 Alrighty, let's play this in full their sound no breaking the rules doesn't make you a hero What makes you a screw up take it from me Luke one out of a million dropouts become Steve Jobs? Do you know who become losers with no jobs the other 99,000? Cool stuff here. Let me bring another volume at times. I think this works a lot better I think the only thing I would say is potentially a way to do The list of that just because we have it again here It's kind of a repeat. No, there's a slight change in the wrist orientation, but I do like this a lot. She goes from here. I Love that. It's the hand turn that leads into that turn here that's still the only thing I would say here is This gesture moving back For this arm, it feels a bit mechanical. It's a bit straight like there's no arc But it just it just feels like she's kind of retreating as if someone's pulling her back And he got this arm and this arm pulling back at the same time. There's anything you can do. I mean, what is she doing afterwards? She can do this. So what if she does? Maybe you can have a little bit of energy there one about a million with a little bit of up and down so that This will have a little boring boring So it's a bit more a bit more activity there and then on the way back She she can just lower it and bring that arm down to the sides This just kind of goes down the thing can lump down here and then and then you go up for Into this Do you know it becomes and then you have that and then that and I Still love this is great So that would be I don't know if you want to go I don't think it would be nice silhouette to go down and go play with the color silhouette I'm just my main concern is that you have this gesture and then it's kind of the same ish here I mean, could it be something where throwing it out there? Open up the hand more towards us fingers can still be somewhat together Maybe a bit bit spread out and then no and I'll know it's just a bit more of a getting into a fist Tensions like no versus no like like we talked about acting out war. It's like no And then she can lower the arm into Back here then ends up around here And then you can do that that feels like that might be just a bit more So we focus right the very beginning just on her face and it's not immediately a gesture The only other thing I would say as much as I love all this is especially the end here There's an overall feeling Where her steps just feel so I Know that feels kind of so small and It's hard to describe. I don't mind these That's a good rhythm pop up up into this But then it just becomes kind of just shuffly she's kind of shuffles pop up pop and then Like I don't mind these So it might just be this And I think probably I'm reacting is that they all kind of feel the same kind of shuffle shuffle shuffle Shuffle shuffle But but I like the rhythm there and so maybe it could be something. I mean you got to get into that pose here Sorry, that was a bing bing in there Where maybe because I'm also reacting to just the legs there. I don't mind the way they are here But what could be excuse me could be something where That is a more of a step forward It could almost be something What if you extend her legs a bit more and only at the end that here is you start to bend the knee so that when she does this It's more of a step forward so that you have a a straighter leg and imagine that will be straighter as well so you get more of a a Triangle in terms of the strong Feeling there and maybe that might not be as bent over because you're bending over here So what if you go from this to a bigger step? bit more Extended roots could be a bit higher a bit more tiring over there over over the character and Then the throw brings her body down into this for that. It's like it's a gradual lowering into what you have So that we take a little bit out of the shuffle there and This one is probably the biggest one Could that be it feels like she has Chains that you can barely walk this could be something where could you just take a bigger step Like just one two can just make like one long step and then the other step to get into this pose I'm just curious. I know it's a pain to rework this but that's the main thing that I have here in terms of me reacting to The steps so that is of course very subjective. Let me know what you think other than that I think it's really working well. We'll still love the ending So, yeah, let me know. Thank you All right, there's an email you can sign up you can start whenever you want you can submit whatever you want You get 16 submissions either way a like and subscribe would be awesome. All right. Thank you