 Alrighty, here is a new versions watch this whole thing in full Two shots here and ready for it All right, cool. So What I would say It's all coming along well at my biggest Thoughts are my main thoughts are for this section here, but let's go That is a bit poppy up and down it's probably Up and down and then especially here where it's only really pops down hard Into this not that, you know, you can do things snappy, but It's probably the way I'm reacting if you have such pronounced up and downs Especially with this but at the same time there's no real visible change in here in Terms of breakup You're super fancy. That means nothing with if the chest goes down you would have, you know A bit of a drag in the head and so on Special something like this where she goes down. I would have her go up a bit drag a bit in a Sly go forward not much but hit the head here But also things like the spacing of the head going forward to here bam And then goes back up. So that's like a one frame direction change hit. I think all of that plus Here when she goes up and floats and her arms go up, but there's nothing really in the shoulder It's all very straight, but there's nothing in the chest There's no complication in terms of maybe one arm goes, you know If this is even more pronounced in terms of offset and that would bring the chest over this way a more rotated in why It's just everything feels a bit stiff and in one axis if that makes sense That just feels a bit stiff here with the up and down and Then here again, you're going up here first So there might be a bigger change in terms of the overall body Pushing this up with the shoulder Then this arm finally gets up and pushes more which could get her get her over this side a bit more Just look like that or even here. Maybe one of the legs I mean this one goes further first here There might be something in the rotation of the hips and then the push off and then a side-to-side That with a bit of a change just everybody feels just a bit too Simplified and stiff That makes sense And I'm looking up Not that you have to make dramatic changes to this in terms of she's looking back at us and then Going looking forward and turning just I think there's also the feeling of Maybe the repetition the stiffness because of all It's not that long. I thought was it's always like could we break this up where she would have Maybe just finished a look back. I know this is a massive change. I don't do this But my thought was this is ever so slightly repetitive. Is there anything we can do to break this up a bit? Where maybe she is more bent over and then gets up, but then it might be too bent up and then bent down again I don't want to be super destructive in the know But just a general feeling of is there anything Potentially more interesting that we could add even maybe like the arc or how the arm is out. Maybe just a swing Here are arm wise is way different than here. Maybe that will already help But I like I mean I still like all the ideas and how she gets up here jump into a Super Mario something double jump The super mario have a double jump now. I don't know The super mario have a double jump so many characters have double jumps to be honest I don't think super mario has double jumps. Wow after 30 years or more playing. I don't remember But yeah, I like the mechanics a lot in all of this here This is cool. I like how she gets in here. I like the complications of just the how the arms crossover Watch out this feels like you there's some Intersection stuff or a bit too loose too soon on the fingers. Maybe that could be tighten up a bit here Here it gets a bit too IK where that is really stuck there Bit of a too evenly spaced out fingers goes grouping little polish here and there But the main thing that I have is that she comes in here is all this energy Sits down. I do like here that she's more leaned over But then watch out gets a bit too twin there Could be a bit more pushed in the asymmetry and just offsets there, but once she gets here This is the thing she goes. Oh Okay, come on But there's something about this where if she's really that exhausted because now we're getting into This look and the lean over and I would then really push her shoulders further down. Well, though, they are further down here That's from her inhale. Okay, never mind forget what I said, but it just feels rushed where it feels like she should be Okay, what's going on here? Come on just a bit of a longer Moment, but then my question to you is would that be too weird because you have all this energy With too long of a rest here Cut too much into the flow of this So this is where I'm at. I'm slightly torn about This moment where it feels a bit pose to pose both arms go rip It just feels rushed again And also a bit stiff how she goes from here to here versus Like this doesn't feel comfortable. They almost be like a lean this way Oh Then back into huh, then you can change this into that Change of the spine Into that but even this in terms of come on feels So isolated through there while this is still here where I feel like there would be a bigger change Especially if you're leaving this pose for being exhausted You're going through some mental changes of I'm exhausted and then Wait a minute where it's a baby surprise Aggregation or you know like frustration into ah, and then maybe that arm goes back up Like I feel like it's too simple in its approach of Sitting down pose to pose stuck in this pose where only this is moving Despite quite a change in the motion of Or just general attitude of you know, I don't know how emotional she is but going in that getting ready Exhausted waiting realizing that's not working frustrated. Let's go. It just feels almost a bit too casual Which is that our move there? And even then as it goes down you think that I will let's get ready Maybe while this goes down. She's still adjusting. Maybe the weight shift over doing something with her hands. I don't know This might all just be too much. This is my general reaction as always these you know feedback sessions are all very subjective, but That's the thought that I have for this Alrighty, let me know what you think All right, there's an email you can sign up you can start whenever you want you can submit whatever you want You get 16 submissions either way like and subscribe would be awesome. All right. Thank you