 Dundead booped it should be good to go and should be live here any moment So hello guys, hope you all are doing well And hope you all having a lovely day, and I'm just gonna sit here and stall and fart around for a moment while we wait for it to go live Yeah, sounds good to me Yep, baby. Huh? Nope Maybe Went from a 10 second delay to a 30 second delay. I know it's like a five minute delay Next I'm gonna have a beard and a baby Cool All right, sweet. I've better changed that before it's indefinite loop of weirdness So we're live. Hi everyone. How's it going today? We're doing our video critiques live Or we check out your videos to make sure you leave us the titles of your videos in the comments You can't post links and don't just say my channel say The title of the video so we can actually know what video you want us to check out because more times than not when we Just pick one at random. We don't pick a video that you want us to watch so anyways We have Jordan with us today as always so I let him say hi and stuff while we Fiddle around the comments Well do what in the comments? Never heard of fiddle before. It's a music. Yeah Yeah, sure. Yeah. Hi. Yes. My name is a George Wilde and hello and welcome to another week. Oh critiquing Also, I forgot to mention Let us know if you couldn't hear both of us. Okay, because I did check I did check real quick and we sound fine But you know how that got it did but it changes Yeah, it's published it then you can't hear Jordan anymore. You can't hear me or I'm peeking the whole time or Whatever so anyways, Jordan has people picked out for us Yes, so I shall send you the link now This is jump gaming and it is shout-out episode 3 black ops 2 Gameplay there's that and before we get started guys I'm gonna put this in the description so you guys can check it out as well and Watch it with us Yes, and there we are if you refresh it should be there now. Yay All right, so let's go ahead and check this out In this video, it's gonna be this community series So first off your mic sounds a little bit distant And you sound ill Unfortunately, that's commitment though. It's tough to make a video on days that you're sick or not feeling good There before it's asthma. Yeah, I have asthma One thing though like it's okay to be sick and stuff and Make content because I just kind of shows your dedication stuff But what I've tried to do like I get really bad allergies occasionally I'll get like really bad sniffles and stuff and I will mute the areas that I like Like in the microphone, so you don't hear that So it's not it's okay to be sick and do your commentary But like in the beginning in the first three seconds, you just like hack to cough and you could have muted that and said sorry guys I'm still I'm still sick. I've asthma, you know, it's not necessarily Necessary for it to be there You agree I do agree someone who suffers with asthma myself There are some videos I've done where I've had to like cut it every now and then be like Yeah, anyway, so Yeah, asthma is asthma is not fun especially When you're breathing everything you take it easy and stuff because otherwise you don't want to be getting worse throughout the video Yeah, because otherwise you can't hide that No, you are recording in 1080 Yeah, you do seem to have the energy throughout it even with asthma you're still Rolling up the words the whole time um Now that's for your actual like overall quality like I said say you do sound distant from the mic it sounds like You might be like playing on the Xbox and you're recording on the microphone That's like at your TV like maybe recording on the connect even or something, you know It doesn't sound like you have a microphone right up close on you So if you could do that that would increase your quality like seven-fold It's right now. It's kind of hard to understand what you're saying Yeah Probably just like in the intro you were very quick to be like hi miss. So what we're gonna do today is I don't know No, I didn't quite catch what you what you said So maybe slow down a little bit It's okay to be excited and have the energy and just you know, just Have fun with it But you need to make sure that people can understand you and one of the things with that is When you're at a far away distance and you're like echoing throughout the room it all blends together So you really have to enunciate and make sure people understand what you say on Microphone situation like that. So whether or not that means sit closer to it or bring the mic closer to you or however You're recording it. I'd recommend doing that and then you can definitely improve Yeah And I'll just check out your channel your channel is actually pretty cool. I mean you got the freedom logo there It's very nicely laid out you've got all your links there as well, which is very good So you can get to your Twitter and stuffs So if you need to find you that you're twisting you got Google plus Instagram freedom and You can get apparently you have a 5% off as well on something that's pretty cool now back to the video you Don't have any tags on your video, which I shouldn't need to explain the Neediness of tags, but there's none there afterwards that tried to take me to wave ology episode 3 Workout brush session crown product adding product aftermath shout out That was the next video that popped up after you So I mean when you start tagging and start targeting your videos You're gonna actually be able to search you're gonna have better results after that And I won't need to watch this video whatever it is no clue, but Looks like something about here This is what it was referring to me So I don't know if this is you or not if it is nice tats and it looks like you work out, but I Don't think that's you Anyways, let's go ahead and check out the next channel Okay, so as you can probably tell I've got a bit of it In my voice as well, but unfortunately we're live so we can't really edit that out That one were you with me on that live stream that I got the allergy attack? Uh, I don't know. Oh, man. I was like I was sniffling and sneezing everywhere and Pardon my motorcycle Either that or jack's just gone a steroid influence All right, so next we're watching don't drink and drive gta V online funny gaming moments gta 5 come on. I was just reading what I was saying. I'm sorry So once I get off post that leak in here so you guys can watch it with us If you guys have any questions in specific to even if it's not regarding your channel We'd love to chat and get off topic. We're really good at that. That's what I'm currently doing Oh, yeah Yeah What's the what's the topic? Uh, somebody was asking um, tennessee gaming was asking, um, would we consider ourselves as professional youtubers? And I said not really. I mean But we I know how to act professional Oh, yeah, I can I can words good. Yeah, but um, But the point is uh, he was saying so why do you have the authority to give Video critiques and we said well because we've been doing it a couple more years and most people Who we critique have been doing it so we feel we can give them some advice Yeah, I mean we're not You know, I'm sure we're not the most qualified people in the whole wide world But we have been doing content or I've been doing contents and it's like 2009. I was a filmmaker before that. I have a bachelor's degree I'm certified in social media. I'm certified youtube audience growth and blah blah blah blah blah And uh, jordan's been in college for audio engineering and currently you're in there for what's the actual degree Film and television. So, I mean even if we aren't, you know, youtube celebrities, it doesn't mean that we don't know how to make good content so Well, well Unless it's just me sat in a chair eating a pumpkin But uh, people would watch there's a And that's Halloween after all. Yep. So anyways, let's go ahead and check this out Do you like this game do would you would you get it? What Do you like this game? Do you would you would you get it? Do you like this game? Would you get it? GTA 5 see see see talking about willis For cheap alligator But not for full price Right straight away. Oh, you suck so bad. I love it. I came to pick you up So one thing That I kind of Was the fact that you started out with like a joke right out of the get-go but Normally the way that I like to set it up is Start out with like a joke or something funny that engages your audience and then cut to the introduction Where you welcome your viewers to the video and you set them up for what they're about to see So I I like how you did that and you don't necessarily need to do that and cut to a dubstep intro But you know, you can cut to the next clip like hey, what's up guys? They were playing uh gta 5 and don't drink and drive blah blah blah today I have so-and-so with me and we're gonna be doing this and then cut to the actual thing So that way you're involving the audience and you're building that connection with them because uh in the end community is kind of everything Yeah, I heard you Yeah I do like a good joke But the first answer you guys have so far and like the banter between two so you two are obviously friends You're not just like your standard two friends who met online due to youtube and no have no idea who each other are Which you which we do see a lot Not in this show, but I've seen it in loads of videos in the past And you can definitely tell there's a like a bit of awkwardness where we're not they're not quite sure what joke works And if it's gonna be too offensive and all this Hey, stop it. But then you get And you got these two who are just like hi, so I'm gonna kill my friend Um audio quality is good It can it can improve but it's still good. I mean for what you have right now. I think it's fantastic All right. Oh Just like that there was Michael Jackson music And But it was just for about a second, so I'm not sure if that's fair use But even then But even then it's still not a good idea I mean last week we viewed a channel who did a Battlefront Star Wars And they had copyright free music, but it was themed around Star Wars So it used the same it's it used the same Like sounds and like the same tones everything it just wasn't Star Wars and we knew straight away what it was meant to be So there's plenty of that out there. There's an audience from that. So which is hilarious Oh, so this is what he means by don't drink and drive Skipping ahead a little bit and this dude like stumbled around the The street with the Nikolo says sexy jordan or smelly mike That's me As for like the overall quality I I think it's good and like jordan said you can definitely see that camaraderie there I'd say just set up Set up your overall like branding throughout And you can you do have an outro slate, which is nice You have your subscribed previous video and stuff like that, but Involve the viewer just a little bit more than thanks for watching at the end Because like something I've started to learn recently is that the community just really really Matters and everything that you do as far as support as far as sharing your videos as far as just Engaging with people in the comments You know you could simply just ask a question and you're going to get doubled the amount of comments that you get because if I just Watched it right now that was enjoyable. Okay, cool. Go to the next video But if you ask a question, I'm going to be more tempted to go and leave a comment because I want to answer what you asked me so Little things like that just to give your viewers some thought And make sure that they know that you are paying attention to that they're watching the video So like I said in the intro you could have that funny clip and then cut like actually Acknowledge the people watching right now like this is the only acknowledgement is at the end where it says thanks for watching So I think that could be a huge improvement for your channel and that would help growth happen a lot quicker too Yeah Because see you are in here. You're responding to comments. That's nice and stuff like that but For a thousand subscribers and only having two comments. You should be you know, let's try to get that up to like 2030 maybe 50 comments So just to acknowledge your viewers a little bit more ask questions And try to get that community going so you could start getting more growth there Do you have anything to add or That's pretty much no Yeah, I think you pretty much nailed that on the head. Um, as far as the channel name, um Is it elite? Elite elite life elite life too. Yeah Yeah Oh, man, yeah elite life too Um, as far as because when I first found the channel when I was gonna link I was gonna link you to it. I couldn't read the name. So I just kind of went there you go mike So um now that I see it spelled out I can see it But you know, you've been in that intro there when you're saying hey, what's up guys? This is elite life too Uh welcome here if that's your branding make sure it's known Yeah Because definitely when you first start out people are going to be looking at your the way it's written on when on your suggested videos kind of thing So when people are going a lightly for And then they click on your channel and they go oh elite life And that is yeah, I think the issue there is it's in all caps So there's no separation So it's all running together like it could be a lead telly fat But like on the channel banner where it's lower cased and then you can actually see the difference in the letters It stands out a little bit more so but That might be something to consider maybe lower casing some stuff and separating it Um inferno music is wanting to us to check out a music channel um We would happily check out a music channel But I think for the sake of content if you had a like a music video like an actual video instead of just like um Just a track with a with music playing just because so we can actually help you improve I think there's still room to talk about. I mean not be able to go super in depth, but I mean, yeah, we could talk more business instead of more quality and content and stuff I mean, yeah, you can do I was just saying um as far as video critiquing and everything because I've just clicked on the channel and it's uh house music and All this a lot So um, yeah, let's let's briefly take a look at it. So we can kind of It's like we do like checking out different genres and stuff instead of always doing gaming videos. So Yeah, I've saved us more to talk about Oh, I I got it. Oh, I was checking out the house Fair run song So house music let's just get an idea of how it sounds This is more of my thing music wise. Yeah So first and foremost I actually like the video animation of it. Yeah, I do stereotypical waveform template that you see Yeah I like the particle use and I like how the waveforms kind of have their own motion to it That you know, the normal just up and down like you normally see on these type of videos Yeah And the background is kind of like a nice setting for The video so like jordan said, you know, you could always do more with like music videos But if you're just trying to showcase your content on here, I think you're doing a good job on that He says uh, check the second one because it's not copyright. Oh, this is copyright No When you say the second one, do you mean odd mob ruins? Sure, I'll just watch it really quiet So that being said If you are just like remixing copyrighted music and stuff like that I think that's it can only take your channel so far If you really want to go the next step and go further Work on wealthy free stuff and that way you can work with other creators and get your name out there more You can go do it like a top youtuber and say hey, you need music everybody needs music use my stuff all you need to do give me a credit You know that Super easy to do if you're good at music and good at content creating There's so much you could do if you're good at music Yes No, you can I'm playing for the you know, I'm currently working with uh, ken waters He's a producer that creates all of his own music And I use all of his music only his music in the vlogs and on the freedom videos that I make I use that in the background And when people ask me they're like, hey, who made or what's the song title? It's like, it's my music No one can have it wait for me You know, it's my music for my videos and it makes me unique And that's the cool thing about working with actual people that have talent in the music industry Injusty industry wow Yeah, definitely just be careful with the copyrighted stuff because if you start doing that and people are gonna frown away from your channel If it's royalty free Then I think it will grow a lot more in the community Whereas copyrighted stuff is just fun to listen to Yeah So I was checking out the tags of the odd mob ruin song And I see that the tags you're using like makeup tutorial music And uh Suicide sheep and all this lot. Okay. Um I can see what you're trying to do. I mean, it's a very it's a cheaty way of saying Tagging so you can get your suggested videos in other forms of media So your videos can be seen part of my motorcycle Jack on steroids, but um It's it's just usually not a good idea to have like makeup tutorial when it's a music video because Can you imagine if it was the only one you had and then you someone tried to find your music And they just couldn't find it for their life So I think he's saying this is free music for makeup tutorials creators Maybe maybe this is specifically what he saw when he created it. He's like this is makeup music So Your tags, that's a case. Yeah. Yeah, if that's the case, you can put that in the description saying this could be used for Such an session. Yeah, your tags need to directly reflect what your video is about Like, you know, if you're a gamer and you put PewDiePie, that's false advertisement Yeah, if you're you YouTube get a bit funny about that. Yeah, that breaks their terms of service if you're Considering your videos are spammed and that's a really hippie Ground that you can get your channel deleted videos deleted blah blah blah for this information. So There's a lot of things you need to watch out for so That that's nothing like too bad there, but That's what said. Yeah um As far as music production since I'm more Educated in this side of things. Uh, I'm noticing that there's not much bass in your tracks You especially with them being house music and stuff like that bass But yeah You need to have a bit more bass in your in your tracks So just like maybe when you're doing the panning make sure the bass is staying in the middle If you know what I'm talking about Uh, the bass is staying in the middle then you pan the um stereo to left and right So the bass is right in the middle But apart from that And back to the business side of things definitely consider getting a website if your whole Entire like channel is around music and your talent You could get a website to kind of build that portfolio and that way you can have like a hire me tab you can have Submission forms whatever you need and that way you could start building your brand your overall business pretty effectively Yes So let's pick another person. I think that one's pretty much wrapped unless you have anything else To mention no pretty much got what I had to say Have you found anybody I just now looked over I'll be honest I see a beatboxing channel. Oh those are always fun Okay So he said that he got a better mic so you can hear and hear the bass better Uh-huh Please look at my new freestyle Freestyle I don't know how to beatbox was this the gamer person that we watched I don't know link me There was someone that we watched once that did a beatbox call of duty I don't know what it was called because of the air ban We'll see what the video starts so it's ginger beats freestyle 14 And see just how much you're good driving regardless. We'll take a look since he said he has better of you There's that dubstep intro, which I think it's okay considering it's box channel Yeah, however it should be your own your own beatbox dubstep beat Okay Boys So ginger beats. What do you use as far as your uh software for this stuff Because This is good but I know full well that you could do better than this because With your audio software you could layer this and make it sound more beefy And you could add some effects. I know I know what beatboxing is about it's all about using the Using what you have and not, you know Overdoing it, but if you're using software then you can at least layer it so it makes them more like beefy This is a freestyle though. Sorry. It's kind of like yeah Yeah, yeah edit the freestyle instead of doing multiple layers Yeah, yeah, so when you when you've recorded it you can go back over and Okay Yeah, I was thinking you're mean like you could do like harvities and like have other like Recording sounds on top of it. Like that would be cool. But uh, I would be cool Yeah, definitely you could go and clean it up and add more to it. Yes, even if you get a free something like a dacity I don't like it, but you can do stuff at it. No, no, no all dastis are Hey, you have to work with what you got So what other what would be the next best free? Software out there if you have no money in your pocket Oh, that's a good question actually. So is there anything better than audacity? That's free Not to my knowledge. There probably is Like I use acoustic a mix trap, which I really like but uh There's been times I've had to settle for audacity I mean uh achievement hunter, which is part of rucity face. They use audacity to uh mix their Audio tracks really we're recording gameplay. Yeah, I didn't know that until I saw like very Very sneakily the screen that has their audio recording in the background. I was like, oh my god, that's audacity So what do you think of the actual like video like what we're watching here It's not boring I'm very grateful for that. Yeah, you don't necessarily need to see it to listen to what you're doing No, but It is pretty Yeah Maybe If you're doing a freestyle, that's what you're trying to show off Maybe show the freestyle like actually do it like webcam directly on the microphone showing that you're doing in one take So that way it's proven that you know, you didn't go back and fix stuff up later You could see it's in one take like that uh 20 second songs guy Like you actually see the waveforms in the background recording as he's singing So you can actually see that's legitimately like being recorded right then and there and uh I think that might improve it and it looks like you have a webcam. It's the next video had uh Thumbnail with you and oh, no, that wasn't you it was going to redirect to someone else. Haha, okay Um, but I mean, I assume you have a webcam or access to webcam or something where you could do that Yeah, yeah, uh, maybe not. Oh, yeah, there's there's your face. You have a webcam So, yeah, you should consider that and maybe you think about uh Working that into your free styles that way instead of just doing an animation you can You know show that off I definitely agree Anything to add It's kind of difficult with um beatboxing because especially with freestyling all I could really put in was what I said about um Going back in post production as they call it and uh No, yes post production not freedom editing show your editing show your face do beatbox for your dubstep intro Do a dubstep beatbox for your dubstep intro then it it would be awesome Haha Cool other than that you're you're talented. So And it sounds like you do have a good mic. It just needs to be tweaked in editing Okay, so this next one Is This is the minecast hd And they it's called the federal debate remade the minecast hd All right one second. I'll put it in the description for you guys to watch And again guys, I always say this but if we're reviewing a channel We're watching the video. We're not watching the comments So I'm doing my I'm doing my best, but yeah, yeah, but it doesn't hurt to actually watch with us So that way you can leave your own feedback We can help grow each other and talk to each other and communicate with each other in each other's videos So if you see something you like might not subscribe when I watch it help us all grow together It's freedom Merck platinum has just gone home from school. Hey, welcome back all right, so It is now in the description. I'm watching Sounds like some copyrighted music on that quite possibly creative commons Either way, it's your standard intro. Yeah, yeah So these annotations The fight for prime minister. Oh, I say in canada, uh Was this the video you asked us to watch? Yeah, the federal debate remade, okay So Hopefully you enjoy So as for the annotations I I think they were The intro with them like scattered all over the frame Normally you see those on like spam videos that you don't want to watch And you end up just like closing out of it just because the whole screen is filled up with annotations So was that one that said like um, we made this in two hours or something Yeah, so you can still leave that information But do like a little notes up at the top or at the bottom or even in text like in your editing software So that way you can still show it and that way you're not just blocking the screen and not you know You made me go and close it so I could see what was going on Like I actually had to physically close the annotations to watch the video. So That's more work for me to watch your video And if I was just a normal casual viewer hanging out what it's going by I might not you know Do that. Sorry. Sorry. I just noticed when um, when one of the characters shot the other character He broke the microphone Oh, yeah And the intro No, no, no have way through the video and that and he looks at his microphone very sneakily like oh Like the diaphragm's hanging out of the microphone Still using it So I can obviously that you guys are young and you're pretty much just doing this as a laugh Because this is this right here is pretty much how I started out with um Filmmaking like I would just get my friends over and we would just set up a camera and go for it We didn't have we didn't know at the time. Well, we didn't have any knowledge about audio or like, um Grainliness of the video and stuff like no and copyright music. So we literally just went for it That being said though with the lower quality cameras They have they're not as good in low light. So that's kind of why you're getting this pixelation here Yeah, the grain and this grain is just because the camera is bumped up and it's trying to get this gain And that's why it's kind of looking Like hazy on these darker areas Now if you do have this and you don't have the good enough lighting to make it like perfectly clear What you can do and any editing software I've actually never seen an editing software that doesn't have this feature Is brightness and contrast You turn down the brightness just a little bit and contrast up a bit and it blends it all out So then you can actually see Or you can't see rather the pixels and it just makes it more smooth looking So I'd recommend that for your video. Like even if you just turn it down like negative three negative five on brightness And then contrast up that same amount And it will help it look a lot more clear Yeah So when I was talking what I was saying early about how when I first started this is pretty much what I did But if I started if I was my age now If I started now and I was when I first started if that makes sense I would because we have so much more technology and we have this show for example I would go out and research What would probably be look best and stuff because back when we started it was literally YouTube wasn't even a thing when we started so When we started it was kind of like I don't know what to do so Now they have all this technology you can always branch out and say Right, so we have this camera and we have ourselves Can we make it any better? So we go on youtube and we have a look at it and we find and then we find monday critiques videos and we're like, oh So Meanwhile, definitely This is a good starting point. So go from here. Yeah, you talk mics. I need to go to the bathroom. Enjoy jordan I will actually i'm gonna go to the bathroom too. Bye guys. No No, um This is one of the things that we were talking about earlier with jordan I you know we may not be like youtube celebrities, but I did go to film school I do have my bachelor's degree and uh filmmaking and stuff like that And one of the things that we learned pretty quickly is your biggest friend as far as lighting is the sun Now you can set up these debates and do something like outside with like a pretty like bush like background put up like a Some type of backdrop or something so it looks professional and you have this huge source of light outside And you're not going to have this pixelation that you're having inside the house Because you actually have just light from everywhere at the camera is able to use And it doesn't have to kick up the gain So although it's easier and more comfortable to do it inside your house But if you're wanting like the top notch quality you can go outside and just utilize the sun utilize these different things And you can get a lot more better picture For uh less equipment But if you do want to continue moving forward with this and keep on branching out and growing Your channel and the future you are obviously going to need some sort of equipment Whether it's like a dslr lighting kit and audio stuff like that But the fact that you worked with what you do have is pretty cool Only So Yeah, I mean really though with the equipment you have it's not bad It's one of those things like as you continue to grow to grow and test out new stuff. That's what I recommend So let's go ahead and check out another channel If you guys will leave your video titles and the comments for you to check out I will pick one and we can check out the next channel And I think I got one Let me send this over to Jordan real quick for when he gets back And I'm going to put this in the description for you guys to watch Okay, cool. So this video is from dot torrent or detorrent And the video title is sunday drive aseto corset trial mountain funny moments Now before we even watch this what we expect from funny moments are just like fast paced cut videos with just Funny funny funny funny funny not funny Build up wait for a while nothing happens and then funny and then a cut to nothing So that's what we kind of expect going into this. So just let's do this Cuts and tons and tons of fun Oh The ai is even worse So far so good I like that intro actually Whether or not it's a template or not. It's it's nice. It stands out and it's different from your typical step thing that you see in every single Channel and welcome back to the sunday drive This one is now because this adds is the music and Game or is this something that you're actually Putting in later and ending Here we go Go dammit. It's a little bit loud and regard this The ai is going insane. I think it needs to turn it down a little bit So whether you're recording it in-game or putting it in later Take a look at your And your editing software or even while you're recording it directly depending on if you record your channels differently or not I'd recommend recording your channels differently like audio on One layer and then your game audio on the separate so that you can mix them down properly Ideal Oh, i'm back. Hey I'd linked you a video to watch. Here we go. Six opponents in fact Do torrent Kind of told what we were looking for as far as funny moment videos And Talked about the music levels Okay The music is kind of loud in comparison to his voice Basically So another thing I want to say about the funny moments thing is The general idea of funny moments is they are moments So the video would be consisting of about three minutes worth of stuff that happened in this game that you're playing That were really funny instead of the entire gameplay because otherwise it's not a funny moments video. It's just a Assetto Corsa trial mountain video. So The idea of funny moments is It's funny parts in the game. You just played But yeah, now he is He is cutting around the dole moments though so It may not be like constant laughter throughout the whole thing, but he is Cutting out these things and cutting to like different situations So it's just a long video. I think is what you're getting at Am I correct there? You are like long for a funny moments video. Yeah, I mean the difference between 11 minutes with Dota and doing it and say markiplier with gaming is markiplier Uploads games daily videos daily And you'll leave it a month before he does a highlight video. He does a highlight video every month or so And because he does one every day, he's literally got 15 minutes worth of beautiful content to use in this one video, but It's obviously obviously for smaller youtubers. We're not going to have that. We haven't got that much of a commitment. Unfortunately so 11 minutes of funny moments I can I can see the I can see the attraction, but I think after a while it might get a bit boring Especially the same video But that's my opinion Yeah, I think this would just be kind of a better Sunday drive video like a funny sunday drive video Yeah, instead of classifying as funny moments like it is funny moments throughout the whole thing, but This is kind of like similar to how I would edit my gameplay I just cut out all the dull moments So it's nothing but the funny stuff and then on a funny moments video You just keep all the funniest parts of that funny stuff Looks like you don't want to have any dry Parts in your video that are boring that people want to skip through you want people to enjoy the whole thing So you have the right idea as far as like the gameplay goes and the editing of that gameplay I think you just need to classify them a little bit differently. Yeah Um overall quality of everything. I think it's good The only thing that's bugging me as far as the quality is your orange lighting in your webcam That's the filmmaker me coming out hoping that you would use white lights instead of yellow indoor bulbs Is that is that orange light or is that wood that's giving off that orange look? I mean, he's he's orange in the background's orange and Oh, yeah, the boxes behind them are have an orange tint to it So they're if he used the white soft Uh bulbs then it would have counteracted that Yeah, I mean so another Uh equivalent to that because obviously if you haven't got the money to spend that if you have a monitor Just have it on a white screen. That's good enough I I do that sometimes if I have a if I need to make a video where I'm talking and my soft boxes aren't working that day Because I don't a pack of four white light bulbs is five dollars and monitors a hundred plus Come on Yeah, not understanding where I'm going Maybe he hasn't got the money So I usually if my soft boxes aren't working for that day because sometimes they don't and it's really annoying I need to get some new ones I would turn my tv on and I put it on to like a white background and there you get you've got yourself Oh Every time we go grocery shopping We buy a five dollar pack of white light bulbs to switch out some of the yellow lights in our house And we've been slowly little by little getting rid of all the yellow Look to our house when we do our vlogs in the house. We don't have that yellow tint. It's all white So we don't need to set up soft boxes and stuff. We just Do that That's pretty cool. I didn't know that I was saying I didn't know you were doing that Yeah, yeah, so like, you know, if you go back to the first vlog, we were just orange in every clip And now if you look at it's like, you know, we actually have like a white glow to us without having to use soft boxes I did not know that and he's british. So this is Yeah, overall, I think It's a really solid gameplay video What I love about what I love about um Dottern himself, I'm gonna call you Dottern as a person It's just it's just hilarious how he's just playing this with the actual um Actual steering wheel and he has and he has his hood up and he's got his headphones He looks like a right character like somebody who you probably see in a car who would like his dream his dream is to speed in these cars He looks like he's having a right laugh Now, um, one last thing like I said, I really enjoy the overall quality of it. I like the editing style I like The just everything about it so far um The outro in my opinion does not live up to like the intro graphics And quality the outro just kind of looks like it was quickly slapped together like just google green Funky background and then throw text on there you go. Yeah, um Not necessarily fond of that Color scheme, I guess Yeah, the orange The orange the orange clashes with the green Well, it's Christmas colors. It's like it's like a red and green. It's the same with his uh Banner and avatar too though. So like you do have the cross platform branding Yeah, and now that I'm looking at the green like fire that kind of has a nice idea For what your channel is like the speed the cars the stuff like that But I don't necessarily like I guess the red text is what's bothering me on top of it Yeah So If it was like, you know, even like a yellow or Something like that it would help pop a lot more and it won't clash Yeah, just just research about what works with what I mean, yeah putting putting green with with orange. I mean I mean, it sounds like it's it sounds like it could work, but then you look at it and you're like, oh Is that orange on your monitor? No, I was just saying green and orange. Okay, because it's it's a red for me I had to quickly think of two things that clash Now we took a whole 11 week course over color theory and like what colors work together and blah blah blah blah It's like forever ingrained in my mind. It's like I feel like my teacher slapping me in the face whenever I pick the wrong colors But uh Yeah, like I like The use of the background. That's all I really can think of. It's just maybe a different color of text Yeah Or a different color background like change use the same type and maybe make it Because I noticed I noticed that the watch the watch more and the the d And the d looked all right, but as far as a subscribe one It looks a bit pinkish or like a light light red almost pink I feel I feel the red works, but maybe because there's like a There's an outline around it. So it's like kind of making a stand out where subscribe is just on so Yeah, it's just Being picky. We're trying to help Oh, yeah. Yeah. Yeah, overall. I think it's really good. So And yeah, this is all our opinion. I mean you can take this on if you want or you can go Nah Yeah, like even if you go to like the whole video list and then look at the little banner that he has on the thumbnails Like that that lightish pink red is kind of hard to read Yeah, yeah, so I think green is an overall good branding color But I think as far as text I think is what you need to Focus on to make it more easily readable Okay, so we uh Are we good with that one? Yeah, you're up I've sent you the link This is the the lucky boy five four three two one and lift off from a certain program in the 80s Okay, so this is prop hunt highlights tlb versus clint to min Clint to min that is now in the description I already like his comedy style and we're playing something We have never ever played Mike we knew you're gonna have some fun with this one. He's green screening I want to be able to play Oh no So first off i'm gonna go back to the beginning here this like the waveform intro Although that looks cool. It makes me think like you're setting up for like a music channel Yeah, so it doesn't necessarily fit with yo what up T.O.B. If we're playing something we have never ever played on this channel before Now Green screening that's that's tough. Oh, that's interesting This is what i was saying No, like they're recording They're recording in the same room on one green screen just on each each side of it Are they yeah, there's a scene in it where he pulls it back at each other guy. How cool is that? That's cool. That's clever really utilizing that green screen. That's awesome. Um now what I was Nora You want to be in the live stream? How about you Joy? Okay? That's really cool. Nora's gonna talk about green screening because she knows how Lucky boy, can I take your technique of the double-sided green screen? I make videos on my channel with that technique. Okay. We got Nora and the green screen Oh, yeah, I forgot you was on webcam All right, come here We're gonna make you invisible. There you go. Are you literally gonna tell us how to do green screen with your dog? Yeah, she's gonna help us All right So Let's see if I could do this real quick Probably not Probably not Nora will probably lose interest within a minute There you go. She's keyed you can see through Nora So You can see right here how it's only keying out parts of the green. It's not keying out everything I'm just sat here waiting for the stream to catch up so it's because There's wrinkles in it. It's not let it's not pulled out properly And it's not lit properly either So it's hard to get that even key throughout everything So in your situation over here You're seeing that there's some issues alongside that And there's a lot of things you got to do with the green screen to get a perfect key And you have to make sure it's pulled tight. You need to make sure it's iron correctly And you need to make sure that it's lit correctly too Now in your green screen here This one actually doesn't look too bad Yeah, one side looks a bit Um Pixelated the other one looks a lot better. I think part of that, you know, whether it's lighting or it's Whatever but you could see on your friend here on the right. He has some green spill onto him Now since you are both recording in the same room This makes it tough, but the green screen is too close to him and the light is balancing the green Off of the green screen onto him So what you have to do I got dog for my mouth is Ideally the green screen should be like 10 feet back Taking up the whole wall and you light your green screen and then you light you So you should have like a three light set up on you and a three light set up on the green screen Not everyone has that luxury So you really have to work around it and play with it But since he's sitting so close here to the background You can see that he's casting a shadow on the screen screen So it's going to make it harder to key and you're going to have that spill So even if you were just screwed up like another foot or so And then if you put a light on the back of you You create a rim light and that would make it separate better so you can green screen but Piri Piri made a good comment saying if you are able to do it Instead of using a green screen just get a green card or some green like solid Material because then you don't have to iron it and then it's a lot easier to light It does light though a little bit more It completely depends on the surface if it's if it's like wood then yeah, but um You even construction paper would bounce light The fabric kind of absorbs light I suppose it depends if he's doing the whole I'm sat in 10 feet in front of it, maybe but 10 feet good lord a couple of meters ahead of it But oh, I just saw a um, oh nice on reference in there You've worked with a nice on haven't you? Back in the day But uh, yeah, I'm scared to nice on scares me But um Yeah, it's a good idea to if to be using green board because I've used it in the past I've used like a solid material for green screen um But then again cloth is a lot cheaper and a lot easier to use But I think for the fact that you're using two people with the same screen on each side Yeah, the fact that you could pull it back and like look at your friend. I think yeah It's cool. It adds to the comedy factor Yeah, yeah, you know if you did do I am running somehow mount Instruction paper like some type of board behind you You'd have to just have that hanging from the ceiling and that'd be really really awkward and weird If it was in the middle of your room Like that's something you have to kind of mount on the wall So the fact there's two of you that makes it more difficult I mean that is a very I have seen it done before but I haven't seen it been done in ages And I kind of want to do it myself The whole two-sided green screen thing. I haven't seen that in a while. I've never seen it. That's new for me So Once you hit about six minutes and 50 seconds you get to the letterbox video I don't know why it's scaled down, but it's kind of a little pet peeve of mine Overall I like the effort I like what you're doing. I like the work that's being put into it I think it's funny that you guys are doing this and the fact that you have a pokemon wall That's awesome too. My friend and I we've had a whole entire wall dedicated to pokemon cards So you need to keep on working Man Have you ever played prop hunt mike? Yeah It's pretty I wish I could play They have a minecraft version You could ride minecraft k you Um now that's for quality We've talked about the green screen how to get that a little bit better. Uh, that's all with practice and perfecting the setup like Oh, the green screen is so tough to get perfect But besides that The only other thing I could really think to be improved upon is your audio quality um It's not terrible, but in the future if you do want to grow and you do want to Bump your overall production value. That's something you should look into Lucky boy says someone noticed my pokemon wall. Yay I wish I could show you the pokemon wall that we had It's so funny It was like literally the whole entire rude was just pokemon walls Yes green screen. Yeah, so you say about audio and green screen Because I have a very my experience with green screen and And stuff like that one of my videos where I attempted green screen for the very first time And unfortunately somebody got a hold of it and put on reddit and my video got slated As mike as mike as mike remembers. Yes, and it got absolutely slated but um Thankfully, hopefully this will never happen to you because there are people out there who are just there to make you feel Bad about yourself Gaming video where you're not like that's not your goal. You were doing like a film where you were Yeah, but then again, I I used it to my advantage and I got um partnered with uh an x partnership Because I had to get a certain amount of views and I got it and I was like so but yeah, and then Lastly just video quality um The green For your one friend here is like a really just strong green That's why he's getting a better key and then you cut over to the other one I don't I assume that this is you for whatever reason. I don't know why I'm talking to one person particular But it's more like a yellow green and it's the same green screen So there's obviously a difference in quality of cameras there So maybe in the future you can get two of whatever cameras used here and you'd have Matching quality overall and it will look a lot better like here. You can see you guys both side by side This one it's more hd and crisp and this one's more pixelated Reaction zed says where is your camera jordan? uh well problem is problem is if I go on camera that Amazingly it can screw up the quality of the video and the sound because that's just how internet works Yeah, whatever we turn on video, then we start getting lag. We start getting blub blub wash Yeah, so I I like to stay off camera. Yeah, we tried it one week, but um, yeah That's why I stay off you can come find me in my channel though if you want to see jordan's face Watch all of his videos subscribe like and leave five comments Do that All right So Let's go ahead and review one more. We have hit our our mark, but I think we could wrap it with one more Okay, I'll let you All right, so I could be a beatboxer could you know no All right So I think what we're gonna do We're gonna pick Pesid drifter I don't know how you say the name pack a drifter. Pesid drifter. He said he's never been featured before And he asked us to watch One of his csgo videos Okay, so we'll do the featured one and guys again, this is the last one So if you didn't make it on today's video or live stream rather Uh, don't be discouraged. We can only get to so many and one day So we try to get to as many as possible and give everyone a fair chance by Picking new people each week So we'll be back next monday and you guys could watch this more then And in the meantime check out the channels that we featured And watch with us and just enjoy this last one with us All right, so we've already mentioned kind of what we look for within a funny moments video Yeah, so we kind of wanted to see fast-paced Chopped out all the funny moments. There's not really any dragging spots. So before we get into it. That's just kind of our expectations So I'm talking so I touched on this last week. Um There's a there's a thing that says Simon going full retard Um As far I know the reference because that's going from the film. You never go full retard, but The difference between you and a multi-million Uh production film is they have their lawsuits And they can handle they can handle if they had any problems whereas you can't So you need to watch what you're saying with the word retard and all this lot because There are people out there who are going to get offended and To be honest, they have every right to they say I don't like you saying the word recording people retard because To be honest, it's it's it is offensive But I know that there is a comedy sense to it and I completely understand the side of comedy to it But you just need to be careful with that. I mean, I touched on this last week So I don't want to go too far into it Give me a knee you really have to watch what you say or else people will Yeah Now as a technical aspect Something that always bothers me is Where you are facing as far as your face cam So if you're going to be looking to the right side of your screen You should be on the left side of your screen. So you're looking at what you're playing because people follow your eye line Towards where you're watching So like if you're a filmmaker and you're doing a comedy sketch You're going to be facing the frame that you want people to look at because people are going to be following your eyes if I am like Like this looking off-screen. It's going to be rather distracting So like this I'm looking towards what I'm showing you guys and I'm directing it towards that. So it's it makes it Just a little bit distracting to be looking away from what you're playing Sorry And of course it's not very flattering Me being a slightly bigger person I would hate to have a camera down there because you see all the chins So this is also something I've kind of touched on in the past When you play with other people It's hard to make your videos about you So like You're you're definitely talking throughout it, but a lot of these funny moments are are your friends talking or your friends saying something Or you reacting to what your friends are saying So don't be afraid to speak up and speak over top of your friends and make sure that it's It's known and it's heard when I speak because this is your video And this is about you and your channel. So speak up more talk more and make the video all in all about you more Yeah, it's always fun to play with more people because you could feed off of them But you need to make sure they're not overpowering you in your own video again with the um Again with the uh century common with the alex alex bar thing Really watch what you're putting Because there's some people that just straight up don't care and that's what they make their brand about is like being offensive You know, yeah, so like if that's what you're going for that Sure, but it depends on if you're trying to be appropriate for all ages and for all viewers Then you're kind of limiting yourself, but if you want to be known as that person that just doesn't care And I am who I am so shut up. It's like, you know That's fine. You know like cast some g I don't know if you guys watch him or not But he's known for being kind of a rude person in his videos and that's what makes him fun to watch so You know there's people that make There's a channel there's a there's a channel a british channel called I hate everything And it's literally just a video going I hate this video and if you disagree me. I don't care shut up. It's like, all right Yeah, yeah, there's it's hard to um Like with offensive comments and stuff like that. It's If you are a channel where you are literally that then I suppose it's it works with it If you are like a family-friendly channel and then you suddenly went oh retarded all this lot then it's like Whoa, see like like for instance my channel. I try to make it appropriate for all ages and There was once that I actually did say like retarded a video and I think I lost like 20 subscribers that day Yeah, and it depends on what your channel is and what it's targeted towards if you want to make these phrases and stuff, you know If you don't care because that's who you are Sure go for it But if you're trying to be family friendly then that's when you need to start thinking more about what you say It's especially difficult when you have friends who swear openly as well Yeah, you're filming them smiling at them, but you can see in your eyes. You can see in your eyes. You look you're dead to me So Overall quality, I think it's good quality. I think Things sound good. I like that you take the extra time to add it and put like the text that comes up on the screen Because that makes things more funny and it makes it emphasize on these funny moments Um, I think that's good use of that You can tell you put extra work into it Um, yeah, I I definitely like it when gamers do that because it just shows they care enough to actually spend the extra 30 seconds To put a text slot there and then a text slot the next time and it does add up So like a lot of people don't do it and that's I think what separates it just a normal youtuber from Someone that really cares about their channel and wants to grow it He's definitely on the right track. He's uh, you're definitely Obviously you can improve in some place another so if you actually work on that and you're gonna be You're gonna be having a quite a good channel on your hands here then uh Lastly Let's check your channel real quick What I've always been told Is even if you just start out the channel and you don't necessarily have like a following to make them Make social medias So make make a twitter make a facebook make all this stuff And on here it does look like you have a twitter or at least there's an icon for twitter on your logo there But your description doesn't have anything about it and your channel doesn't have anything about it either So update your defaults whenever you upload it has these social medias and even if no one's there to watch it Just share it to all these platforms if you're using something like tube buddy It makes it really easier or something some other social media site that posts to all of them just with one go So that way you don't need to actually manage anything But just by posting your videos on these sites it gives it more weight and more seo worth So it'll be seen better and it has more chance at growth So it's not just don't think of it as you know, you set up a facebook page. No one's liked it yet There's still benefit in posting there even if no one has liked your page So once you post it people start coming then it's going to grow and have extra weight to it in the seo world Yeah Anything else to mention? No, I think we pretty much nailed that on the uh the headsail Oh guys, I think that's it for today Something i've never done before I think we fun people seem to like this i'm going to put you guys in the vlog Hey Right now and if you guys want to be in the vlog feel free to say hi. I'm recording the chat And you guys could say hi to us and uh, you'll be featured Hi You're so i want to be in the vlog we're like 15 seconds So much for a delay But yeah guys, thank you for hanging out with us if you want to see more of jordan He's in the description as well as the cards and if you want to see more of me I'm in the cards and description as well And uh, also the description has all the featured channels that we featured today So you can check out their channels and subscribe to them and leave them a comment say hi And uh, then we'll be next we'll be back next monday right around the same time. So Anyways guys, that's it and we'll see you next time. See ya Goodbye There we go