 All right, so check this out and it looks very cool. It's so much better Great changes only two sections that I would change tweak And there's some areas timing wise are a bit fast, but then again, let's see how it is splined So that's all cool. I like all that. I'm not super sure about this Starts to get very very broken You start off almost through here and they just kind of bring down the rest I'm not sure acting wise what that means like what is he doing here and it was just slightly broken I'll kind of tweak that a bit. This is the thing. That's kind of weird. It's just this big bend Massive twist over and it's like he really needs to look here and his door is huge I mean in a way you just have to show I would stay in something like this where You know, he's slightly hunched over and he turns his head even if it's just profile Just like a slight look and it could be instead of this Quick look as if like like zombie arms come through and he's being attacked and I don't know what's going on here I would make it just a slower more Deliverance, he doesn't know what to do. Maybe looks at the door. Maybe I should just leave then he gets back to it But now he's really just I can almost take the jaw open like what's going on and again like snakes come in Or I know what's going on. So I would keep it more in the realm of Up here and just kind of turn over maybe lower the arms at that point Just profile a bit more so you can see you know, I'm taking you just castle here Right over there. It's just what it feels like Then that too feels more like a home It's a bit big But I think once you are in this section and then you go to this it'll feel a bit better You might even reduce that a bit more and watch out that pose between those arms just a big move You know for someone that's really contemplating things potentially life or death or you know some ailment of someone He knows it just feels a bit big That's cool though, but again It's like someone else dude take down your hat. Oh, yeah, sorry. Sorry. Sorry. It's fast but again Get to spline and then you know, we can really dive into proper time He's into now. It's just right now in the current step blocking. It's just too fast because like it's just really rushing to take that off That could be neat kind of cartoony. I like that could work again a tiny bit fast, but I think it should be okay Works really nicely and I like that. He takes down the hat. That's all cool and Then that's cool. I like this like this. I like this and then I'm confused Just like before like why does he look? Why is he looking his hands? There's nothing that tells us Anything about that moment and then it's only one hand on there Like I don't understand what's going on then this it's very confusing. I would really just go from here Then he puts the hat down. He might even look down for that Then I like kind of sheepish look back up. So you go from that to that With the other hand coming in right away to get into this pose and again Boom This just feels like he's wants to smack his head. So it would just be very very slow a slow transition into this So in your step blocking really really start looking into proper ease in the now It's what you want to convey, you know, is he in a rush? Is he freaked out here? Is he freaked out here? It's like oh, I saw a dead rat or something Oh, I need to quickly take my hat down or or boom I want to hit my head so many moments that Acting wise just I don't think that's what you intended to do unless you did and then I would think that's kind of weird Not that you're weird, but the choice. Why would you want to bang his head? I don't understand on this end. So that to me is weird, but I think it's just the nature of step mode that you are Transitioning between those oppositions and you just need more breakdowns that you haven't put in yet That's my assumption. That's what I'm guessing Let me know if not if I'm totally wrong totally off totally rude. Let me know Other than that, it's a great great update. It's definitely so much better than before and maybe as a side note Keep that cross in there. Yeah, no That's exactly where he is. I mean, we still get it, but maybe I know I'm rambling that is it All right, there's an email you can sign up you can start whenever you want you can submit whatever you want You get 16 submissions either way like and subscribe would be awesome. All right. Thank you