldn't realize like you said they wouldn't realize right off that that the coke is gone Um, the only thing the only problem with that is I feel like every one of those people would know exactly how much coke was left in that bag true because um You know I I don't know that anybody would be like You know, it's like, um Because if they're not going to dip into this and there's such fiends for this I don't know man. There were there were numerous times when I found like a couple like, I mean not even Not even up that a register on a scale like a little bit in a pair of pants Like a little bit of h in a pair of pants that I'd forgotten about um, or Even like right in front of that that's also heroin heroin knocks your ass out cocaine wakes your ass up So that yeah, that wouldn't make any sense. And even even with uh when um I was I mean, I've only done cocaine for one evening But with the uh with alcohol even that was like Um, if I didn't I often bought cheap beers so that I could buy more of it, you know And so there'd be plenty more and sometimes I would be like, okay So if I have and I would do the math in my head, you know, there's like, okay, I have like this um, I've got four forties with this black label or gobbles or whatever freaking Piss go piss beer that I have. Um, I can have these I've still got five dollars. I can get three more tomorrow Um, and you know, just and that's just alcohol for an alcoholic let alone cocaine. I think that uh For them to all of a sudden be like, oh, I had no idea we had a whole night's worth of partying yet left in this baggie But maybe the the baggie is just uh I honestly don't Don't know how much would be um A night's worth. I mean, I remember being very disappointed at the How short the effect lasted um Because my dad my biological father, uh, who who Gave it to me in the first place. It was like, you're gonna want more soon. I'm like, no, I'm good And then sure enough within an hour It was it was not like getting stoned or being drunk stuff It's not like you did a line and then you were done for the night It was like this constant thing. So if somebody's doing that all night, I don't know And and somebody who's used to doing it. I don't know how much Could be ingested by these people without them. I would say a line an hour um Would not be or every two hours probably more like an hour a line every hour um but they There would also be, you know Issues with them arguing. I don't know. I don't know if we're working too hard on this one scenario or not but uh Well, hang on a second because I did I did give a measurement And what I say a half a cup of sugar Or did it's a cup of sugar a half a cup? I can't remember. Um by by uh by using Unmeasurement that that Shane would actually know instead of like it looked like to be about a quarter ounce You know, he wouldn't know any of that um, right So I it was a half a cup probably do a search for the word cup A half cup's worth. I mean we could that's That's a lot of coke, but we are talking about four people doing it all night long. Yeah We could say a cup's worth I just I just like the idea of him getting away with it for A few days right And then not noticing because if he takes it right off the table, which I liked the idea of them leaving it out But if he did do that uh They would know that night before he had even left town right It's something happened. He's not around the coke's not around I don't know. I'm still going back to this idea of them refilling the bag And I realized but if if they started off Just looking at junky energy If they started off with an entire cup That's a lot and as long as someone let's say hunter has been coming back and refilling it just a little bit at a time They would never really question How much they've been using it be more like holy shit. We're not going through it near as fast as we thought we were Um I'm gonna go ahead and take a break Hello Hey Sorry, that was my oldest son I only have until about noon today. I got a bunch of boxes. I need to send out and uh errands to run in town Yeah, we don't want you stuck in them Stuck in your office not being able to walk that was that was bullshit That was bullshit had to bring the car around so I could Uh ease on down to the hood and then slide off the hood. That was uh, that was some shit Anyways, uh But we also I mean like you said it was six hours Yeah, even after the stream we talked for another like two two and a half Talking about all kinds of crap checking all the boxes. Oh, yeah Fuck off I thought I had written a date down because I wanted to make sure we kept the date like when we started this I guess all we would have to do is look at your first go back to the stream. Yeah, that's all we got to do Hang on. I'll check right now. I mean, I think this is our third week July 30th It was part one. Okay. So 16 days. We've been working on this two and a half about two and a half weeks Yeah, I still think we can if we keep at this rate. We could probably be done before Oh, it's august before before summer is over See that being a problem. So Big is that hawks or is it like when you're spinning is it is it hawks or is it hawk? Like h w or h awk It's uh It's h o c k. I believe It might be a hawk. I don't know No, it's where wait I guess it says they're both acceptable That's weird Okay, it I would sense it It seems like the okay here. Here's a here's a dilemma because Everyone pointed out in one of my books that uh It's you have another think coming because the Judas Priest But the origin of it is you have another thing coming Uh Not think it's like 1860 or something like that is the first time it's used and if you have another thing coming Uh, then Judas Priest made it popular with you have another think coming. Um, no thing Judas Priest is another thing coming. Okay. Yeah, I got it backward. All right. Um, anyway, so that but people are saying I got it wrong when I use the original version and not Judas Priest version Um, so here hawk as in, you know, the bird hawk makes more sense because it literally means Like how they feed their their young, you know vomiting up Regurgitating to feed to get but hawk Hlck is how I've seen it So, I don't know whatever whatever you want to do or we can rewrite that sentence completely just so um Yeah, it's a first documented in the 15th century for hawking with a u instead of a w up For hawking up of blood We could just say Travis bits of lugi over the deck railing. That's fine. That's fine. Hey bookable. How you doing? I'm deleting Uh All this stuff I have in here for later seen because it's no longer needed It's just a build up. Hold on. Hold on. I think I thought there was something in there that I wanted to use eventually Okay Wasn't he gonna go to get baking soda? Wasn't he going off to get baking soda? Yeah, that's uh, that's the section that I uh wrote called posted bills Is when uh, he's already gone out and uh Shane goes out after him. See he's got done Uh digging the hole. He's gone and taken a shower. He might have a concussion uh because Trab hits him I thought I thought that that the reason why Shane couldn't follow and this time was because Shane was busy digging the hole and then Cassidy Was going off that happened at the same time, but then Cassidy got Got caught again and has been hiding out in the field So all this time has passed and Shane's like hey where's cassidy like I think rita has the discussion with him Um, and so he goes out looking for him and that's when he finds the flyer Okay, so what about uh because I liked some of this stuff and I I didn't know so Like quite it's a flea and quick is one too when he's talking about you know being Yeah, like he's not gonna get caught I like I like this whole section. So whatever you can make work make work, but uh And that's why I put it down here because I didn't want to completely get rid of it And once again, it was good. It was gonna end up going into my cannibal file. So All right. Well, we'll we'll leave I guess we'll just leave this until I get to that point and see if Okay, he pulls some of this and then if not I'll just get rid of what we don't right How far down is it? Where they talk about bruce being dead I do I haven't had that yet. It was just an illusion with the digging of the hole right Because there's there's only the only thing I've really done is uh dog turd and him uh, Shane Hang on See, I don't even remember I'll get it. Okay. I'll get it in here. I just killed all this uh Yeah, so Okay, the reason why I did that I want I don't want anybody to be think I thought it'd be cooler. Nobody was thinking about the dog at all and then um, maybe, um Uh, I haven't read down yet. So I don't know but um Shane's out there digging a hole. He's just digging a hole like you would dig a hole Um, you know planning another tree. I also mentioned that, you know Um You'll hit the roots and that'll kill the tree kill the tree and I kill you my daddy's daddy planted planted that tree okay, so, um So maybe this house has been in this trash family for a long time at least at least the property Um, yeah, yeah Yeah, yeah, that's true. Um, and then so uh, and So when he does say okay, I'm done digging the hole Again, I haven't read what you had. This is just what's in my head right now I'm hey. I'm done digging a hole Uncle trap comes out and he's like I need much to forget that and finally he's just like well, what's it for he's like and then we find out Very nonchalantly like uncle trap just doesn't care. It's like Bruce is dead and maybe even points at a tarp that Shane didn't see before and I I think without giving any kind of clue that would have harder um That this dog is dead, you know, because it just it comes immediately And then he can war with whether or not he's going to tell Shane or let not Shane Cassidy or let I mean, there's all different that kind of things. We can do that the only, um All that works, but there is uh, let's see here um Because uh the scene ends with trav travis hitting him And I kind of allude to a concussion Having that that like he hit him so hard He's just kind of out of it to the point where he even gets into the shower and forgets to take his clothes off um Wow, it's quite it's quite a concussion. Yeah, um You know trying to say how hard he hit him without actually saying how hard he hit him kind of deal but uh Not married to any of it, but it's quite a bit. So I'm trying to find the Anyways, I'll I'll let you go through it. Keep what you keep what you want, but that there's a considerable amount of um him kind of stumbling out of the the grave and uh Trying to find the instigating thing why he hits him. Oh, yeah, he um, he's asking for water While he's digging the hole because he's tired And uh That's when he hits him That I don't realize I've been slap punch lay drop whatever it might be until I'm on My side in the pile of freshly dug earth and someone's blowing a whistle in one of my ears Do you want to growl like a dog? I'm a treat you ass like a dog No, the reason he he's growling is because his throat's so fucking parched That's how it comes out. Hey, I like I don't think I think book will just came in and said hi Happy to be a help Alec. I'm glad people are getting something out of this Do we want Shane to offer? Cassidy come with him to the carnival or just Just him decide to go and leave him their coloring Um Morning JB No, I don't think we should offer maybe something like uh I'd offer but I They wouldn't let him something maybe Yeah, they'd notice that both of them were gone They probably wouldn't notice if it was just Shane If they even pay attention at all that night anyways Yeah, all the damn references I want to use are from 90 or Or on I don't remember shit from my early childhood obviously Dude, did you see my Did I did I share with you the cover of the Book I got coming out in february. We just did a cover reveal. No, but uh, I saw it on twitter You didn't show it to me, but I did see it very very good Yeah, we like it You've been banned. What are you talking about lazy? It isn't Yeah, it won't It they usually don't show up on the subscriber page. They uh That's why I post the vods. You mean you saying you didn't get a notification Or did I accidentally put this shit in? No, it's set to public. I have no idea But other than notifications, it's not going to show up in the in my In my list of videos Because uh, then that like I said, that's why that's why I upload the vods So that they show up in the list of videos It's just all the others did Huh, all right. Well, all I know is people's always ask me, where's the live at? Where's the live at? So I started doing the vods All right I got to get up I got to move around. Sorry y'all. I know shad's dark, but I got to go too so Game over that eating No, no, no, no When I get back, we'll probably I don't think I'm gonna write anymore Uh, I basically just went through the paces of this scene You know, I'll let you add and subtract and all that stuff I'm gonna come back. We can talk. I don't think I'm gonna do any more writing But anyways, um, I'll be back in like 10 minutes or so Okay Sorry Is this the staring? I wasn't sure if you could hear me or not. Anyways, Oh, good Let's solve the exclamation points lazy If you write tom hanks and he likes your letter, he'll send you a typewriter And hurt that one. Oh, yeah, dean coons responds to all of his mail eventually Keelan Patrick Burke has Several stories about him because every time I picked on dean on twitter Here came uh kpb to be like, hey, he's a good guy. I'm like Granted, it doesn't mean his books are any good anymore Hey, Lee. Oh, yeah, he's uh, he's booking right along I got about 13 minutes and I gotta go. Is there anything you want to talk about before? We know I didn't get nearly as much done as I wanted to I got I had a hard time focusing keep you staying focused today Sorry, I know probably It probably less than a thousand words, but I got another chapter at least the foundation for it down I don't know what I'm gonna call it I called it colorful. I called it no go and then I was like, no, we're not going yet. So Change it to colorful shadows because I did the coloring books and all that stuff You'll see unless the ferrets are running over the keyboard No, he's working. I'm watching him work. I'm trying to keep up with what he's doing to So we're on the same page Literally and figuratively anyways, all right y'all uh Hang on Basically the mc's bestie comes back from a month long trip, but she's different. Y'all aren't sickly Anyone when anyone look inside her mouth she gargles bottle after bottle of milk wash Interesting anyways, uh I'm gonna go ahead and go guys Thanks for hanging out with us. It'll be probably a longer session tomorrow. I just got way too much shit to do today My mind isn't all here anyways uh, so Thanks for joining us We'll see you tomorrow 9 a.m. Oh before I go chat, uh, what do you think about doing monday through friday? And then taking the weekends off. Yeah Yeah, I'm pretty recharged after after two days So that'll also give me time to work on Videos on the weekend for the week coming Anywho, uh, so yeah tomorrow morning 9 a.m. Monday through friday from here on out If anything pops up, I'll put stuff on either the community page or the discord But other than that, uh Try to catch you all tomorrow. All right. Uh, bye king. See y'all later. But until next time I'll hail the chair. See you guys