 All righty, let's watch this whole thing new version with sound Just quickly for sound. So I want to listen to this again here That's cool. I love this Funny enough, I will make this second solo a bit longer Maybe till like 124 So it doesn't feel so it feels kind of the same length almost give it is a little bit of a longer thing till Yeah, 125 126 She could be cool because then you can still have you know stuff happening in the background here for Silhouetteing the fang of the fangs of the spikes here That's cool But I think the sound is a bit too late given this I like when this starts, but I think the sound effects are coming in a bit late That's cool Okay, it would be really cool since you're adding sounds To feel feel to hear You know bone metal all that good stuff here Hitting and a good sound here And then it would be kind of need to hear like a I know it's they're broken. He wouldn't probably have that huge sound but something here to kind of have that broken And then explosion at the end This just seems a bit subarmy this cool effect that's big at the end But then it feels like you should the sound should be there and Then I would just make this longer I would have this till the very end. So this would be Fire would just be a bigger thing. So Maybe at the end there could be some yellow here, I mean I have color Night as well. Oh, that's the wrong color. I can't even pick the right color. So you would have a little you know parts of flames here With maybe some some red sprinkled in And then some you know dispersing things here and then Bigger clouds So whatever your explosion was starts to kind of get smaller and reveal and we'll leave this About this color. This is my critique color. So it's not revealing pockets of the shopper While there's still some stuff left. I think that could be really cool Because again, if you have this here, it would also wet the wing really nicely That's just for effects and and the sound Now let me go back here. I Think the dragon is overall really cool. There's just some moments where in the second shot, especially the up and downs are a bit much You can go potentially stronger with the fold And then into this you got track, I think we could push. Oh, that's weird. We got a double frame here. I Have a couple double frames watch out for your camera. There's something where I see effects continuing, but the rest is frozen here Actually here as well. I have a 20 frame 20 to 21. Let me just go up here so you can see What I'm doing here. Watch out. What's going on? This could be your render Something with the export and you can see here, but this is strange because the effect actually continues Oh here as well Okay, so just gonna double check what you have here But I was gonna say it's push the drag on this just a bit more Even in this just cheating a silhouette. This seems nice And we can see anything that's okay Come through so when you do this and you come up and it starts to lock I would kind of overshoot those tips a bit and then when it goes down how kick they can drag a little bit Maybe you can lower those wings a tiny bit And then it can come back up here the way you have it with the counter on that tip here Same thing here now that I go back down I would can exaggerate the tips if they just give it a bit of a looseness in these top ones Same thing here. It's not too bad. I would still probably break these a bit more So in that frame maybe a bit more maybe already a bit more on that tip, but generally the shapes are cool That's cool here that feels a bit That drop feels a bit much I would go maybe That line maybe here feels like it's a bit of a sharp drop there Even this here this down. What's going down here? I feel like the whole body, huh? I would keep this up and just have mirror ease out of that hang time the apex and then keep dropping Right now the body doesn't drop But it would because the wing is not there yet to provide that support So until the wings are around here to here ish it would still drop and then comes back up So switch out for that Should probably go into all of these, huh? That seems pretty good here And I like how if you continue on that's cool Oh It wasn't this I think it was a third shot. Let me see Are we going through? Camera no, but you're very close Here I think this is a bit much. I'll probably cheat this have that first frame. Whoa And that is me here the first frame with that and the horn kind of here can ease into this It doesn't pop so much and then somehow cheat that to be out here We still see more of the head and cheat that wing I think maybe it's a bit much there because that's kind of it felt like a big pop there That's cool. It's I'm funky here. Hold on Keeps dropping. Well, how many could Goes down as into a glide and does an adjustment Adjustments up. I think that's what I'm reacting to that you're going up with the drag, right? But then you stop And almost hold for a little bit and then you go down and I would just continue with The tip and you have this bam here bam next frame straighten if not already overshoot with the force I know we're not going down yet with the wings So the tip wouldn't be dragging but it could be have a little bit of a looseness and again We've got double frames here besides the effects are not And then that way would have more of a drag here already This is the one that felt strange This I think we are when it happens. I think is right They're low enough to propel the character up, but I think that's just too much We're translating too much here and then that drop is too much and watch this again You're stopping that drop when we hear which is too soon. It would happen more around the here here is Zone so let's see here Yeah, it just seems too much up and down And then let me just see there's something where your path kind of changes was you're going in here That's in the camera. There's a slight feeling of a bit of a sharp down through here in place in real time. Let me see Yeah, there's something that's sharp. It might just be how quickly this neck shoots forward, but it also could be part of the shake There's just something that doesn't quite feel like this is going this way But this is still a force that goes this way. So it's not I mean I know it seems heavier than this especially with I don't know like to me feels like there's enough push this way To slow this guy down so that wherever it hits Maybe this section goes forward and that's what makes also the head shoot forward Maybe the hips go forward. There's an impact here That's gonna push this a bit more like head here But the chest pushed because of the chopper pushing this way and then the counter Moment of the dragon is going to start pushing it down. I feel like that The chopper going up this way and then bam going down this way over one frame Even though it has a little bit of the camera, but that just feels this makes the chopper too light I mean you can go picking go because of that impact it will crack here and then this Will go up here and this will be cracking here and this will be raking, but this could be something Cool, that's cool though The only thing I still wish that we go this is super picky But for this dragon to go a bit longer like you know eight ten frames longer this way and then this way We're already going this way not it just feels strange Cut wise because we're going so strongly this way and then we go down this way. It's we kind of a neater Continuation of that momentum going this way Watch out there's something funky in the body here you're doing this and then Slowing it down This is what I'm reacting to it feels like it's dropping Bam and then it just doesn't drop anymore, but the flap hasn't happened Yeah, it's still it would still be in a bit of a free fall and that neck was down Goes back a bit sharply, but it's it's a thing. It's the fact that the body just stops It hovers it falls and then suddenly hovers which doesn't quite feel Motivated by the wings there and feel free to be a bit more complex in that tail. I see I think this was a bit much if we can leave that a bit so you can see a bit more and then get into this That's cool all of that And it feels like when you get up here we can end it something a bit more complex So it's not just down down here all the time Kind of neat and I apologize for my dog yapping in the back. He's a dog. That's how it's what he does Think that's it. Let me look at the chopper otherwise That one comes in to do that's cool The kind of background was right. Hold on I Think that's okay. I think I had something where it would have been cool to be here so we can still see it I mean you could still potentially cheat it. I don't it's not it's not a deal-breaker It's not like a shock killer or anything But it could be something where this guy actually already here and then by the time we're up here towards the end We still have the chopper here or here So it's still visible like the threat is still there or something again. I don't think it's a shock killer That is that all right. It's very very cool. Thanks All right, there's an email you can sign up you can start whenever you want you can submit whatever you want You get 16 submissions either way a like and subscribe would be awesome. All right. Thank you