 Cool. So we are live Guys, please let us know in the comments how our audio levels are because this has been a constant battle trying to figure out If my voice is okay, or if Jordan's voice is okay. So Jordan you talk now and say words. Oh I'm gonna say words and I'm gonna see if my voice is any different. Do we sound all right everyone? Do we sound all right? I'm waiting for the stream to go live. Yeah So go live. In the meantime while we wait for Responses this is our Monday live video critiques where we check out your videos You guys submit your video titles in the chat and we'll review your videos live You can't do links because links are blocked not even we can post links the cruel cruel world So anyways, we can't wait to check out some of your stuff And also if you're new here, my name is Mike and Jordan is our guest here today He's gonna be hanging out with us. He kind of guessed every single week. So he's more than the gas. He's a friend Yeah, yeah, by the way Mike. I am way too loud. Okay, great. So good to know I'll crank you down even more 100% and you are now at 40% so we'll give that a shot Okay, let's have a listen just see you said he sounds okay. You're lying to me. You're lying He sounds okay. Oh, I don't know Jordan sounds like this See like having a it's okay, you could be mean to me you could tell me you sound like crap turn them up turn them down My feelings aren't gonna be hurt. I promise I'm gonna listen real quick That's better way Okay, cool. So we're good to go ish give her to y'all get to go. All right, awesome So let's go ahead and get this started and stop wasting any more time playing with audio settings. Yay for audio Hello doodle pie doodle pie Alright, so the only one that I've seen so far is from Leustre gaming or lustra. Please. Let me know how to pronounce your names I can Do it. He says sorry for the gaming channel ha ha well I kind of expected we get a fair amount of gaming channels. So You're fine Not only that but a gaming channel is better to know channel at all So he said jumping buses and racing the coaster. So that's the latest video All right, you have the video or do I need to link it? I'm Then oh cool. All right. Oh Shoot See the back flip over a Ferris wheel. That's what's up that intro audio So many memories Do you remember only being able to be on the internet when and if someone call and kick you off the internet AOL needs to send you the CDs Good Lord, that was complicated. Yeah, this is ridiculous. I don't even know they had to stuff like this in GTA Oh, yeah, this looks like a simulator crap Do not compare GTA 5 with that horrendous atrocious. Hey, that's Tony cuz Tony Funkers is glitchy. All right, so what is going on in the frame is definitely really interesting As for you you are definitely tryharding right now Like Which is not a bad thing But if you're going to put a face cam and you're not going to talk a lot, it's kind of distracting in my opinion Yeah, like if what is going on in the video is primarily You know the actual gameplay then focus on the gameplay But if you're gonna actually just focus on it Then I don't really think it's necessary to put a face cam a face cam is there to help improve the overall experience You know like if you're gonna act with it or if you're gonna add some facial expressions Or if you're gonna be playing a horror game where you know, you're gonna have like some funny jump scare reaction But uh You know, it's if you're just gonna be like really focused and intense. Maybe you don't need it So that's my personal opinion with that It might not be needed for this particular video Yeah, so it's kind of it's hard to um do two things at once especially if you're a concentrating Like like I'm concentrating trying to keep you on there myself. I'm like And also do you have a friend with you playing this as well because Yeah, when I was when I was listening to it I thought that your face cam was out of sync with your audio, but then I realized it's a friend there Yeah, yeah, it sounds like there's maybe Maybe just credit him in the title or something or tell him tell everyone that he is there Possibly How was it? You gotta look man. Come on me and scott plays. Okay. Well, you know first, you know when first looks at everything Yeah, I like to read the title more than the description first Well, I guess the Big thing is just like hey guys, what's up? I'm gonna be playing the gta 5 my friend here scott And let's go and get started and then get to the game. That's it. Yeah, so you don't have to fully credit like in the title, I guess I don't do that personally So his his capturing is good it goes up to 1080 which is what we like to see And I don't see any problems with the uh Well as far as the game capturing it's fine the sound sounds amazing Um, I'm not sure about your audio because I can never hear you talk So I can't really critique on your voice on your voice But it seems that your um the frame rate of your webcam seems to be very Mushy if that makes sense. Yeah, it's Has time to catch up occasionally. Yeah Yeah, I mean if this is Like there's all different types of commentaries. There's the comedy type There's the ones where you're just showing interest interesting gameplays There's the ones where you're trying to keep people entertained by like, you know your skill level stuff like that This someone in my opinion just seems more so like you know Kind of just a fun interesting thing to watch And if that's what you're going for Then face cam just kind of distracts me in that sense But if you're going for like a commentary then you might want to put just more enthusiasm and energy into the actual commentary of it Which again is tough on especially like try hard maps like that where you have to sit there and focus so much So uh depending on what you're going for maybe try and find a different game style if you're wanting to do that funny like exciting type stuff So that way you can talk more and be more energetic with it without having to focus But uh, I do like his outro though. Yeah, the outro is pretty cool Yeah, so also I've noticed with the other videos that you you've pretty much gotten the whole View time down to a t like you've got most of your videos are about five minutes to eight minutes of eight minutes long Which for gaming videos like gta 5 that's probably ideal Yeah, so your viewers don't lose interest Yeah, so I think for what you did it's fine. The only big thing that I would suggest is uh You know, I I don't think the webcam is necessary if you're not going to use it in my opinion But if you're going to use it, you're going to talk to your audience and you're going to make funny faces and stuff That's what that's for so I'm going to go ahead and guys last week we put all the videos in the description So you guys can watch too So whenever we post up a new video you can refresh and see the featured videos So I just added that I'm going to start doing about the beginning of each critique so you guys can watch with us So There's that let's go ahead and pick another video. Thank you for submitting and thank you for being so early to the stream So we had someone to watch right off the bat so Okay, so I have somebody okay It is a long channel name the what's not really the boy wonder The boy wonder mcsg A pbp and more okay, and the video i'm sending you is the end of sky wars Okay, minecraft survival games game five What is up guys? Cool. All right, uh one second. I'm going to go ahead and throw that in the description. Good lord one. What? Sorry the intro was just way louder Oh like the music or something Wait wait for it when it comes in. Okay, it's really original though. I've never seen that before Okay, it is now in the description so you can refresh and watch with us a little bit loud Yeah, I do like your energy as far as that intro goes like when you say like hey, what is up guys and i'm at 30 frames per second Uh, yeah that part was cool, but then that intro is just really moving Yeah, yeah, but one of the one of the small things to check out is um Audio levels when you're editing your videos Yeah, if you compare it to when you're talking as to your intro the intro is like And then it goes down to Then you can't you need to sort that those levels out Yeah, you can even just look at wave forms and if they reach about the same spot Then you can know they're about even But uh for people who don't know wave wave forms are like just where where the volume's coming up It's doing that up and down thingy, but you want to make sure they are the right levels Yeah So you can't just throw your audio and there your music in there and expect to be right like when I throw my music And I normally turn it down like 20 decibels if you want to be able to hear Most definitely yeah, if it's nothing but music then I normally turn it down like negative 10, but This one's down to this one's down to a personal Thing, but I just hate it. It's the whole um the way the minecrafts laid out Like it's all like catfish II style Oh the field of view Yeah Yeah, I hate that so much, but that's just down to personal. I mean that doesn't affect your video. Anyway, it's just me personally Yeah, I you could change your field of view so it's more like warped in minecraft And I personally don't use it But like it has that like quake feel or it makes you feel like you're going really fast and stuff And uh, some people like it. I Is it that exactly equivalent of putting racing stripes on your car to make it go faster? I guess I don't really carry the way to be honest, but uh, it does look really good. I like the tech and uh The quality looks nice and stuff And your your audio and energy of your voice is good So you can go to 1080p 60 that's interesting my my only one or Question rather I guess Your channel name is the boy wonder and you can tell you're a young youtuber, but what happens when you become a man? What's up guys i'm the boy wonder i'm gonna play this game You know you have to plan for the future when you're playing these like when you're creating your youtube future And unless you just plan on doing it short term you need to think about stuff like this So I don't know if you've actually locked down your channel URL yet or not If you haven't you might want uh, it doesn't look like you have but you might want to give that a little bit more thought On your actual name Because that could come back to backfire when you if you're still doing this 10 years down the road Well even then even if you don't want to get rid of the boy wonder I would most definitely get rid of the mcsg pvp and more because We can gather that from watching your videos I mean I could say i'm mr. George wild who jumps in swimming pools and does backflip So tweezingly and all this lot if I had is that was my title? Then but I just hope mr. George wild so mcsg pvp and more we can gather that from your video, so you don't really need to have a It's your title not your description. Yeah, it works in a sense like You know like let's say comments. I'm gonna look at like. Oh, yeah, he's not a viewer Like he's an actual creator So I know that he does stuff if I just see the boy wonder and see a minecraft avatar I'm gonna think he's just like everyone else but At the same time like jordan said like Yeah, I don't know it's it's that's another person Peppering thing I I wouldn't do like I want to do press record daily vlogs every single day every single day and stuff logs Yeah, there's a dog too There's a dog or so There's a big one and a small one I do like your channel out there your channel. That's cool. It's got chickens and it's got a minecraft Hasn't got a cat Yeah, really though the the channel is well laid out. I'm surprised for creator your age that you're doing as well as you are Um, that's always like an awesome sign to see young creators doing so well with like overall quality with their energy You know consistency with everything it's it's nice to see yeah, so One last thing I'd like to add is um in your description. You have those black bars That separates your I I personally would get rid of those because it makes it look really messy And it makes it I don't know it makes it look messy and makes it look cloggy Yeah, no, I'm just just thicker Yeah, it's okay to separate your layers, but uh, yeah, yeah, that's right. Yeah Maybe just a different custom character Apart from that, that's what I have to say about one Hey, so Let's see here We're actually really less His audio is good Yeah, audio is good Maybe Don't be afraid to cut out dry parts because there's sections in here that you aren't talking like All right, you know Just like little eddling things to spice it up here and there So I think that could help speed up things and make it just a little bit more faster paced overall So you even have like background music in it, you know, your overall levels are nice I you just have a really good channel. You think you do a good job here I like the outro slate too. That's cool It doesn't look like there's an annotation though on the outro slate. So it kind of defeats the purpose there So make sure you do that. I am personally one that is known for often forgetting my annotations I used to actually just give up on it as a whole because it was causing too tedious for me Um, but after I got the TubeBuddy add-on that I've done countless countless videos over You can just copy and paste annotations or actually click annotation templates upon upload So you don't even have to go into your annotations ever So you can go ahead and just assign templates and it'll do automatically So make sure you check that out if you're like me there or if you just forgot then For good. I'll set anything Yeah, annotations are important. Yeah, last thing you might want to think about just your overall SEO of things Because I don't know if it's just because you're new or not, but over here on the side None of your own Videos are recommended It's all other people So when it auto plays the next one it plays to someone else not you So let's see how new this channel is really quick And if you want to go ahead and find someone else we can go to that one next So you've only been doing it for a couple ones. So that's somewhat understandable But just make sure that you like tag yourself in your tags Uh, you have done that Um Yeah, it's probably just something that's going to come with doing more videos So as you do more just try and make them more relevant to each other So if they're all linked put them in playlist Organize them so that they show up together and they'll start showing up as related videos over here Cool Cool I agree So have you got another channel? Uh, no Cool because I do So this is Momobee 212. Okay, and um He does he does reviews of uh, by look a bit nfl games So This should be good So I am going to go and put you momo bay mama bay 212 in The description there. So if you guys want to refresh and watch this with this feel free again, we can't really uh Read the comments as we're watching other people's videos. So feel free to watch it with this Yes, okay, so here we go. I like the name This video you brought momo bay 212 Not in it's I mean the 212 I could really care less about but like the mama bay part is cool Yeah It's memorable All right, I don't know if that has anything to do with your actual name or not, but uh And his his name probably is 212 He's a drone. I don't know if his name is mama bear So apparently this guy is uh with freedom so that's quite cool So the video blocks thing. What's that? Video blocks. Yeah, there's like videos sponsored by video blocks Oh, right. Yeah at the beginning. Yeah I'm wondering how that's relevant to this particular video Let's have a look shall we there's stock video downloads so He goes actually Okay, so like that intro or something probably Okay, so first off i'm assuming the entire video is just going to be used uh during review of the game in front of the camera Which is fine. There is an audience for that. I know that being an nfl watcher um First thing is lighting It's it seems that he seemed to have a uh a light in the Hi dog Jordan's come to say Jordan has paws and claws by the way. I have paws and I just see you tap dancing over there while talking Oh, yes It literally did But yes, um the lighting you appear to have a light in the far left corner, which is And now there's a cat on my table there, um It doesn't seem to be a very good place to put it since uh, it's covering half your face. Yeah, well Um That's why it's really a bad place to put it. Uh, you just need to even it out Yeah, you should look into three point lighting So you have your main light here on the left side of your face what you do But you're currently currently your right side's dark So you put a fill light over here And then you have another back light here to separate you from the background So that's just a standard three point lighting and you don't have to have professional lighting to do this Like right now I have my monitors lighting up my face I have my fan light right here lighting up the back and then I have a fill light over here on the side So they're just normal lights. I don't even have my saw foxes set up They're over there in the corner of the room, but I still have a three point light setup So it fills up my face and it makes it with less harsh shadows So it's a nice little way to Do that easily so Um, I'd recommend looking into that Yes. Um, second thing if your channel is going to be all like this where you do reviews and stuff I would happily recommend a microphone So you're not just So you're not just using whatever microphone is being used right now because it's obviously not a decent microphone for what you're going to be using it for So instead of you having your entire house being picked up by your inbuilt microphone by the sound of it and you It'd be nice to have a microphone like a blue microphone, which is they make or a yeti microphone Which is the color from the same thing just the color blue. Yeah, just get just get a color blue microphone. Yeah Because apparently the color blue is good Apparently pumpkins are blue as well, which I learned. Yeah, that's an interesting thing Yeah, yeah, but uh, yeti yeti isn't make they make great microphones, which is the one I'm using right now And they sound good because for podcasts and stuff like this. They are ideal Yeah Now, what do you think about like the role cutting to like clips and shots of things? It is essential So I know you said like for this particular video this the type of stuff you'd watch like for other stuff that you'd watch I don't watch these type of videos. I'm not like the NFL fan But uh, would that be something that would help like show players or show like cut scenes or stuff? It keeps the video it keeps the video going because no offense I would have clicked off by now Because I would have just been I would have been gotten lost But um, it's like if you have like clips of what's what happened and like some scores and stuff like that Then it keeps the video interesting keeps the video rolling keeps it alive Instead of it just you sat. I mean you're a lovely person, but just having you sat in the middle chatting away Yeah information wise like it's all there um, you know, it's you definitely know what you're talking about but Basically, I think what we're trying to say is this would be better as a podcast instead of Like you aren't needed in the frame right now Other than you're like unless you're trying to appeal to like the girl audience out there that could just sit and watch you you know Like that's that's really the only real benefit with like it could have just been a picture this whole time or You know something else. So you need to find a way to make what's going on the screen enjoyable entertaining too You can't just have it always on you No, now if you're going for like the podcast idea, then that's cool, too You could just maybe you're on the wrong platform for that Or you could even just straight up just do you know an audio thing with waveforms and like graphics in the background or Something like that But if you're wanting to focus just entirely on what's going on the frame then like build a little set for it You know Get a nice camera with like a shallow dip the fields of the backgrounds blurred out Get like work on your lighting and stuff like that because you definitely have the information And you know what you're talking about because if you could talk about football for seven minutes That's more than I've talked about football in my life. So Props to you, you know what you're talking about You know so Because it does seem he has a bit of a following seeing this one's got 118 views and one of them's got 13 000 views and 708 Even if you are just going to keep it with you on the screen your tv in the background Which is displaying your background It'll be actually really helpful get like nfl related stuff on your screen. Yeah, just so it keeps it like Keep it all in the same Keep all in the same boat. Yeah So there's a lot of stuff you could do with it Help another thing that I've seen Um, you know, if you stay up with current events on this stuff, you're definitely going to get a lot of views Now, yes And they have really good ratings too. Look at that 73 000 views and like a 95% rating. So that's awesome Yeah So you're doing good with that And I want to see what you did on this one because it looks like they're actually referring So see this one you did use b-roll Oh, okay Okay, so this has Music and stuff over it. So see if you would have done the same type of thing with like, you know Video clips and stuff and then talked over and given your thoughts on different things Then uh, you could have had that same style And then you could have had b-roll clips and you could have kind of worked that in there So A lot of options there I think you have the right idea. You just need to kind of finesse it now Any other closing remarks? Um, let's have a look at the actual channel itself See how the channel is doing Part of the freedom network, that's what I like to see so If your channel is going to be all game or game all sport related stuff maybe have your channel art as A bit more sports highlighting Looking because it says sports highlights and mixes But maybe have some like Artwork in there or maybe have some pictures of players and stuff Just so people can have a bit more to have a big football jersey and on the back the name is moobay 2 on 12 Yeah, do that. That'd be awesome. There you go. Boom Michael have received a 10 percent or your income on that one And then just feel like some astroturf in the background. I don't need to make it like super in depth and Difficult. Oh, I probably got a game channel. Oh, uh, how do you pick the videos you're going to critique? Well, first off, if your name's scott, we typically avoid you um Oh Scott commenting Oh, I see But for anyone that's new all you do is leave the videos in the chat We can't post the links. You have to give us the title of video you want to watch and uh, or you want us to watch Rather and we'll check it out All right, so do you have a new one for us? I do cool This is Wait, wait, it's gotta go out of the way. This is i'm pez or impas or umbo And it is uh, what was that last one? This is a stop it slender funny moments. Oh, I love this game Oh, have you ever played it? Yes, I have. Yeah, stop it slender Yeah, yeah, the one of the newest ones isn't it? No, it's on gary's mod Is it? Yeah, you play as uh slender like I'd be playing a slender and you play as the old fart from gary's mod and I run around and I try to kill you Okay, no, I haven't played this one. Yeah, it's pretty fun There's so many slender games. I can say yeah, I haven't I put his uh video in the description so you guys can refresh and watch this with us So it's a funny moment thing. So wow straight away your microphone Yeah This sounds like it's a bit too close. I guess so you're getting that scratchy Yeah Like when you're just talking it doesn't sound bad, but then you're like your wind is hitting the mic and it's scratching it so Maybe it's just too close or you need a pop filter put a sock over your mic something Um another thing as well you seem to have friends in your stream as well or maybe there's randomness Who knows? But um It'll be ideal to keep them like linked in the description or in this title again Just for the for the sake of your friends Even if they don't want to be a part of it just say like hi, we're here with blah blah blah and blah blah blah and we're gonna Skept the absolutely Living stuffing scared out of us Stuffing He sounds like he's from England. He sounds like he's from Birmingham Birmingham But yeah, me and mike have talked about this many a time, uh As far as quality on other people's cameras Cameras on each other's microphones Um that can really let you down especially if you have like amazing quality and your friends going You're like, yeah, man In this case it actually kind of sounds like they have better audio Like your audio is not bad it just it's not the worst And it needs cleaned up because it is Scratchy so like you know if I put the mic You're probably talking at it like right here blowing right into the mic So it's making that and like noises So if you literally just put a sock on your mic It's gonna break up a lot of that or if you go buy a pop filter Which is like five bucks you can do that that's gonna greatly improve it Or just even scoot away or talk to the side of it So you're not shooting your like you know your puffs directly into the mic So like for instance if I have this and I go You're not gonna hear it like scratching the mic. You're just gonna hear me making that weird noise. So Yeah So um in the long run your audio could you could get better microphone But for now just like to fix it today you could so And I'm not joking like I've literally had to put socks over my mic in the past I'm not just joking. There's been multiple times where I've had a pop filter. I've just used a sock So I don't I do it now. Yeah Yeah, there's literally a sock in my mic right now. Don't you Yeah, and the fluffier the sock the better Get some nice wool socks But at the same time your personality and your friend's personalities are actually really entertaining to watch. Yeah So you're all like having a great time. You're having a laugh and you're actually not boring to watch And it's actually I'm actually having fun watching your video. Yeah, it's just a shame with the um audio quality It's not bad all the time. It's just when you hit those certain syllables or phrases that it Get scratchy. Yeah, or poppy or whatever you want to call it James I want to take this moment I absolutely love you and I don't want you to kill me Whoa, Jesus So I'm gonna skim through this just a tad Now the actual quality of the recording It looks like it could be improved. It's had it looks like it's clipping in areas That's cool where you have that little animated, uh twitter pop in That's a nice way to make little reminders I started doing that with cards actually Um, since you can annotate to your website have that redirect to your social medias and have a card pop it's like Hey, look, we have twitter you can follow us here surprise Yeah, I know how to tweet I know how to twitter Let's have a look at your actual channel, shall we? The official channel of Your home of let's plays Is it iron pairs or impas But your um the majority of your videos have very good, uh thumbnails. I do like those It makes me want to watch them watch them all And your um your channel art is actually is your channel art is actually pretty good. I like it. It's simple It's got a very nice color to it. It's got a very nice sheen to it Very nice very simple and you have freedom on your very highest, uh home slices I like that Now the only thing I'm gonna really hit you on is this video has done so well You had a bunch of fun in it and then you had to make a joke And use copyrighted music to convey that joke Oh dear Towards the end there is this seed and you typed is there a porno going on And it shows a bunch of people hovering over a dead body and then it comes out of the song. Oh, yeah And uh And you got a copyright hit there so you're not able to make any money on this So you did a really good job making a really fun video and then Now you lost like monetization opportunity on it So Be careful with your copyrighted music Don't use it And you know, you could reference songs, but just don't use it It's a lot easier that way so you don't get hit Yeah I like the outro. That's cool Yeah, the actual was fun Maybe just at the very end have one more like where the subscribe is have like other videos to click so you can redirect your other ones Because like right now i'm heading on over to sky does minecraft on the autoplay so I don't know how minecraft's relevant with slender, but uh, okay anyways, um Yeah, I think it's a good jump again just position your mic a little bit differently and you could fix it today put a sock on it and I'll translate so Let's go ahead and grab another person George funny. I had a channel where he's ago and I was just watching the video for um For reasons and I realized it's somebody we did a few weeks ago doodle the one who did the uh Video review of us doing video review review the review the review. Yeah. Yeah But he has a second channel doodle pie And it's him and his girlfriend and I thought should we since we've already done him But I thought no, let's give someone else a chance. Yeah, not that I don't want to watch it, but uh, no We'll see if we can't get other new people in here because we've been Missing a lot of opportunities to see a lot of different channels. So yeah Ah chat slow down. I'm trying to click on a certain channel Oh god Hey Just click just close your eyes and click Have I lost it forever Personals referencing comment again Which one? Oh god, where's he gone? Do you even know? It I saw something about Star Wars battlefront and I was like oh Star Wars There it is. I think you're delusional Oh lost handed maybe Um homicidal studios gaming discussions and reviews Okay, send me a link. Hang on. Let me just let me just give me I need a hero. There it is I need a hero Right Send me the link. There you go. Everybody's waiting Okay, so we're gonna go ahead and put him in the chat there Way, we have a freedom intro All right, that's now in the description so you can see that And uh, I'm gonna be super professional and let you talk while I run the bathroom. Haha Okay So first of all your intro is awesome. Not because it's got the free freedom in it But uh, it's just got that opening reference of other like spiders And then you go straight into a homicidal studios and then the freedom logo, which is awesome And then we go straight into gameplay So I'm just kind of a listen Okay, so first of all somebody or maybe you has a microphone that sounds like it's in their mouth So instead of having that if it's you, uh, just maybe we talked about it earlier on move the um Move away from the uh, move the microphone away from the face Maybe so you're not sounds like you're eating the microphone just because it's you know popping Apart from that it sounds all right to me. Uh, your personality is fun You sound like you have a sense of humor, which is always good in gaming one of my pet peeves is to watch a gamer and they just literally play the game and They're just going, you know, well, we're just gonna play this But yeah, you seem to have a very good personality and I enjoy it. Um, your quality Your quality 1080p. That's what I like to see. So your game quality is 1080p I'm so sorry for everyone who is watching without mic right now. I'm back. Uh, oh, he's back. You can breathe Okay, yeah, I was just talking about quality and the fact uh microphones and whatnot So I have not had a chance to play this yet Haven't you I was a huge fan of the original star wars battlefront On um, well I had on xbox, but uh But yeah, it was Still on those like older consoles and it was so much fun And it was even on pc, but they recently got rid of the multiplayer feature like uh early this year, I believe And I was actually looking at re like buying the game just for the multiplayer feature because I had such a fun time with it So it's cool to see that it's been back That's just my personal stance on this game, but uh, it looks awesome. That's my first time like really watching it Even I've had a chance to play this game. I don't even know in the right stuff to play it I went over my friend's house just especially to play it It's a beta moment. So I think so Cool Yeah, it looks awesome The quality of this video does look really great too Yeah, I already talked about that because a lot of times you can have 1080p that can still look like crap But like this is 1080p that looks like 1080p Yeah 1080p, yeah Oh, he's a big skywalker. Oh my lord All right I was talking about his personality saying how he's he sounds like he's having a fun time And I it's keeping me intrigued to watch because he's not one of those like silent and really quiet people Yeah, he's actually having fun with it, which is good Kind of directly next to the imperial base So I kind of just got So what do you think? I don't know. I'm just enjoying the video. I'm like trying to think of something to say and I'm like I'm like I love star wars So Your channel subscribe now genuine content for genuine viewers. That's quite cool. I like that So Oh, you mean the also sorry I would say if you're playing on pc, which I assume you are I I get something like team speak or something where you could balance out your friend's audio So that way like everyone sounds good. However, there's some people like this and there's some people like this You know, so it's really hard to really listen to everyone, especially when you have like just a quiet Audio like I have right now So if you can boost the quiet people and turn down the loud people so that way it's more even throughout That's a nice way to do that Um I would recommend team speak. That's the best one that I know of skype You're just kind of you have to rely like hey, can you turn it down a little bit? Now you turn it up now You turn it down and then skype's like I'm gonna go auto now Which is totally not what we do every time Well, it's just me and you if it was like me you and five other people This is gonna get a real sloppy and real nasty real quick Apparently it is team speak. Oh it is. Okay So if it is team speak then you can go and you can actually change everyone's levels and properties on their voice So if you go into special options, you could do that so Team speak doesn't automatically even everyone out. You have to do that manually so Um go into the channel for a second okadoki in the channel are mgn in the bottom left corner What is what is mgn? It's a freedom thing Okay, they're a gaming network excellent It looks like it was like another um partnership and I was like what is this? Yeah, it's like Is it a new thing is it? Yeah, it's been around for a little while. Okay a couple years. I'm not a gamer so I don't Yeah, I don't I'd be honest. I don't keep up with it either because I'm not a huge gamer either but No, um, I do know what it is at least Cool uh Lastly To be honest, I think it's just audio that he needs to sort out once he's gone his audio sorts it out I think he's pretty much there. He just needs to get better. He just needs to uh Experiment with his videos and see what he can do with them. Yeah. Lastly is just a outro slate It just cuts to black after that so Utilize an outro slate figure out your friend's audio and then Yeah, I think there'll be a pretty solid video. It's definitely beautiful. I was like caught in the the cinematics of the game that uh Sort of those things like I think you could have been quiet the whole time. I still would have been like, uh pretty But yeah, I think I think you just click bait might Hey, you picked it Oh All right real quick before we pick another one. Does anyone have a non gaming video for us to check out I already saw rise in their commenting, but we've reviewed him in the past so yeah I was gonna check your channel out doodle, but uh We've done you before Okay It's only battle friend I didn't put out on so he doesn't have an outro you just didn't put it on Put it on every video That's all I can say. All right. Jordan. Pick me. Please gta 5 pinnacle of five cinematic mod presentation by m bor 989 Since you called me by my first name. I should check you out All right, first I'm taking a quick look to see if there's anyone that doesn't have gaming Just to get a little bit of uh Yeah Someone says they're graphics And pranks So I got the next two And if you lied to us, I'll be so angry Okay channel one and channel two Oh my god, we're doing it at the same time No, we're gonna take turns. Okay. So first off we have a graphics channel Oh At least he says he is So what we do we watching stream overlay template Stream overlay templates. So I'm going to put that in The description here You guys can watch it with us Boop and oh you have an interesting name That intro though, is it good the website very good. Okay. I was about to say he's a graphics person. I hope it is Oh cool looks like a cinema 4d one. Yeah, that was cool. Definitely a cinema 4d one Whether or not you did that on your own that's it's neat, but uh Yeah, I hope you did it on your own considering it's a Graphics channel where you're trying to give templates and stuff Yeah So now we're to the video So he's not a talker Yeah, it looks like bead art thing What he's doing. I think he's making a um He's making a stream overlay template for a webcam for a video. Yeah so You definitely have An awesome market here with this because if you start making templates for stuff You can go pretty far with that and you can have like a nice little niche to help people out because As you've probably seen from watching our streams a lot of people use templates In fact it I'll be honest. It looks like the intro for yours was a template as well. So, um Yeah, both those I I'm pretty sure I've seen those in the cinema 4d top templates But uh regardless if they are not that's They look like one that is But you know, you have download links here so you can download your template And that way you can start getting your name out there more so quickly As a graphic artist there's so much you could do Yeah, I mean, this is definitely a big market. I mean everybody who's here I mean, I could even say if anybody here wants to get in touch with this person to have their intros done then there you go but Be fair. I don't know if that was him Ah, well, you know for like Templates and stuff if he wants to make them his own because I'm sure he can Yeah So, I mean if you ever need if you ever need a webcam overlay thing, there you go. Yeah Yeah, so I see an intro that he made here but yeah I would highly recommend having a microphone for certain certain videos So if you're doing a interesting they're like talking about how you did it and stuff because maybe people might want to do themselves Yeah, if in their own ways like use you as an inspiration That's one thing you could do you can uh, you know, I actually do tutorials on how to do it But uh for these typical videos This is in real time What I like to see with these are like You take like 10 minutes of work and then smash it down to like a 45 second video And so that way it's like, you know sped up really quickly and you're able to just rip through all the edits and see all the different stuff Instead of like, you know, I'm not gonna sit here and watch Two minutes of you working when you actually worked for two minutes Because it's very slow So if you You know, just sped that up and you did You know like let's say 30 second video and then got rid of your 30 seconds of intro Then uh, you could have had just a really quick and snappy video to show off this part Yeah, it's quite difficult this one. This is not really my forte. I'll go check out your channel Yeah, I was skimming through his other videos there. That's how I found the other one, but But yeah, um as a graphics person That's what I'd start thinking is like how to build your brand in your business around graphics Because just making youtube videos is one thing but you can Definitely start building a monetary like a monetary value off your videos and start branching out to different departments start doing more and making More dollar per video by outsourcing to different places or selling on different sites and stuff like that So that way you can quickly make it a full-time job instead of anything else So if that's really what you want to focus on then really focus on it and practice and get better at your graphics and Do stuff like that? so I'm watching another one right here the logo speed art and this one looks pretty cool Yeah So here's here's an actual speed art then It's not quite that fast. It's still a four minute video But uh, that's not speedy I mean it's fed up. It's just not I'm still skimming through it The goal for like speed art is just so you don't have to skim through you can just sit back and just like watch like You know and just not have to touch anything. So This is more of what I was talking about though. But yeah, cool Uh as a graphics person like I said you do have a lot you could go with there Yeah, next we have Alan TV Whoops Alan TV Yes He's very serious Looking at us out there Which video he does pranks shouting randomly in public. Oh, no, I hate these videos. I get I hate cringe videos Why are they cringe? Well, maybe cringe is not the right word awkward videos where you like prank people in public. I just go like, oh, no Hey, no, they don't have to be cringe videos Hey, no, do you want to do shouting randomly in public? I'm already I'm already on that video. Okay. Don't give a watch that one then So first off, where are you located? You Chicago no, it's not Chicago. Is it A lot of music If you could do us a favor and shout where you are in this video Yeah, I'm in Chicago. No, we know I don't think it's Chicago. No, it's not It's not new york So this reminds me of uh, do you ever watch the show in practical jokers? Oh, yeah The one guy I forget his name, but he always shouts Larry like looking for his friend Larry who's not there He's just running around and there's no one there. He'll like cut lines by yelling getting stuff I'm interested. He's probably using a lapel mic for this Yeah, or something even his phone this pocket Oh, is it his phone? I mean, I don't know. I'm just saying that's what I used to do It's interesting because when you're doing stuff like this, you need to think about Your quality of your audio like shouting in public. You need to think about What your clipping is going to be doing on your video on your audio. Sorry. Yeah, I'd like to watch a different one Yeah, which one of you want to watch? um Dancing behind people prank of Let's see selfies of strangers Or Most awkward pickup ever Oh, no I'm thinking most awkward pickup. Yeah, I'm on it. Do you remember when I said I don't like awkward videos? I'm just bringing all the awkward directly to you. Yeah, just make me sit on the floor going Ah So the intro is nice. It looks like you actually made that yourself for someone else made it So I I appreciate that more than someone that just downloads a template. It's like super epic and crazy So So the audio is a lot better But I think it's because you're talking We can actually hear what you're saying. It's not it's relatively clear Let's rephrase the audio is not bad for a prank video Yeah It's hard to get good audio on a prank video unless you just have like professional wireless lapel mics Our lav mics. Yeah Oh self friendzone section was that copyright music? Maybe So just be careful with that if it isn't if it isn't that's fine, but if it is Then uh Yeah Another tough thing to do with prank videos is Your um camera man Because like You know, this is like obviously at a distance. He has to zoom in so it's going to be a lot more like shaky So yeah, you can't really just set up a tripod in the middle of nowhere make it like, you know, not noticeable But he could have like propped it on a trash can or done something like that, you know Um Yeah Another thing I want to point out is um Is your uh subtitles There's something you say when you're typing is you say um retarded noise Now as funny as that sounds you have to be really careful What you're writing because somebody could easily be offended by that. Oh, yeah um You could put just like silly noise. I learned that the hard way I said that in a video once I lost like I think like 20 to 30 subscribers that day Oh, really? Yeah, I wasn't mean to anything being by it or you know anything hurtful It's unfortunate because it's how it's the social norm just to say that and not like double think about it Yeah, but I've actually I've trained myself not to say that anymore stuff like that. Yeah, but um Even swearing in videos. I've tried to make myself slow down on that because I've learned that um people don't like it Now I did point out how I liked your Uh custom intro. I've never seen that so I assume that's yours. It's branded with your outro slate So looks the same however the subscribe one I've used that template before I know it's a template I looked at that and I was like I looked and I was like I'm waiting for Mike. I'm waiting for Mike so You you gain some respect for me from doing your own stuff and then you just brought it right back down Oh But no, um I do like the fact that you didn't make your you made your own intro and your own outro So you're at like 25% So it wasn't 50% and then it dropped Took a lot 25% due to the template just saying So, yeah, um See my opinion is um Cameraman needs to not be drunk and uh keep the camera still It's tough. It really is. It is. Especially if you're doing it handheld If you have like a handheld um tripod, they're that'll keep your camera a lot more Stable tripod handheld tripod. They do exist They might be called selfie sticks, but they exist Okay Uh and as well as your um your uh commentary as well, just be careful what you're typing because It might it may be fine for now, but then one day you'll get somebody going Now the last thing I'd like to point out Um, I I think you're on a good trek You have uh, you know, you have people to help you out You're actually recording your audio at a distance and on a new channel That's tough, especially if you don't have like all the money in the world But don't be afraid to go over the top So like here it says most awkward pickup ever Like yeah, if it's the most awkward pickup ever just make it the most awkward thing Ever, you know, like like you were you were awkward But that's something like You know, I could have actually seen that happening in public and I wouldn't have stopped and looked at it For like the most awkward thing ever you want everybody looking You know start singing a song start singing her a song like get on one knee and start going That'll bring people in and then like I'm so sorry. I'm so sorry. I'm so sorry Did it work candy? Do you love me now Yeah, just like see like how awkward you could get with still getting a phone number And like just you know, just go the extra mile just push it so far out the door that you know It's not ridiculous because with prank videos. It's all about the share factor It's like when someone take this video and share it and in order for it to share it There has to be something that someone has never seen before Or it makes them You know, they just like man that guy has some balls So then you can send it out, you know, if it's just you know It's showing you just talking to a guy like they're talking to a girl stumbling around on your words and stuff That's not you know, that's something I would do talking to a girl normally Yeah, that's how he talks about every day Yeah, so if you just show me something that I would just be terrified to do then that would associate with me more and I'd be more willing to share it because it is just that bizarre and that crazy, you know So you need to bump that share factor and go that extra mile to make it just ridiculous So Um, I think we have time for like one or two more depending on Jordan Oh god I'll blame you on this one. I don't have a meeting to go to but I do have other stuff I need to do today So we have already hit our hour time slot. So I'll say one or two more Okay, let's uh, we have uh, we love comics because they've commented quite a bit And they've been uh keeping up to date with everything. So, uh, we love comics Yes, I just read his comic Comic Comic and this is the we love comic channels intro You may not have to watch the entire thing like just to get an idea Okay, uh, let me put it in the description We love comics There we go Oh, that's That's clever They uh, they have the star wars intro But they're not using the star wars music. Yes Non-copper-eyed music But it sounds like star wars. So you've done really well here. That's really clever Oh, I don't want to read the whole entire video. Oh, I'm not reading it. No, let's go nobody reads nobody reads the star wars intro They just said they're going that's the whole entire video. Otherwise, I'd I'd watch no one actually watched one of your videos I could take it Uh, I do love your channel art. The channel is cool. Yes. I do like that. Yeah Very nice. What do we watch? Uh, the top 25 books I paid cover price for um My first comic book memory. What's yours? Or update on in humans movie Let's do first comic book memory. Okie dokie. All right, very solid intro All right, so this is set up like Podcast seems like okay. Wait, he does cut two different stuff After about like two and a half minutes into I would love to hear your name wanting to collect audio. I'd say improve on the microphone side of things There was in 1970 if you can because it sounds a bit tinny It sounds like you're using your built-in microphone as well as um When you're capturing things like when you're Uh looking at uh comic books and stuff make sure you're not getting You got like this advertisement here in the corner for the amazing spider-man Yeah, make sure you don't go anything like that in there So even if you just like save the picture and just use it in a in a use it as part of the video um as mike mentioned about a few seconds ago make sure Keep it keep flowing. Don't just have your uh youtube Videos for like the first two and a half minutes with you talking Yeah, it looks like throughout the whole video. There's about four pictures in an outro slate Yeah, so You have an interesting like nish here And you can do a lot with it but I mean you obviously are talking a lot about it So you know what you're talking about But like jordan said you need to have more to cut to to make it more appealing to the video or to the viewer Um, yeah, another thing I would like to point out though at the end here You have a question of the day Which is oh you have to come to that bit awesome because like engaging And your viewers and learning more about them It encourages them to comment But I want to put that in the very very end with text. I mean, I guess that works Maybe not this way Yeah Like by that time they they might have already tuned out because it's after your outro Yeah, so You know, it's It's not quite as easy for them normally like when people get to the outro like once I get to this part I've already seen this six times before because I've watched your videos or whatever. So I've closed it You know now it's black. So I would have closed it. I wouldn't have seen the question the day So a question of a day is like an awesome idea to get more people commenting But you need to make sure it's seen so you can get those comments Put it like in the first line of text in your description or just physically ask it You know that way it's actually ensured that people are going to see that because it is just an awesome idea But also your um your outro Unless you are talking about aquaman I have no idea what the reference for your outro is to your wheel of comics Because there's a shark and underwater and stuff You might like sharks, but it's not relevant Unless it's aquaman. Yeah, but you see what I'm saying. Um, if you have if you're a comic book channel Make sure you keep your outro related to comics or to the best you can I mean, this is very cool. I mean the music goes to the video, which is actually quite cool and I was I actually nearly jumped from the shark nearly got me, but But yeah, try and keep it relevant and yeah, like you said about the outro question of the day It's just like maybe mention it in the video instead of having it in text or maybe just speed it up or Maybe not have it right at the end like maybe have it before the outro or whatever So and sure guys again, we are over the time so we're not going to spend a super long time on each channel that we get to right now, but uh Like like we said, it is a good idea. You do have good information You are like engaging in what you're talking about You need to work on your b-roll to make it more just enticing the video or to the viewer and then uh Your just outro just maybe uh Clean that up a little bit Yeah, so did you want to do one more real quick? Just get one more person Okay, let's uh Let's do The grunt crusader Okay I see the link It is one v2 hashtag win on shrine All right, I see it You gotta put that in the description and then guys this is going to be Our last one because we are over our time Yeah, so thank you all for submitting your videos And thank you for letting us watch your videos again If we did not get to you no need to be upset, but we will be back next monday to watch more Again, we can only get to so many people in the our time slot So it's not a huge deal if uh, we can't get to you. So uh again this last one and we're gonna watch it So first off this is just a I think this is just a no talky Video just him playing Yeah Halo I don't play games other than all this is halo master chief looks like Yeah I like the music doesn't sound copyright Came up as uh Under music so I mean it's claimed Monster work by various uh No So yeah, it is copyright. So you've just lost your chance to make money from this. Oh, no, that's a shame, but um Yeah, it's also like insult the injuries. You're promoting mgn in the intro. So like You know with that if you're promoting your network and you're showing off that you have copyrighted music in the description as well Then what's that say about your network? You know? Yeah It reflects poorly on them Just be careful with all that stuff Yeah, there's no reason to use copyrighted music when you have access to all these royalty free libraries and stuff that you won't get claims on Yeah, also, I don't think that The intro is needed in the description Like let's say I'm a new viewer here, which I am I I don't care that you have a new partnership intro Um, and in fact if I watched it for the first time and I saw it I would have just thought this whole time. I was like, oh cool. He's with mgn You know, I wouldn't have thought anything second like given a second thought But if you make it out to say, hey, this is a new partnership intro that makes it say like, oh, you just got partnered with mgn So if you make it just brand it like, yeah, I've been partnered with mgn forever. I'm awesome, you know That just don't really call much attention to yeah, I just got in it's Yeah, I've always been awesome You know, um I would say that you probably need an intro and outro slate just to say who you are Because it literally just cuts out after you've finished the game It'd be nice to know who you are and where we can contact you if you want to say like make more videos and um Stuff like so just outro slates and intro slates. There's plenty of people in the world that can make stuff for you um Even if it's just another generic intro and outro, at least it's something it's better than just having oh and it's done. Yeah, so Uh description is another thing It just says subscribe subscribe subscribe partner the freedom partner partner mgn partner mgn It doesn't have anything about you It doesn't even have a channel name and the channel subscribe link. So you know, there's it's literally all about mgn and freedom right now because the intro Is about it your titles about it Um, I don't know who the grunt crusader is Yeah, is it someone who works for mgn or freedom? Like I I literally nothing from that from this and tags your only tag is youtube editor So that means that you made this with the youtube editor. So maybe it wasn't copyrighted music Could you spend youtube music or something? I don't know I don't know that editor works but no idea But yeah, make sure you use tags so that way it's actually relevant and you start getting your own You know you start getting search results and stuff like that Yeah But you definitely have the right you're you're definitely on the right channel You're definitely on the right uh train track there As far as because it looks like you're just starting out so It's good to have it's good to because nobody's first few videos are absolutely perfect. I mean My first videos are absolutely shocking But I stuck with it and I got better. Well, I hope I got better and um, no But um But yeah, you get you get better as you keep going and you keep trying you try newing things like My my opinion for you next to to try um Microphone or even webcam if you can I'll be the next step because then we can have a bit more interaction with you Yeah So maybe something you need to look into is setting up some youtube defaults So that way when you upload you automatically have your description already lined out You have your tags pre-assigned You have all that stuff just ready So that way you can keep up with your channel more So it because as I'm scrolling through all your different stuff None of them have tags none of them have You know descriptions or anything like that. So if you assign some defaults there then You're not going to have to worry so much about doing the same just spam on each one You can just do it once and then assign it to all videos And you could start being more relevant So start defining who the grunt crusader is start letting your viewers know who that is and make a name Or make a brand associated with that name so that way you could start promoting that So right now you're just promoting nothing but mgn and freedom Which isn't necessarily a bad thing if you're working for them or whatever But as you want to continue and grow you want to build yourself and use the Resources that mgn or freedom has to do that. So it's kind of a give-and-take relationship But if you're only focused on them, then you're not going to grow yourself So yeah There you go But anyways guys, thank you so much for watching If you want to see more of jordan and I our links are in the cards up at the top If you click the little i button it'll bring up our channels Or you can go down the description and see all of our channels there And also I should probably add your twitter on there jordan because you do have a twitter I do have a twitter it's uh Jod one jawd one Yeah, jod Jod jod one jod one So if you guys were following, I really wanted I really wanted to change that so badly, but oh well It's too late now, isn't it? You can you can change on twitter Can you yeah We'll talk more afterwards. I'm just gonna continue singing One more time So yeah guys, thank you so much for watching again If you want to check us out you can the links are in the description as well as in the cards And we'll see you next time. See you