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La Espero

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Published on Sep 22, 2008

Mi decidis refari chi tiun videon, pro ambauh mi k aliuloj vidas multajhojn, kioj povas korektighi. For those interested in the translation, here are the major differences from the translation found on Wikipedia or some other popular source:
1) "that eternally wages war" substitutes "eternally waging war"; in English, the latter may be mistaken to mean that the thing promising sacred harmony is eternally waging war against the world
2) "gather" does not precede "peaceful warriors"; even though this may detract from the poetry Esperanto allows, "gather" could be mistaken to be in the imperative tense in English
3) "once-" is added to "divided"
4) "people" has a plural form
5) I see no problem in "becomes effective."
Apart from these, I have either made minor changes for mere poetic effect, as befits an anthem -- "will" becomes "shall" -- or decided to use Wikipedia's translation; I like and prefer "Knocked apart by the sacred love".

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