 I think this is pretty cool. So if you watch this with the volume down a bit, I think all I would do is You know, he seems really Really upset. So to me there are a couple poses that kind of soften that too much This beginning pose and this end pose is a bit much. I'm gonna tell you why Also, first I didn't I mean if this anything you can do to make this more like a phone I know this is a minor thing, but I wasn't quite understanding what he was doing At first I was looking at what this is then I realized I'll get worried that sound is that someone on the phone Okay, this block is a phone. Let's make sure that that's very clear That that's me is the best part, I know you're gonna laugh but watch his head Because he seems very very upset finally can hear in the voice how he has a problem saying things and all that stuff And that section is really that's gonna really sell the twitchy nature You know that he's in right now So anything as you continue on to add all the detail is to have that in the hands But a lot of it is in the head and this right now I mean, I know this is rough But you know, I would avoid things where he's moving slowly and moving arms slowly and stuff like that And you could have things where Like you could you could have him like this in the head a bit higher up and looking around him But he can also be nervous, you know You can also think about what someone's gonna see me so you can you can look around and have that a bit higher and then What are you saying? So when she says that dart down like he looks down. It's almost like he's Surprised and shocked. Oh, wait, there's someone there So he could be looking to the left Then looks down and has you know, I darts like imagine He is looking at this point this point this point this point this point is always looking always looking Yeah, not crazy. I darts that he never focuses, but you know, definitely a lot of nervousness and panic and just and just it's just shaken and then you can he can It could be staring the way you have it here People who weren't alive anymore and then you go back into all we have here And then that I like with the shoulder I would just push that, you know and have probably his hands Really on his body Those are my shoulders Right, I really bring the shoulders up and I'll bring the hands of the chest You know, like he's really he's almost trying to squeeze himself and like squeezing those words out And that is my like, oh, I'm so tired so I'll be careful like that would be really Clamping the fingers And you know, you could have the hands flat on the table with fingers almost like you know can up imagine now if you put your hand down on your table or where we are and now Rotate up the fingers and like tense in those like imagine you're doing this with slight slides on the table You know, it's making very very tense and uncomfortable And then this this is more like oh, I like to me open palms and everything and head inside It's very comforting almost so that to me you will be And also we don't see the face anymore and it doesn't the sound doesn't sound muffled like he has his hand over his mouth So imagine you're doing this right, but if there's any way with the pose and it could be maybe it might look weird But you can see how much you can get away with it where the head is Yeah, I see I want to actually the To call like the Foreheads, you know, so the mouth is here And then that's his head So the forehead is on the table and then imagine if you can somehow bring it in without covering the face The hand is up here and is holding the top part you know That type of pose Here so he has his arms above the head and you can see The mouth and that way forehead on table is not comfortable and he's still not comfortable You know, I mean so you choose a pose and the way he is Interacting with things that also makes it uncomfortable and he is you know, definitely still uncomfortable But yeah, that's it very cool. Those are kind of my own little tweaks that I would suggest thanks All right, there's an email you can sign up you can start whenever you want You can submit whatever you want you get 16 submissions either way like and subscribe would be awesome. All right. Thank you