 All right, there's a new version with sounds play this you have no idea what it's like to be a card See these horrors Do nothing you have no idea what it's like to be a card All right, let's bring this all the way down. I like this a lot. This is definitely your best version Let me just bring my video. Just a bit or that's the friend that we have. I Think this is all very cool. I like I just like How you have just a slight look over there Into this look up Into the breakdown there. I think that's great. I think there's a bit more we can do with the body More about that later This I would just bring his soapy keep up bring his head More like that just a little bit over so you don't have a tangent over this over Right there If you want to have him in there, I'm gonna move like this You will probably have a dart and dart down just a few more darts a little bit of breathing And then that's it like something super simple something simple Since he's you know fully there. He's not fully over the shoulder and blurred out and dark So a little bit more keep alive will be good So if you look at him, it's overall for just look at how his demeanor is head and body wise That's great See when I look at this it is a lot of women here, and I think you can go and Bring him just a bit further over Then when he goes up He goes up into that just it's such a big head move And I look at this line here, and it's just it's it's fairly. Let me just turn on it's getting here It's pretty You know, it's pretty static and how nothing really is moving Especially here and then at the end it's like the big collapse, but I'm seeing just everything in here but If you look at this there's nothing In here, so I would I would play definitely with a little bit more tension in the shoulders And he goes up here a bit tighter and then That exhale shoulders drop to this and he lean forward Just the whole body goes forward a bit not huge You don't want his head to be you know from here to here, but just a bit more so that the end He would be probably more around here this here and this over there And then watch out at the end here Just this I like it, but it's there's a slight feeling of up Horses just a bit too archy Now that's super subjective. I don't think I don't think it breaks the shot I don't think it's a shock killer. It just ever so slightly for me just a bit too Overanimated with that big broad arc With with that jaw there just ever so slightly So it would be Horrors like horrors and then down a bit less like that. It's a bit straight of a just like arc I think it's just a bit too broad a little bit just a tiny bit Question is though, this is still in step mode and you're asking for some polished stuff Um, is that the style you want to go for a bit more steppy? You know in twos type of things or you want to spline this out Because as a now I like that it'll head shake Here you hear the sound it says we're a coward. It's a bit of an energy bump So in coward I would have that just that nose if you track his nose he goes over and that's it We are coward. I would have a little bit of a head accent and then watch out Here he moves over And then he just stops there Just on that turn because it's kind of like, huh Huh, we're gonna over and back. It's been over shooting back Yeah, and then just that just has that too much of a arc There's not too much time. I was wondering if I've watched this here. I Think since we don't have too much time and I love how he stares and Then it's kind of does this eyebrows first and break down. I would try a version where here Bringing these eyelids up higher. So this one a little bit more and this one definitely more So it's a bit more open like this. This seems, you know more open in this one, but really bring up The white before he closes this so I will bring This guy just a bit higher and this one even more just like this moment of I'm just slightly Missing it all subjective but slightly missing that intense horse there Because he says that horse and it's almost too tired and Slightly cross-eyed looking in different directions. So I would stabilize those eyes I would even hear why in those eyelids the upper ones and after this Really widened that Just to see how that feels and then you can go back into that Plus the extra bot animation And I think I'm scrubbing here It feels like coward you could stay within This it's almost like he's He's tense. He's embarrassed. He's just it's just so much anguish here That it's like the shape will be this between these two and Not so wide. I know he has an exhale Even it could be a bit closer, but to me I feel like coward would have more tension. So it's more between these two shapes versus this wide from here to here and Hate to constantly tone things down, but This into a close. I think that This to out the corners is a bit too much He's really like it really looks like we want to emphasize the breathing and I would tone this now like 20% and There's a lot of movement through there With a closing but I'm hearing I get here some breathing where I will keep the mouth open Especially through here, especially would have some more open mouth like the last inhale to Into this It's almost like he wants to say he wants to say like the mouth opens a bit He inhales he has to let it out and that's why he opens up here And I would wait with the corners Into this by like two frames for polish That Exhale will be a bit sharper So you would hold this a bit longer again like two three frames and then close that the mouth shapes like the the the extremes here just a bit like literally just a frame or two and Not sure you need to close the mouth here do nothing Was it do is here so here it's okay But I think right there. I would still keep that mouth open I think the opening of the eyes here is a bit fast Right through there. I would give this two more frames two or three more frames It's kind of a little bit of a slower opening. It just seems very active and it's kind of almost too too clear headed I feel like this would be more like a slower opening a sad opening Yeah, and that's not the biggest thing really would be on that head drop at the end to Bring him forward lean forward a bit more maybe tilt the head down a bit more But that's kind of that some broader notes and some polishy notes. All right. Thanks All right, there's an email you can sign up You can start whenever you want you can submit whatever you want to get 16 submissions either way a like and subscribe would be awesome All right. Thank you