 All right, let's play this in full first. There's no sound making all sounds here and And That Now this was for the Adam challenge Submission that's a word. That's it. That is a word now It's very cool. My main Comment will be just on timing. I Think there's some cool stuff I would say I'm always a big fan of Just involving more of the body even if it's cartoony even if it's in a subtle way So when you have your arm moving especially towards the end here You see a bit of a downwards move on in the head. It's a fantastic era on the head here But then once you go back It still feels like there is a complete disconnect between What the arm is doing and how the arm is affecting the rest of the character even this cartoony I don't know how it's still add a feeling of that the shoulder gets pulled back and then the chest turns in Why a little bit with an ever so slight move through here? I you can keep this dead, but imagine there's there's basically energy coming from that arm movement that then fans down Into here and you can imagine there's a lot of moving in the shoulder That little bit in the chest and it really just fades out into nothing, but I would still add just a little bit It just gives you it to me feels like the character feels more connected. There's just some more There's just more to it in terms of Character being alive. I know this is this is you can get very very You know minimalistic in terms of animation But if I look at the ends when you have all of this here This is not a post-to-post, you know, Bocoyo style Which is kind of pops from from one thing to the next you have smooth transition transitions You have arcs you have ease in you can see it in the fingers. So there's there's a lot of detail here Now you might argue maybe this character now in this state is more animated and has more details more lifelike And this is more cartoony. Maybe I mean I could be an argument, but it's it's a hard sell because I don't see it You know, I don't see that progression. I don't if that's very clear if that is an intention So to me it feels like you want to add more stuff here and then you can see it as you go Through that so when you drink same thing here, there's just that's a it's a bigger move And even this could have a little bit in here and a little bit in the shoulders in the chest And even the head could come up just a little bit on that closing of the mouth So to me, those are just little things and even just that is it gets so minimal That I would either leave it like this, but then simplify that in terms of the style just like here But again, it's all kind of depends if that was intended to be super minimal and that a bit more Fluid and advanced and going through this here, you know, it'd be stuff like that. It just seems so Cut off in terms of you know this section. There's animation. The rest is not Because you might argue you can go into hotel tea type of style all through here But then it's just that the change through What this is but again, I mean again I'm says a couple times now, but they can argue an argument can be made between well That's one style and you can see it in the in the design versus this totally different It's designed a bit more realistic So the animation could be also more realistic. So I'll leave that up to To you if you want to change that but going back to the original comments Let's pretend we leave the animation how it is, right? It's all cool. I like all this you got that Twirl pause and then the timing is cool here. I like that. You got a little pause and then All of that is cool once you get into the transformation it just feels a bit one two three four five six and boom and That's it. So to me it feels like I would just vary up the timing here. So It's almost like you can go into this one big thing and it's almost like you can hold this with potential You know, there could be some Shaking this that could be like one big thing of what is this? Ah and then So they have like one big one pause and this is just a different rhythm where these guys could be fast as fast Maybe into that last one last one holds into Into this where you wouldn't hold this as long where it would be more like I can say hold long long long Whole long long in it Do a faster move of this but then once you're in here and I'll be careful. Maybe not have that to twin there He comes and looks at this the thing is Again, it's hard to know in this but he seems very inquisitive. Hmm. I wonder what's going on here and then he goes hmm Wondering hmm, what is going to happen and then this happens? So my question is is this what he expected or do we want to push this a bit further where? But basically looks like here's one hand Look at my other hand And I'm okay Could this be a bit more a holy moly and then maybe you look at that hands But then you straighten the fingers out and maybe you make a fist and straighten out again And then he maybe it just looks down and it's a bit more exaggerated pose where Imagine that's a horrible pose there, but imagine He looks down at his feet and then maybe brings up one foot imagine leg is here So maybe looks at his foot or or taps his body and maybe squeezes the hips like oh what's going on? I totally change maybe wants to pull on his body a bit and then That ends would then tell us. Well, is he happy like if you take the face off It's kind of a default thing so the end could be yes or holy moly or oh no or just something where to me you want to push the you know Telling the audience how he feels basically when I would push that more he seems a bit. There's one hand There's one hand. All right, and then that's it. I think you could yeah, I feel like to push that a bit more But again, this was for an item challenge So then true there was time restrictions and shot length restrictions and all that stuff So it's not like you can just add whatever you want in there But if you if you wanted to continue on this shot, these will be my thoughts It's totally up to you as always to do what you want to do with them other than that. I like it So fun rinks some nice poses It's fun stuff that you can do there and I like that transition into Into this guy too have the legs change and all that it's neat So yeah, I mean If you want to be able to put more in there where Potentially instead of a gradual thing. Oh, this is very tricky But you know, maybe the legs maybe the feet turn black first into this and then as it's done here Maybe the hands would be you know the white cuffs and and that would be the last thing And maybe the arms straight now and then pound and then the fingers are the last thing to Change and maybe that cuff comes off and then who disappears I think maybe if you want to polish this up that transition through here could be a bit more interesting a bit more complex But again, that's totally up to you. Anyway, I'm sorry to ramble. So I'm gonna leave it here Let me know email be your thoughts how you want to proceed I just want to get one critique for this or if you want to make any changes. All right. Thank you All right, there's an email you can sign up You can start whenever you want you can submit whatever you want you get 16 submissions either way the like and subscribe would be awesome All right. Thank you