 All right, let's watch this here can't make a good soup can't do a handstand in a pool can't spell the word lieutenant There's a lot of cats in my life right now. I Think it's neat. I like I like the idea obviously that you have a fish. It's not a human like your backdrop There's a lot of good stuff that you can do with this. I Understand your questions, and I think they're both Valid they're both there's good stuff with having a hook-in and how that would affect Animation everything my main problem with this is that if you listen to this can't make a good soup can't Like that hook is not affecting her speech at all And as of now She does everything she would without a hook as well My thing is probably Keep the trash I Would say keep the trash and give it with the hook only I mean I like the idea of the hook And I think you can incorporate that me get a later point But right now It's one of those like in those 11 second club things where everything is in it But it doesn't really make sense like I don't hear how the voice is affected by the hook If that would be funny if you had something in the voice and you have that as a reason for it I think that would be funny Not funny but a fish but as an idea would be cool So I will probably take it out also, you know, there would be something if she goes over here The hook would pull and then she gets pulled over there Stuff like that, but again, this would affect her pattern or speech pattern now. She talks and everything I don't think any of that is reflected in the audio so Now since she is saying can't make a good soup can't do a handstand in a pool can't spell the word lieutenant There's a lot of camps in my life right now It's a good line. I think Having the trash in there adds to the whole depressive nature. I think that's okay. I think what I would do actually is It's cool to seal that stuff here. Oh, there's an arrow. I'm drawing arrows. I'm actually wanting to draw freehands. There you go I Will probably put the fish around here and bring that camera lower So we are actually looking at something like that You might potentially have it pointing up a bit if you want to see some cool stuff in the back here, but Because Can't make a good soup can't do a handstand in a pool can't spell the word lieutenant There's a lot after lieutenant. I Know some reason I envision her Floating now lieutenant and then like lieutenant and drops There's a lot of camps in my life right now Like drops and then no right now and it's could be a moment where she could almost settle into Into the the sandy floor Not that fish do that some some of them do but you know, you got some freedom here You know, like she's depressed she can't do stuff. I think having her kind of go down could accentuate that and could fit the whole mood of it or Let's watch this again Can't make a good soup can't do a handstand in a pool can't spell the word lieutenant There's a lot of camps in my life right now. Yeah, not that the sound would do that I was thinking during the pause here You can't spell the word lieutenant lieutenant and at this point because she has that in there it gets kind of Tangled up and held back by something. That's on the ground. You know like something that you have around here and Then ah kind of gives you a kind of look of man. This is all such a pain in the There's a lot of camps in my life right now And then you hear that I hear footsteps in the background Can't make a good soup can't do a handstand in a pool can't spell the word lieutenant There's a lot of camps in my life right now The end so it's walking at the end. I was just wondering maybe you would then extend the pause by a Seconds, but since there's so much noise here tenant There's a lot of camps in my life Don't be odd you would you could probably hear the whole copy paste of a silence, but That could be something where she does all this here and at the end with tenant and then gets held back Pull back and freeze herself and then And that tells her camps in my life right now, you know, there's lots of she can't even swim Properly because of that. I don't know that could be something The way you have it let's pretend we will keep all this right I would not do anything after here because we don't see her face It's a weird thing to have her be away from us and it's very Very profile, but that's it's a weird angle. I like that idea, but I won't do it twice It feels more like yeah, yeah, but I like Spell the word lieutenant Spell the word that's fine But then going to a regular right no lower than this into a kind of a you know You can have a way in and kind of swim around type of thing But just I wouldn't go away from this. I don't so again setting wise I'll probably take the hook out because it feels so disconnected And if you have this I hope you need to incorporate The trash into the scene where she gets affected by it more again. I'm sure if that will fit into this pause Maybe it maybe it doesn't have to Pull her back a lot. Maybe she just gets tangled and realized she can't really swim forward enough And then at the end it would be there's a lot of cans, you know Maybe something is not that this is your framing, but something is hooked up here. I'm just kind of like uh She realizes all this is all not really working for me. It's kind of Hanging off this thing maybe So I have a lot of non answers Can't make a good soup can't do a handstand in a pool can't spell the word lieutenant There's a lot of cans in my life right now. The thing is about the ending There's a lot of cans in my life right now. It doesn't sound like a very defeated thing That's why also the idea of getting L tangled up and all sad. I think it's not I'm not super sold on my own ideas only because it's a very Not a forceful. It's a very distinct and angry delivery. It's like she is She's telling that to someone So I think that anger would have to be reflected even at the very end It couldn't be like some deflating something I mean you could have that and take some of the ideas of your guy where you know, she's constantly moving, right? so what if It's not too much, but I'm just throwing an idea what if it's you know closer to the ground you got stuff here the way You have it here And there could be another fish here. I know you're going with the kissy talking about but imagine this is the thing here and All the fish is doing is looking and following the guy having a little head turn No, not not even head turn just kind of looking and a little you know imagine that looks Looks sort of right and the heck was a bit to the right and can float Loads a little bit Just tiny little things while she's going She's kind of doing this around the guy while he's just kind of listening I think that could be something interesting, so That way she Again, not that you need two characters You can argue that you can just tell that to herself or the other characters off-screen But that could be something interesting will where I feel like at the end when she is still so forceful It's because she's telling someone she's so angry. She's not convincing, but she's telling that to someone then I could have a interesting little dynamic where you know you got your ground with your Your stones and stuff here and that guy's just kind of what's going on While this guy's I don't know that's an idea maybe Yeah, I mean then the cans would be something where she would be in an aquarium You know she says a lot of stuff I can't do right now. Well one of the things that she's in prison She's in an aquarium As a setting that could work or this is totally different and potentially makes no sense whatsoever But it's a cartoon why not imagine She's still talking someone she's talking to someone else, but imagine this is a wall Of an aquarium right whatever can't draw and then this is another this is hers guys here Listening right it's my fish by the way. It's awesome. It's like a dead guy It's dead and she's here. Well, maybe the gap is smaller and she's doing all that stuff here and every now and then you know when she Change course you can see this so imagine she's because she tells him right and he will kind of like nod and like yeah I understand and she goes away angry here comes back It goes away comes back so frustrated elements where she goes away because it's frustrated Comes back because she wants to tell them she is telling the guy and the idea of the guy listening It's like before in the middle. He's just there and just following her it has you know moments of Kind of floating down Coming back up a bit floating down. You know potentially whenever she goes And gets angry comes back to the glass. He might have a little Plop like a tiny bit of a with those lower fins coming back up a bit drifting down going back up a bit drifting down That could be something potentially so, you know, she's commiserating to a fellow guy. Maybe that's They're somewhere in the on the in a market imagine like Chinatown And she's just telling that to someone else who's Trapped ready to get sold or eaten Then you can imagine like a top view would be There you go change color. So that's that's one of the guys and she's in here and the camera is around here Filming this whole right? Again, it's probably not needed at all, but I'm always thinking about stuff that is not needed Imagine they are you get walk cycles of people walking this way and this way And that's like behind all the way behind them as kind of ambient noise movement animation stuff You can't even draw straight that line. So you got your Imagine this would be your Your aquarium maybe like this like a table here and he's on a different one And I got my super delayed awesome tool again So and then you got some sand here the bubble stuff and some grass and she's saying all that stuff here This guy's listening to here, but you can kind of see all the way back Then you can have legs I'm thinking what even if there's some legs in the foreground that walk by and I'm only thinking about this when she says There are a lot of don'ts What is she saying? Let me erase I gotta erase this before playing this Can't make a good soup can't do a handstand in a pool can't spell the word lieutenant There's a lot of cats in my life right now. Not that you have to incorporate the sound I wasn't thinking about the sounds and having someone walk, but I'm thinking when she goes Lieutenant there's a lot of cats in my life right now. Okay, it's gonna be very complicated, but This is probably way too much I still be curious to see it in so imagine again You click on man. This is way too long. Why did I email him? two aquariums cameras here right and As they say as they walk again, there's no real auditors to support the market I'm just throwing out ideas here where you know, you see stuff in the background You see just legs going back and forth. It's a busy busy area. You might argue. Maybe it's just a Dentist office, which might be too much like finding Nemo But I hear the sound, you know of high heels on the floor, whatever But imagining right she delivers the whole line and we see about this much of the scene But we see all the way back Guys listening and she's talking talking talking until she has that moment towards the end Where is that pause and Imagine she goes back and forth telling the guy right tells him goes back Tells him goes back and on the go back you have legs in the foreground walking and That's what catches her eye Right and she follows that and kind of does a turn and that's why there's the pause and Then she goes well. There are a lot of cans right now in my life. That's the line I'm already feeble in my brain. I can't remember but that's what she says right So the leg goes this way it kind of visually brings her around and she follows her She follows those legs with her eyes and then says that line and at the very end right now I'm at the very end right now. She would have a head dart and I dart looking back at the guy Right that makes sense. I wish I could activate my camera right now And I stopped on at the very beginning so I could act out with my face, but that's the idea right where she would She would say this Hold on let me stop this and copy paste my awesome acting. Hold on. All right. I'm back and this time with a camera So I'm saying at the very end right so I'm gonna go back to So imagine she says all this and again, I'm gonna draw a tool imagine. There's Worst critique ever, but you know surprised by that right so you got the glass here glass here, right? She says all that stuff here guys listening That's my guy. I don't why don't I was drawing scribbles right and you see stuff going in the background Then you got you know the grass and blah blah blah blah and you can have those movies where she goes away talks Have some when I play this yeah, there's a lot of camps in my Can't make a good soup can't do a so she goes forward can't make a good soup like then again good soup I remember that real The thing with prison food that might worry me is that someone might try to poison a prisoner and I might accidentally get the plate That was meant for the intended victim That would be bad. Let me know if you don't know that what real I'm talking about with the Nemo and you got you got Ellen DeGeneres right you got that head thingy. That's totally reacting there. So she goes Can't make a good soup can't can't make a good soup can't make a good soup hole I can't make a good soup and then turn around Can't do a handstand in a pool can't can't do a handstand in the pool But she would do that like floppy like can't do a handstand in the pool like that that that like that would be kind of a beat You could hit Can't spell the word lieutenant. So then she could she okay. Let's go back right. She goes back here Then and then and can it goes to in the pool and she will go up and Then kind of float down Tenant can spell the tenants spell the word lieutenant. Let me erase this again here here It's the most confusing thing ever right Can't make a good soup. Can't so she goes can't make a good soup to the guy turns around Can't do a handstand in a pool can't can't do a handstand in the pool like that that that up goes up holds this Can't spell the word lieutenant Can't and then you know can't with the head of it. She goes down can't float again down can't spell tenants Right spell the word lieutenant can't spell the word lieutenants and on lieutenants That's when you have those ginormous legs boom boom going in front of her screen from between the camera and her There's a lot of camps in my life. So she would say This is a part where I'm acting Lieutenant there's a lot of cancer lieutenant like lieutenant that she goes this way right and then legs grow this way lieutenant and then she's the legs and has a moment of Right, so she follows that and at the very ends There's a lot of camps in my life right now see can't stand in a pool can't spell the word lieutenant There's a lot of camps in my life right now Something like that where she goes like that has that has those legs I mean that type of thing where The word lieutenant there's a lot of camps in my life right now Something like that where she she can't spell the word lieutenant follows the legs and as the legs go off screen We just see her Staring like there's a lot of cans in my life right now like mine is really nothing I can do but at the end I can live my life right now, and I like you know with the fish who would be like Goes around And does and addresses the guy at the very end again just like the very beginning it's full circle And he would be like whatever like yeah, you're kind of a weird fish whatever, but it would be like So that way you have that foreground element for contrast and it motivates her acting It gets her out of that funk right she complains complains complains Why she's suddenly snapping out again? You could have it without legs in the foreground, but it could be something where she was Yeah You imagine like you're doing something and you're going and you're being snapped out of that and realize oh man Yeah, I've been complaining man This is why I'm complaining and then that's your your ending. That's kind of what I would do Long story short. I hope it helps you're probably going what? But that's what I have all right. Thank you All right There's an email you can sign up you can start whenever you want you can submit whatever you want You get 16 submissions either way like and subscribe would be awesome. All right. Thank you