 All right, let's take a look at this one. So it just looks like the lens has changed Because now everything is correct Which means you could still punch in if you want to right to get That type of framing you would still get you know the door number will come in And you get a nice facial stuff, you know the thing is now you are that's the half and you I mean it's it's a cliche thing to do, but it's it's a very useful beginning in terms of framing So you could still you know with the guy he could end up being here. It's my massively long scribble, but you know He could be here and Then just you know your other guys just kind of here blurry But that would be your full framing and you'd be in a nice third composition Versus that that's just a bit low, you know me like in there some moments here We're just kind of it feels like you want to reframe so you're not having all that empty space. Anyway, that's just for framing The knocking is cool. Just make sure that you know as you do this again It's my change video your the framing differences, but this is all cool. I love all this But the head seems to have like a headline or head IK So you can see how it just kind of stays put so Watch out for that on something like this here when he goes down the shoulder will come down. It feels like by now you want to re Orient the character so it's a bit more straight up and the head is not so everything's kind of leaning over this way So you can lean it back to the right like to this but earlier and this feels more like a pivot pivoting off of you and rotating versus Also translate you mean like he just kind of does a weight shift Change to stand properly and it's just was like a rotation in the in the spine in the upper spine You know the chest and not the roots So that's just for that. That's a good the other guy There's something weird here like I like all this like all that and Here he's already looking at the fist So that by now it feels weird that from here to here Feels like eyes are really parented to the head and it kind of looking to the right and then They dart over almost looking at us during a blink And then you blink and then it go back But it's not looking at him and his eyes really cross-eyed and Then here you got the big expression, but this still feels like he's looking over his shoulder and only now Do I feel like he's looking at him and to me it feels like you can just make this so much simpler he gets to this Starts blinking while still looking towards the fist and on the on the eye on the when the eyes open He is looking at the kid, which is here Otherwise it feels really confusing not confusing. I feel like it's very very unfocused What are you doing here Reynolds your DVD player broken and I think you hear something in the sound What are you doing here? Here doesn't You know like a little sound there. What are you doing? It's kind of missing it would happen around here And to me it feels like you could almost look at the guy long or maybe look up and down and kind of size them up and like and then What are you doing then it's kind of What are you doing? You know just at that moment when he goes That's almost to me like that's the moment when he looks away from him. What are you doing? What are you doing here Reynolds your DVD player broken? It's cool the rest I like What are you doing here Reynolds your DVD player broken? The only thing is that once you hit this spot and I scrub through there is a little bit of moon Which is cool, but there's nothing in terms of a bigger head arc some accent something that doesn't have to be big I'm not talking about something this big I'm just talking about something where if you track the nose it would just do like this this amount, and that's it your DVD player broken your DVD player broken and that feels really late The winding and the head will broken like I would actually keep that on the nose and keep that on broken your DVD player broken broken or Later it's just kind of in between where he might say broken Broken like that or it's broken You know where it's a it's an accent afterwards and right now. It's just in between it doesn't quite work DVD player broken Stay in this But anyway, that's kind of the impression on this one and check out this guy Cool, I like it very cut out much sooner Cut, you know cut there and in the beginning I would actually cut in So he's not moving not moving not moving and then he's certainly moving and now the route moves Even that feels a bit weird But I guess you could I would just cut in around here See that so you cut on action like he's already moving I was just saying you might probably cut in later because then the camera is moving So I will probably cut in here So really feels like it's a shot out of a sequence and I can't tell you which frame because it's so Small There you go now I can't scrub so I'm cutting out at 144 And hold on I can tell you I'm cutting in at 21 21 is when I cut in other than that Let's go back here. I think the only thing I would say is his way down is a bit simple Just kind of a translate down with a little bit of a one-axis type of thing And then the same thing up. It's a cool how he goes out with the stomach thing going first But it still goes in one-axis and I think you can have a little bit of a A little bit of a side-wisely and a little bit of a y-rotation Give this a bit more complexity so he gets up, you know, like he pushes off with one arm More than the other so by now this will be a bit more stretch and it's going to be already a bit more bent And then he gets back into this and watch out. There's some moments where it feels Really disjoint to like the head is kind of stuck the chest moving separately Arms are doing something the hips are doing something But there's no there's no up or down or sideways on the hips after all that movement here just kind of locks Locks as in just I don't feel any momentum carrying over from this. I just kind of dare with some rotations That's cool and that's cool Yeah, it's neat Now this guy I think all I would do is when you talk about beats See this My newt and then it goes up and left and does this Already left or left right and then the big one and then this To me it feels like you want to do Don't do that my newts might be just From here to here my newt Hold hold hold don't move the head and then then he goes Then that was otherwise to me beat wise it's just there's always something moving And I feel like this would be a great my newt hold the voice nothing, you know, no one says anything It's a whole then it's his he's walking leaning over talking talking to my newt Vivid detail, you know, so you got that contrast and that moment Of silence. I think that would help beat wise at least to me Your internet activity over the last 10 years is being scrutinized There's still some moments through here where this arm goes IK the wrist rotation And the forearm there's some funky stuff going on there same thing here Because I see all that elbow movement while the wrist does not really move that much I'm not talking up and out. I'm talking about the over rotation This way not up and down So it feels a bit locked that feels a bit weird here Where the elbow goes in but then hand goes out with the hand rotation not moving that much. It feels very broken better This also the wrist feels like it's moving a lot compared to everything else Not too bad though Probably the lowest of the notes, but Stuff at the beginning Your internet activity over the last 10 years is being Yeah, that's it Your internet activity over the last three to sound the lip sync this might be just be the quick time So this might not be a note. It just feels late Your internet activity over And this feels a bit much this feels like a whistle and not your This could be a year between these two, but this is already a whistle Your internet activity over the last 10 years is being That's a cool shape Your internet activity over the last 10 years It just feels uh short I would get to this and hold this three frames long at least years In scrutinized and cataloged something cataloged. It's poppy This one You can see how the jaw goes up down and then suddenly up and really up It's over one frame direction changing. It's Really faster and then pops one up and then one down again So it's simplify and out of frame or just reduce this closing here Just too puppy Then cataloged Whoa, yeah, that's it. All right. There's an email you can sign up You can start whenever you want you can submit whatever you want you get 16 submissions either way The like and subscribe would be awesome. All right. Thank you