 Let's watch this real in full first. There's sound later It's so cute. I love the shot. This is for a general real evaluation Love that render This one it just feels like the lip sync is off I don't know if it's me. I could open it in a different player, but So just in case So it's open this up or I have already be able to see careful with that That's the most powerful train gun on the sloth Yeah, and then just in case Quick time That's the most powerful train gun on the market. Huh got her Mexico Seems a bit better Be careful with that. That's the most powerful train gun on the market. Got her Mexico cool Interesting it feels a bit more accurate and continue with this player. Just in case for now Making this sounds a beautiful thing is cool. They say it can puncture the skin of a rhino from Yeah, I got some notes in the expression Yes That's awesome Feels clean it there. I'm just double check That's awesome Yeah, it might just be maybe it's a length of the the real Let me just double check here moving this up separately I mean, it's not a big file I'm gonna keep watching this in quick time though Just to make sure that I get this all with the right timing ish Still double check on your end These are all cool renders It's all definitely a really strong reel all the timing and all this is great. I remember this one so good Wait for it Back to that I can see why you want to cut this up because it's a longer piece I think totally works cool camera work in there Now this being all fully rendered. I'm not sure how much you want to go back in there in terms of changes But just thinking out loud So if I go back to this just because I can do my horrible scribbles So this is all totally fine Again, I love this. I love the change Into this It's all very very cute sometimes and stuff like that. It feels a bit So twins per se from a visual thing was it's shorter here. We see the full arm here, but technically they're kind of Mirrored and where I would give this that is nice and appealing now You might argue well you go from here to here. That's a nice contrast But I would still probably have something where even if this arm is further out here and then something with tighter claws and This out straighter give us gives us a bit more a Symmetry So watch this again. It's all fine. Move a squishy Hold out Could be argued to bounce off a bit sooner and just have the To squash on here, but that that one frame here Taking out of the body. So it's like the big body mass is But the head is doing a squish Over maybe yeah, this distracts can be a bit too parallel there. This is all super cute Yeah, the actions are really really great. It's gonna frame through this just because it's so cute Great stuff on the wings. I Will like this too where we got the foreground element as a big blur and Wipe into almost a different shot That's great too with the delay here such a chop. I mean look at that. It's beautiful render nice lighting there Love all that. Got the nice silhouette there I love that little with the stretchiness Potentially have maybe one pinky further in and one further out a bit Just something where it's not default spread even here a little bit of grouping And something and even could even be a This where maybe one of these curls up a bit higher and then comes back down a bit more together It's kind of pushing that potentially just a bit more Even this here. This is I But then the fingers are all saying the same so this could be rotating in Maybe bring this up a bit and curling the fingers in a bit more It's cute to how you have that here And then also slight offsets where toes fingers to own but the same time And watch out. It feels like you're slightly locked right towards the end where they could be never so slight continuation that tail and Just the it's tiny bit Be careful with that This is all cool like that Where is it going here you can Potentially push this when Eye goes down where this is it pushes just that region out shapewise a bit more not going out too high here Center it's like if that That would be out here It wouldn't be perfectly round it would have a little bit of a bump through there. So be this bump There i'm exaggerating but just something where imagine like that this shape kind of pushes the The eyelid shape around a bit more that's the only thing I would say since you're already so close up Be careful with that That's the most powerful train gun on the market Yeah, just check your lip sync Got her in mexico probably just me Super picky on something like that. It's almost like you want to bring that shape over here with the trees and everything So it's always clear like that This is extremely picky sound like anybody would not hurry because of this but just because it's overlapsing It's almost there. It's like might as well keep it clean Because you have a nice clean color silhouette here. Yeah, all that stuff is cute Borderline tangent there, but it's just right. They say it can puncture. It's a really nice stuff with the ears They say it can puncture the skin of a rhino from This again might just be because of the Uh the sound being off But there's like a double sound That ah since it's almost like you want to go Something with like maybe uh Where it's this also feels fairly symmetrical where you can maybe push one side of the shape and then ah We're really out extremes And then that It's also Oh pushing maybe the jaw forward a bit of an oo shape just a bit more Feels like we can push that just all that a bit more even this could be I'm starting to fall asleep and then maybe gets A bit like a broader asymmetry in the eye We're losing one a bit more that could be a bigger droop in one side. I mean like one side was the The the dart is here. So imagine it radiates out in terms of where The tranquilizer happened. So maybe this side is more affected first than the other It's kind of pushing. Uh, maybe even part of a tongue comes out Yes, that's all cool That's awesome. I like that. I like that a lean over Yeah, that's all cool. Maybe as they push when you lean I see something in there, but it could be potentially a bit stronger with With that over maybe the index goes out into a grouping of two and only one finger out You can tighten up those two. Maybe that index there It's kind of giving you a bit more of a Impact since we're leaning so far over the slight rotation So you have a nice move here But then I would also combine that with a post change So maybe now the fingers would be spread out here and then spread out So one two three out This is super picky, but I feel like those blasters Could like a frame or two out. I feel a bit slow. Want want want which is Just a bit faster This is all cool. The only thing with that it's a bit Draggy overlapping in terms of them dragging like that Where she's not passed out, but it could be just a moment of I'm thinking in terms of She done she doesn't want to pass out. We'll hit mickey here And because of that, maybe some of the fingers are a bit tighter like she's trying Still to stay awake. This just has a slight floppy overanimated feel to it But it might just be me That's all cool. This is really cool Go back here That's all cool stuff all in focus I like that. I like that you got that change there gets a bit lost a little bit But I think it should be okay even on there. Maybe a bit of a glint here A bit of a highlight achieved a highlight. So we really understand what's going on. This is fine That's all cool Definitely pushing the timing here given the realism of this Might just be a bit fast because it's not super fast and it's been but I don't I like it. It's funny The whole thing maybe on that turn it feels so isolated that I would have a bit of a Out like the this shape will go down a bit and then back up not huge But so it's just not this almost feels like a texture rotating versus geometry. This is you know a big physical object that rotates and even when this stops thawing That would even push the body over a little bit a little bit of ambient movement personally. I will put that in there That's all super cool. I love this here That sideways and look at that. That's cool Yeah, that's really really cool This I reviewed in a previous anim challenge upload if you can see there It's so good though. I mean, it's really super big. You watch this once like this is really cool Love also the textures here So the only thing I saw when I was watching this here is when it goes like that. It's almost a bit Wait for it and Hey, it's a bit slow And it's always the same angle Same thing here, I think it would be kind of neat do not just be one axis but go a bit of a Let's go and it's almost one side is stronger. So imagine it goes a bit in an S curve But also a bit scramblier a bit faster But then imagine it's starting to go up sideways that wall Just a bit and then goes back down up here and then straight. So it's a bit of a RIP Like it's it's scrambly because of that lose a little bit of its grip to then be straight towards the end because it's curved Uh environment be kind of fun to be like that Instead of this just was like a cycle going forward. That's all cool I think the only thing I would do is storing feels a bit even I think this could be one here and then one may be higher Just giving the a better sense of I'm stuck it out of control It feels almost too in control because it's so mirrored It's like that. That's cool. So that gives just enough of a change That's cool. Then we got that And that's that That's a really really strong reel Absolutely love it This just look wise A cool line choices Lots of mechanics lots of also cool acting there. I know it's really cool. 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