 Alrighty, let's play this in full first is fairly long with sound All right, so that's the shot or the sequence not just the shot so right off the bat I'm gonna email you with more questions about that in for details My concern is how long it is because it's gonna be a ton of work Secondly with the sound once this kicks in it feels like or it sounds like The room tone with the people that's one layer of sound And then clearly this that kicks in And then this sound I can totally room with echo Some reverb, I don't some reverb, but anyway, it just it feels a bit too much And then we're in here just gets just a lot of sound. This is the first things. It's really long and Then the sound I'm not sure about that one. I'm sure we can do some fixing there And then the couple things where That's fine, I mean terms of what's clear what's not clear That's fine like a over there. She apologizes for him. That's fine. Then he wants to do that Okay, that's fine. She doesn't want to sing and then this is really long To me I would I'm not sure if you need this where I mean you might argue. Well, this is his thought process He thinks about and goes I don't know but It is again adds to the length of the whole sequence. I think this could even be I mean Personally, I feel like we need to trim this down, but you let me know the email like what your plans are in terms of Desperations of like how long you want really we're gonna sequence you want to make the shorter like what you're willing to do or change Then you get to this That's fine And I don't mind that because he's playing with this just watch out with the cut how he Suddenly has that in his mouth, but I think it works in terms of Him being a goofy character But then this really stood out as feeling out of place I think to me is more like she is making fun of him and This feels I don't suppose odd that suddenly she has that and then it's also it's gone right away So personally I would take that out on it's more about her and his face making fun of him without that She doesn't have to hold this and then to get away. So again, I mean it's So the line starts here and you can see that in my timeline. I mean it's ends past that so if I bring this in Like such here, so let's say how about like that You can see how long that Timeline is so all of this has sound so that's my concern This actually sets it up nicely and I like all this I like the interaction like then her look I think this is all cool But yeah, it's just going to be a lot of work and that's totally up to you since you're gonna be the one doing all the work So that's my biggest thing is watch out for the sounds Can you have a discussion about about how long the sequence is or you absolutely set on making it that long? So anything we can cut shorter like this moment here Are you totally married to this moment? You want her to be like that? So to me it's kind of parsing out also your Your view on things and what you want to do when you want to change These are for me the broader things that would probably give me a bigger idea And a better idea of what to comment on and we can continue an email form for planning and that's that's thanks All right, there's an email you can sign up you can start whenever you want you can submit whatever you want You get 16 submissions either way like and subscribe would be awesome. All right. Thank you