 All right, let's go from beginning here. There is no sound the parent comes in to save the day cool All right. All right. So let's go back Definitely have a different idea I'm wondering the couple things. I think this is it definitely has Cool ideas. I love this. I love this last shot Watch out just for posing that it's not like he feels very straight very straight through there So it could be something where it's just it's a bit more maybe even like in a in a triangle pose and You know, maybe elbow up a bit more so that the staff the spear is a bit more in a diagonal. It's got to be more Dynamic when it's in a diagonal I like this that it's fighting against it. My question is Since he is about to attack Why does he stop? I think you would have to do something where he is almost in the middle of it like around here And then and you have a couple of stones here, you know some bushy things and stones and then Big shake that moves the stones around and then he kind of stops almost past it Because right now he stops for no reason. There's nothing that makes him stop Suddenly he looks over there, but then why It's a delayed reaction. I mean like there's nothing that really stops him So for me, it would be As he's about to do it a big tremble And that's what throws him off He might even take like a little stumble step and go like what's going on and looks around I realize oh crap. This is this is probably not a good idea That would be idea one and an idea two is that I'm just wondering fists together Head away from this To me is almost too human If that makes sense. It's not to me an animalistic response To this like does this creature know What this weapon is what it can do So to me it almost would be you do this and then you got that big stomp and then Because it stumbles or because the creature has this character here stumbles because of the big shake It passes past the guy here And with like a and it maybe even Bites into it. You mean like it's almost like bites onto it And he's kind of struggling going. Oh man This this rumble made me miss and now I'm struggling with this guy, but now I'm looking over And This guy looks over and kind of lifts the head So then you have something like this and he holds on to the staff And then it's less of him going. I'm going to throw my staff away. It's basically just I'm going to let go While the dinosaur You know holds the staff still so he's really It's not even his choice to lose this this guy has the upper hands the parent comes in And this guy runs away That will be you the second thing and the third thing this feels a bit soft Those steps feel a bit soft especially or especially depends if you're going with the with the Shockwave idea here But then I would definitely make this a lot stronger and have the stones would you know tremble bit This could tremble a little bit Definitely a bit stronger And then what I would do is instead of this down When he runs away, that's okay, but I will go down and then Goes up meaning that at this point It's up here I'm towering over my child because I am protecting it And now that I know that that red creature is gone I'm going to go down to be close to it to protect it again in terms of proximity If that makes sense It's a lot of if that makes sense a lot of subjective thoughts, but That's what I would have and actually I don't mind the overlap here. It's almost there become one You know as a as a one protective unit there So I do like that But again, subjective thoughts. I think overall it's definitely much better. It's a cool It's a cool setup Like the camera like the sets I like that we have Contrast and all that stuff in terms of size and actions. I think this is really cool the complex turn So lots of cool stuff So yeah, as always totally up to you how you want to interpret and you know, take this note It's whatever you want to use with it and that's that all right. Thanks All right There's an email you can sign up you can start whenever you want you can submit whatever you want You get 16 submissions either way the like and subscribe would be awesome. All right. Thank you