 Hello freedom family and welcome to the next episode of reviews for you guys I am in the absolute awe of the response that I got for the first video. I am thank you I'm so grateful. Thank you for all your advice and all your Inputs and a lot of the criticism has been noted and I hope I've changed that in this this episode So if you could just if you can let me know in the comments below how it's going then fab if not No worries, but hey, oh, let's jump into the first channel and our first channel is crazy cause now yet again as I said back snack sorry if I butchered the name I tend to do that quite a bit and The first thing I see the moment I come into the channel is you've got obviously avatar Which is crazy cause just a cc a bit bland I will try and maybe play around some graphical things try to get some fancy going or just some it's very eye-catching The colors okay, because obviously with the blue on the white background. It's very you can catch with the eye quite easy So I would say one thing only and it's done the banner. So like um banners very plain Well, the plus side is you've got your links as you we can see here So that's all good and sorted beneficial Isn't it to have all your links there and ready for people to follow you ever arouse as well as just your YouTube? YouTube isn't the only platform you need people think of Twitter. Google wow Google plus me But we've got a Facebook freedom pages for example. He's actually linked to freedom pages quite cool I haven't said that so anyone do that one yet, but yeah, so the banner is quite bland I would say go in poke around at the freedom forms because there are so many gfx artists Currently offering free Banners it's it's phenomenal the amount of people that are offering this much stuff So anymore, there's no excuse for playing banners anymore But what I didn't do in my last episode and I'm quite shameful for not doing it is playing these two YouTube trailers, so Let's get into the first trailer now remember as George did state You've got 10 seconds to all me and then we're going to you for 20 seconds if I think it's impressive Or if I don't get bored so hopefully in the first 10 seconds. It's a good one Gameplay this is a channel for you So now I'm going to right so the first 10 seconds is up so for the first 10 seconds I do feel that he's put his name across he's put where he likes He's invited me as a viewer. I understand him and because of that I want to watch the next 10 seconds. Let's do that That you may expect on this channel. So yes hit it So what I really would say is with your YouTube channel trailer is Make the viewer excited I'm the first 10 seconds were fine But then once I sort of get into the next 20 I get bored again and it's sort of I sort of click away from it So maybe the next time you do a trailer and just keep that in mind I'm not saying it's the worst trailer by all means it's actually fine trailer itself But just keep that in mind next time so your thumbnails looking dandy The only thing I would say is maybe make them a bit more visible And I don't know if it's just me but whenever there's just a white font It's really hard to see and especially with the light blue here So I wouldn't be able to see that if I was just like browsing around and that's kind of what you want You want your thumbnails to be the first piece of eye candy. They see like with food for example, right? You know The first your first bites with your eyes. It's the same sort of scenario here So if it looks appealing to me, I'm gonna watch it overall guys I would say the channel is worth checking out and the main question today is Will I subscribe? And I believe I will so good job crazy cause. Thank you and and next channel for today Forgive me on names again But this one is a lupus RB Alex. So Noticeably straight away. I like the avatar I think the avatars actually really cool and it's quite unique but then we get to the banner and Yes, you've got all your links, which is brilliant But the banner seems to me like I'm not an offensive way. I want to say but it's kind of made him paint it It's the colors don't really match I'd like to give you a banner another revamp and see if you can get looking very smart I really not everyone's familiar with photoshopping gimp and whatnot, but there's so many tutorials out there It's absolutely You'll be absolutely a master of it in a week So if not like I said previously in the previous Reveal there are so many people on the freedom forms doing gfx go give them about I'm sure they can get some Together for you, but it does give you your links and what you do Before I even look at your video. So it does its job, but it just needs to look a little bit more So I've noticed that there is no channel trailer with this guy, but you have done a one-year of lupus which Isn't really ideal So I would suggest straight away going to make a channel trailer try to get people to Come into your channel and be excited for your content But anyway, I'm gonna check it out anyway because it says featured so he also wants people to see it. So let's do it So for the first 10 seconds there is one major thing I would like to say and it it's just it's absolutely Static, so there's no for me. There was no excitement whatsoever. Maybe next time Voice over that part add a bit of music and get the get the vibe up beat. So it's a bit It's a bit too slow to start. So if you what if you do go and make a channel trailer just bear that in mind So we're gonna play the next 10 seconds Okay, so just get my issue is again because it isn't a channel trailer we aren't getting the necessary information about you and Yet again my advice to you would be make a channel trailer because it doesn't do the job you want it to do really so Not it's the worst thing in the world, but I would keep it mine a channel trailer So as I come down from below the video, I do notice thumbnails are there got quite a selection of playlists Which is very good Which means people can binge watch as I'm looking at the videos. So so the main things I would say is The thumbnails do their job But I would make them more appealing because I find that a few of them are pretty hard to Catch on to really quick for example this one and now I know that by reading the title that that's a vlog I can sort of see the Q&A April at the top Maybe make that a bit bigger and a bit more visible and see if you all would say about your fun and thumbnails But apart from that, I would say that lupus. I'm excited to see what you're gonna do in the future I hold you to your channel trailer will I subscribe? Yes, because I want to see that trailer You guys for joining me today in these channel reviews So if there's any any tips you guys want to hear if there's anything you want me to check out Just let me know in the comments below if you like the way the video is presented at the moment Let me know if you don't like it. Let me know in the comments below. I'm open to criticism. I won't cry a Bit well, I might cry a little bit, but it's okay because you won't hear it but anyway guys, thank you ever so much for coming and Peace and I hope you see you in the next one to her a bite