 So let's examine question number two. Okay. So we've already done question number one. Let's look at number two The great thing about number two is you always have the extract in front of you Of course because you have read through the insert and you have highlighted the relevant bits of the insert You can also use this insert to help you. Okay, so of course, it's this paragraph that's been selected Which you can see here. Okay, so this question of course asks you how the writer uses language to describe the heart of family This is worth eight marks. Okay, this is important to pay attention to because to be honest Only write Two separate paragraphs for this question. Okay, use the point evidence explanation method in order to write this response So given the questions asking you to talk about how languages to describe the heart of family I will probably go back to what I've already highlighted Okay, and I'll select that and as I mentioned you only want to write two paragraphs So just pick out two pieces of evidence and then you would have the first piece of evidence in your first pill paragraph And then your second piece of evidence in your second pill paragraph I would suggest selecting the heart of quotation as your first one. Okay, so this is how Heart of the father is described. Okay, and he's described as being angular man with a starved face again here It gives him a very mean expression. I will suggest the second thing to focus on is Perhaps how Alice is described here. Okay, so Alice As you can see here and then she has her arms flat as Though ironed against her side Okay, so we can see here. This is a pretty miserable family. They seem very slim They seem very timid. Okay. Now, of course, the question itself is asking you to talk about how language is used to Describe the heart of family. So you want to consider language Points you can make so here I would suggest in terms of the language point you can make for the heart of evidence the idea of him being a thin Angular man so thin and angular and then starved faced These are all adjectives Okay, so that would be the first language feature and of course this Illustrates how heart up seems quite starved but also it illustrates how ominous and threatening he appears With Alice you have a simile here as though fine flat against her side Okay, and what the simile does is it portrays Alice as quite timid very fearful quite frightened Okay, so now that we've got our adjectives to do with heart up the father and we've got a simile related to Alice Let's now write our response Of course, I'm going to start my first pill paragraph here But then I'm going to continue my second pill paragraph on this trusty piece of paper Okay, so let's go back to the questions. How does the right to use language to describe the heart of family? Okay, so I'm going to start off with the first quotation which is to do with how heart up was Was driving a thin angular man starved faced? Okay? So let's start with our point now use the bit of the question to begin your answer. Okay, so you could say the writer effectively users language to describe how thin and starved Every body is in the heart up family as We can see the father seems a maciated Okay, so here maciated means really starved really skinny. Okay So now what I'm going to do is I'm going to go for this piece of evidence when you're introducing evidence So just to be clear, this is my point. Okay, I've talked about how the writer effectively uses language And I'm talking about how they seem really starved quite emaciated. Okay, and especially now I'm going to focus on the father now with my evidence. I'm going to try to embed my quotation I'm not going to write the whole thing out. I'm going to focus mainly on him being a thin angular man with start with a starved face Okay, so how you can embed it is you could state that heart up is portrayed as being Extremely Skinny as He is And then we put the speech marks a thin comma angular man And then we can then put ellipses with So I've put ellipses here as you can see close my speech marks with and then I'm going to open again a So I'm going to open my speech marks once more starved Faced okay, or you get to say he was a thin angular man Having a so I'm going to cross out with and I'm going to replace that with having a starved face Okay, so let's just be clear. This is the point the writer effectively uses language to describe how thin and starved Everybody is in the heart of family as we can see the father seems emaciated. Okay, we skinny Starved heart of his portrayed as being extremely skinny as he is open speech marks a thin angular man ellipses close speech marks having a speech marks starved face Okay, so this is now including these two this entire quotation So we've got our evidence now. Let's have our explanation within the explanation. I will suggest adding in a language technique so here we could say the writer Uses the adjectives thin close speech marks angular and Starved Okay, so as you can see here with the adjectives. I've also quoted again thin angular and starved as three separate words Okay, because I'm focusing in on these adjectives to illustrate how skinny and Miserable The entire heartop family appears the And then maybe you could add here some word level analysis Okay, so you could add maybe in addition to the adjectives. You could state the noun man Focuses our attention on heartop as the head of the household and his thin appearance seems to represent Just how Under Fed they all are Okay, so here's my explanation just to be clear the explanation is The writer uses the adjectives thin angular and starved to illustrate how skinny miserable the entire heartop family appears The nouns this is the word level analysis Which is still part of my explanation the noun man focuses our attention on heartop as the head of the household and his thin appearance Seems to represent just how underfed they all are okay, so that's my explanation now I need to link back to how the writer uses language to describe the heart of family. Okay, so hence the author uses powerful Adjectives and Then of course you can also borrow a few of the words that you've used in your point. Okay to reveal just how thin and Starved heartop and By extension His family appear To be okay, so let's go back to the link Okay, so you've got your point evidence explanation now the link hence the author uses powerful adjectives to reveal just how thin and starved heartop And by extension his family appear to be going back to the question Okay, now let's proceed. So this is the first pill paragraph. Let's proceed to the second pill paragraph. Okay So again using a bit of the question in terms of how languages used to describe the heart of family Given that this is your second point. You could say secondly the writer and This is if you remember the quotation relating to Alice Okay, so we're gonna go back to this quotation relating to how Alice she seems to have her arms very flat as though I end against her side. Okay. So secondly the writer This is my second pill paragraph. Okay, so this is my point Secondly, the writer powerfully uses language to describe just how timid and fearful some members of the heart of family are as Alice is depicted as quite timid and fearful I've mentioned Alice here, but I've also made sure to mention the heart of family Okay, making sure that I am answering the question and the key words which have highlighted within the question Now let's move on to the piece of evidence and as I mentioned the evidence that we're gonna use is her arms flat as though I end against her side. Okay. So now let's introduce the evidence and always try to embed your quotations. Okay So you can state Alice appears Here's the evidence So Alice is appears to be quite stiff and uncomfortable as her arms. Okay, so this is in speech marks are Flat as though I end against her side. Okay, so as you can see here, I have embedded my quotation Okay, so you've got my point. I've got my evidence here Now, let's move on to the explanation and as we know with the explanation We're gonna be talking about the fact that this is a simile and maybe also the word level analysis You can mention is you can pick out maybe another word for example The noun arms or the pronoun her or even for instance, you could talk about the repetition of these pronoun Okay, so this pronoun which of course highlights just how timid how uncomfortable Alice seems to be. Okay, so let's move on to the explanation the writers use of Simile Okay, so here's the explanation. I've mentioned language. Okay. Remember simile is a language point And I've also mentioned another language point in my word level analysis, which is the pronoun her Okay, so the writers use of simile depicts the heart of family as tense and fearful as Alice appears to be extremely uncomfortable Despite being in the presence of her parents the pronoun her makes us focus on how uncomfortably Alice is sitting in the van Okay, she doesn't seem like she belongs. So now let's link it back to the question and again in your link You can also borrow some of the wording from your second point therefore Okay, so I would say that is my link therefore the heart of families depicted as quite sad and timid Alice appears extremely ill at ease and She is portrayed as not even fitting in with the family. She seems scared of her parents So I would say that is the second point. So let's just be clear going back to question number two I would suggest you want to write one pill paragraph as you can see here and then the second pill paragraph and then you move on Okay, because it's eight marks. You don't need to do any more. Just move on So that is it if you enjoyed this style of video Why give you a more direct demonstration of exactly how to go through each question piece by piece Do let me know okay because I'd be more than happy to produce more videos in this style and more Lessons within this framework. Okay, so if you have enjoyed this video Do make sure you let me know and I'll be more than happy to produce more videos in a similar format Thank you so much for listening