 Hello freedom family and welcome back to the third episode of reviews for you Let's kick it off straight into the episode. No messing about today with our first channel Olly 99 HD Now I like the presentation I think you can tell straight away from the banner you can tell he's doing daisy and You got his name playing Lee and you've got the weekly videos and more so a little bit of information You got it's highlighted aspects of his channels funny moments server events social videos RPC servers and more and he's only got one link to his Facebook Which I would suggest changing to all the social outlets you have got where as I said the more so social things You've got the more people are gonna want to be involved and it's more It's more to get your exposure really so definitely link some more stuff up like Twitter and whatnot You should be using all these social sites. They're there for a reason make sure you use them It's useful But anyway, so as I I splashed into the homepage. I do say there is no channel trailer ah Which is a quite a bummer it's been really good if you had a channel trailer because I could I could imagine by the View of your channel. I would have probably been more more likely impressed with it So definitely tip make a channel trailer. He has the one the other hand Got his format for the home page as it's got a few uploads up here And you guys popular uploads and create a playlist videos to play the videos very nicely laid out I do love that that is Fantastic, I love the branding it's his own unique branding which is Consistent apart from his intro, which I really don't think people should end up upload and I I don't agree with those sort of videos It sort of just completely comes away from your content in general, but that's my opinion on that beautiful branding absolutely fabulous looking and I think I've just bugged that out Let's see if he's got your playlist the place Yeah, all the playlists are there which is hunky dory lovely and let's see the about page. I remember all yeah He's filled out the about page. Maybe get a few links in there I know that YouTube can that you link in your about page, but if not try just do the slash ring it always works just Make people aware that you can be contacted other places and you can be reached other places that way you get yourself more Exposure, we just said yet again. It's the title thing. I don't know if this is a personal preference But with me, I don't really like to put the actual game in the starting text I think that's pretty obvious from what you can tell by a thumbnail most of time So that's something I would mention as well don't if it if it's really good for you when you feel comfortable using it go for it but I would always just try and get the most Important moment of the video and title it because that way it is in clip 80 and it's legit So I say well done Ali 99 HD. I look forward to your future content and hopefully you make some good changes I will click subscribe and I hope to see you in the future So for our second channel, we're looking at shock annity. I like that name. That's quite cool But anyway, so banner, um, I would maybe update the font They're wrong. It's a good attempt and It just looks very bland. I like what you did with the S though. That's pretty cool But I would just make it a little bit more eye-popping interesting I do like the background, but it's just the font that sort of froze me off So maybe have a look at that. I like the avatar you've got here Maybe you try implement that somehow in the banner, but that avatar looks pretty sick But we've got all your links, which is handy as so we've got twitch school plus Facebook Twitter the usuals You need we have a channel trailer. So not really a trailer But like I said usually make a trailer because then you can actually entice people to get into your channel and Let them know what you're doing. So let's hopefully this is a sort of trailer. So Okay, so yeah, the old Star Wars intro is very draggy So for 10 seconds, I think I've just gathered you like star wars and so 20 seconds in we found out a couple of dates Maybe make a channel trailer because yet with those 20 seconds You could have made me want to stay around and watch some real cool gameplay and find out what you're about So it takes 50 seconds to get into the video Where is realistically I would have caught the 50 micro we're gonna start you building a house And I already get the fact that with those five seconds that you're well presented with your microphone You're you really well heard you obviously are very confident what you're saying and I need my craft So I've already took more information for those five seconds and I would have with that 50 second intro So maybe better than my next time. Let's have a look. So he's got his uploads. He's got a little playlist So I like that. Yeah, good place. Cool. So all that's there. Let's have a look at some videos Okay, so we have a quite a wide selection of Videos to choose from Wow from nailed I say even from now these I Would even I would from now these maybe throw a bit of information in on the thumbnail There are a few I can see that just basically cover photos I would throw in a bit of detail maybe like this one for example where you've just done the um Number two number three number one. That's good. That's smart. That's simple It's easy to read and it gets to point across so that's something I would go with Yeah, so that's all I'd say is spruce up your thumbnails a bit. Do your banner a bit Everything else looking fine. So let's have a look at this about page and We have yep a little bit of a description field in which is actually quite cool Because that also takes your channel away from all the spam channels as well if you fill in your descriptions Just spruce up your banner and the font get a channel trailer and maybe redo the thumbnails a bit But far from that it's looking fabulous And I hope to see you in the future with your improvements. So I will subscribe So guys, thank you for joining me in the third episode of reviews for you I am absolutely grateful to you all if you want to be part of the episode or want a chance to be part of the episode Don't forget to comment below and I will hopefully spot you out Don't forget I will try to get around everyone in within freedom eventually I'll be right you're ticked off. Don't worry the ones I've reviewed ticked off But yeah, so I hope to see you all in the next one and peace