 Bounces are really nice, they'll like that you have tiny tiny detail notes on this Feels really good though Nice that bounces great too. So what's a bit weird? I buy this all this is cool I feel like you're starting you stretch early because this and this feels almost the same size So it's almost like I wonder what you could do here. I actually Not stretching here and stretch this one a bit more And this one feels like it's looking up already. I don't know. There's something slightly weird Same thing here from here to here. I see barely a difference I would potentially almost yeah, I stretch this guy take this out Just be bolder in your stretch right before the end But then less in the middle here like here already starts stretching, but it stretches Down versus where it's going which also makes it look weird Because then in real time it starts to wobble this and something here here searching too much for the amount of How high it gets here? Same thing here. You're starting the stretch, but it's not pointed really enough at where it's landing It's a bit much just subtle stuff, but then This feels like it stops too abruptly you have all this momentum all this momentum all the volume boom like what? Here so when you're here as he does this I would do a little bit clockwise rotation forward Like you there's still some momentum and Then which will help you because right now your up and downs are super straight You want your pronounce to go? Basically what will happen is you stop and you rotate forward because of the momentum and you jump and it goes a bit forward Jumps a bit forward can jump a bit back and then back here that way you're jumping from a to b to c to d to e And so on and right now all you're doing is a b a b a b a b it's super repetitive All this here. Here's also a weird thing here It feels like you're I'm exaggerating when it's angled this way, even though you're coming down exact same way So always stretch towards the angle that it's going that feels really really fast right there Duck right there. That's your all linear key here. So definitely ease out of that It's his first go backs a bit softer before that you have it on that second one. It feels like you are That was your anticipate and that was better. That's all cool. That's all cool Careful You're here. It's if you're landing in the same spot same thing. You won't land in a different spot That's all cool. Whoa, that's a harsh stop there Right there. I would roll up a bit and then come back with a softer He's in and out same thing here. It seems like you're landing always in the same spot and Then this seems too soft Yeah, that seems too slow. There's something about And he lands right good down where The couple things this flat surface Feels weird. This is not angle like that. It seems like you're going too far I will go this way and stretch this double because you're having the same amount of stretch as here But the velocity is much higher than here. So that feels strange. And again, I just feels like you're not going enough It feels weird that we see him here. I don't think we need to see him I think you can tell the story by the guy is zipping up this way But now it feels forced like you're trying to keep that kind of frame All right. Thanks. All right. There's an email you can sign up You can start whenever you want you can submit whatever beyond you get 16 submissions either way a like and subscribe would be awesome Alright, thank you