 All righty, let's take a look at the shot and full and what's gonna happen if I don't watch my Super cute. All right in your email. You're saying here. There are small things you need to work on like hand-sliding on the table. All right Tongue and finger animation. All right apart from that. Let's check out The details. There's some things that I noticed in terms of speed and what's gonna happen Even this That head turn to the left here. It's just To me a tad fast. It's probably also because if you track the nose for your Arcs, that's gonna say Arcs and then a coughed here. See that? You starting an arc like this and then boop You go straight up and it seems like this is on the linear key right there And it might just be that how quickly you get into this Still check out your arc. It goes kind of straight up and then flattens out fairly fast That's just it's a picky one, but That one just a little bit This one for sure for sure Subjectively for sure, but it's the same thing again track your nose Beep right there. You starting to go down and then you have a very fast pop to the left here With a nice arc, but it's just that moment of that just feels Slightly fast. It's also because I'm reacting to this massive head and tiny body and Something so big it feels like it's gonna ease out of that a bit more to get to that speed Because if I look at the rest of the animation It's not Super snappy. It's not photoreal either. You're kind of in the middle and that's why that just feels ever so slightly fast Right Once you get to here I think what happens here is that I think because you have your hands on the table that you probably have IK arms So watch out for that. You got a very very straight path up here With no arc and then you can probably also play this silhouette a bit more where I see a slight upper arm there for something that it's a Cleanish silhouette, but once you get to here you have that Ben straight the camera and that could be You know a bit lower with the arm. You can use that negative space here between this and this so it's not overlapping with the face I think I would work on that a bit more Also the spacing how it goes back goes up stop in this way You can maybe pull it back. Maybe kind of slides and pulls it back for an arc like that potentially It's hard to see I do see the formation there, but just make sure you really engage the shoulder I might just be with with the that Reagan enveloping that I'm not seeing it But just make sure it's double check on your end that you have enough of the of the Shoulder in there so I do see a rotation in Y. I also see some scaling Is that in here? Are you doing breathing? Because it's a fairly big move there or just a geometry change It doesn't quite to me this wouldn't be a moment where you would Inhale and exhale. I don't maybe it might just be something with the formations again. So let me know And then email again track your arcs watch out because of an IK arm Then you get those slight It's not an overextension, but you have that bends into a straightening back into a bend Little tiny little things. They're IK ish And it's visible because the orientation of the wrist the same So you have that change in here while this stays the same kind of IK flag there And then once you get into this watch out, there's a slight feeling of too much Twinning and symmetrical timing there Supposing and timing high goes up and down and it goes back to just your arcs like everything feels fairly flat I would track those arcs and soften these and you can see again how it just kind of stops and you have lots of one frame direction changes or full-on Freezes and you can see that IK arm stuck in frame there I don't like that and I like the usage of space that you go front and back you have interaction there and you have the baby go forward That's all very cool again watch out for IK arm. So to me it mostly it's Tracking smoothing things out to detail work like that. So general cleanup Now out of that Rick supports it, but everything in your mouth shape seems fairly stuck within that I would a look at some more asymmetry in terms of opening one eye more than the other kind of pushing eyebrows It's a baby you can just really push those shapes and really go out in the asymmetry and brush and really push the B My teeth could be a bit bigger. I would just kind of push the The contrast in your in your extremes there like to get something like this is cute from here to here, right? That's cute So push that you know three three. I will go push it You can always dial it down, but push it. I'll expose the upper teeth. It's really go for contrast And then watch out. I'm not sure what's going on through there But see how much the head turns and the eyes are locked inside that ball there and that skull Might be because your eye control is very close Try to maybe with really far way behind the camera That sometimes helps, but there's this weird feeling of Those eyeballs really locked in there and then just like that skin Moving over the eyeballs that could be reduced And then watch out you got some moments where it's kind of spliny Kind of splines up is very soft and then are you squishing eyeballs? It feels like I see that pupil the iris change Yeah, I think that's it for now It's a lot of cleanup. I know that it takes time It's always kind of a pain to do that But I would start with that and especially your arms get rid of the twinning kind of that watch out for your posing and Silhouette especially the IK feel to it Silhouette as I said that here Otherwise, you're kind of okay You have a lot of arcs that should be fine. That's nice a symmetry there like you're changing the legs there Speaking of legs watch out that he don't completely overextend. It feels like there's some moments where you overextend and kind of pop pop into a bend and then Not sure again, that's envelopeing. I see a change here, but on that way shift I see nothing in that line I know if you can push that so you can see those diapers go up, you know up and down different sides for proper way shifts But again, that might be an enveloping issue. Not sure. Anyway, I'm gonna leave it at that email me Let me know if you have any questions. This all makes sense. All right. Thank you All right There's an email you can sign up you can start whenever you want you can submit whatever you want You get 16 submissions either way a like and subscribe would be awesome. All right. Thank you