 Alrighty, let's play this in full Saturday is a day for sleeping and damn it. You will not take that away from me Okay, nice. Okay. Now Saturday is a day for sleeping and damn it. You will not take that away from me Very cool. I'm a big fan of this whole beginning and especially this I think the biggest thing that to me stands out is the the lip sync Not that it's that off, but it just seems a bit disconnected from the head if we're sleeping and damn it You will not especially through here and damn it. You will not this I don't quite Feel how whatever he is saying comes out of the chest through the throat throughout his head and damn it You will not his head up his mouth and damn especially and damn it It's okay to not have a jaw move and because you can do and and you can do that But I would have something in the head going up or sideways a bit and damn it you and on It's and damn it. You want a little and and then snapped down a little bit Damn it. You will not take that away from me and even on here got away from me This just seems like a body move and the jaw, but the joy is not quite moving the head enough Take that away from me. Take that away from me. Take that away It's almost like you want to go up to the left a bit. So take that away So that he goes this way what the heck almost drags a bit and up with the nose I wait for me so that on me you can come down again. Not that has to be huge But I just want to see a bit more influence there Okay, no Saturday. Okay. No, sir. I didn't even hear. Okay. No, sir. Okay. No, sir I'm the okay to something and it's gonna be tricky. He's gonna mess this up But a little bit of a little bit of an accident. Okay. Okay. No Saturday, Saturday Saturday. Okay. No Saturday Saturday could work even though it's a bit clean. It's almost like Saturday a little bit of a in there Saturday is a day for sleeping for sleeping and Okay. No Saturday is a day for sleeping and I'm gonna do the lips and clear. I'm just I'm just looking at this here was you mentioned in your email about details and stuff So it's out when you got elbow movements, but it doesn't quite affect anything down there. It feels It's extremely tiny thing, but I feel like even if you have a little bit of movement in that Elbow through the shoulder you want a bit of an adjustment in there. It's tiny, but And especially then sleeping and and many goes and damn it like he tenses up and I would almost have a little bit of Gripping in the fingers just a little bit Or not take that away from me and it's almost like you will not or not Not that you're not sure if you need to let go of the hands So that they're both down So the interest that will be to twins, but there's something about Okay, now Saturday Is a day for sleeping. I buy all of this here, but then damn it. You will not But then you will not this is like he's much more agitated This is kind of a a change in everything and then now it's always seems like that hand is just kind of constrained there and is never moving And almost feel like that it would be more interesting to To try to let go on this and it does end up like that where you know, it could be I mean if this would be already enough enough of an offset or Or out like that. I don't know like something where To me it seems like if you scrub it is always there. It's always kind of it's almost like it's in a cast It's attached to a sling and he can never move his arm So to me it seems like you after this especially and damn it. You will not especially with this very much more agitated where I think there will be good opportunity to do that and let go of that hand. Okay. Now Saturday Okay, now Saturday Saturday On Saturday going back to the lip sync to me the lip sync is the biggest thing that needs some fixing I don't this feels more like a way Saturday And it pops a bit and it's to me This how you pop into this, but then there's nowhere to go Gotta be careful when you go into a big shape and you pop in that shape And there's no extension and then it relax a bit in the muscles You can you over shoot a little bit in your facial shapes and it seems like you lock in this Saturday So Saturday, like you know, it's like day you want to be even arching up on the corners Is a day for sleeping Is a day for sleeping is a day for sleeping Is a day now then again, this might also be my My program is always a bit tricky to judge with the lip sync It always feels like there's a bit of a what it's like off by one frame is a day for sleeping But more than that a day for sleeping sleep being Hmm, I would this is more like a pouty shape. I would roll those shapes in for sleeping And sleep and then sleeping I will bring out those corners sleeping for sleeping sleeping for sleeping Hold on. Let me scrub here It's tricky, but if you scrub it's totally late So, I don't know. I don't know if that actually makes it worse. I don't think it's you It's a lot of times just the program is a bit weird. It's a day for sleeping sleeping even on but even on sleeping I would Sleeping I would still go out a bit more. You actually your sleep is earlier day for sleep day for sleep pain Sleeper. I don't know. I would still go out a bit more um sleeping and dammit It's cool to have the contrast there. What I don't know It just it also feels pretty exaggerated and then it's this weird thing of This gets pulled down and this gets pulled up. I would make that a bit simpler So to me on this out, I would again put a bit further in your corners And then get into this but you go from a regular shape to this and I wouldn't go So separate on both here and dammit you won't and then it doesn't feel like dammit And dammit and dammit I could go to me it seems like you go straight into a Mmm, but it's not it's on a it's more like an Not that it's an f but it's it's kind of it's a weird biting of the lower lip To me it seems like you want to do almost less of this a bit more of the top lip roll in and reducing your Chin and I'm not sure what you're doing here And dammit you want to me feels more and dammit you and No, I know I don't I don't read and dammit and dammit you want dammit you Especially if I if I play it again, this could be the the player that's funky, but dammit Around here. It's a dammit and a again corners out and this is a this weird thing of the o shape You will not take that away from me Not I take that away from not take that away Again away from me Away from me. I feel like much more extension out on the corners not take that away from me And that also seems a bit high there on the shapes more like this seems like he's chewing something take that away from me And I'm not talking much just a little bit of reducing how high that that shape goes and how much you curl in there Take that away from me Take that away from me But going back this definitely needs some more head accents and I will probably also add something more in his eyes They seem to kind of die towards the ends Other than that he looks pretty high up, which is very never know how tall the other person is but That's okay. They don't wonder. I think the eye contact is there. Okay. Now saturday Is a day for sleeping and sleeping watch out. There's a bit of a Of a drift on that that wrist rotates down sleeping right there I'm not sure if you if you have an ik arm It seems like it as this shoulder or this elbow goes down This kind of stays put but goes then up a bit and then the wrist goes down just a little bit of an ik feel there Right through there And to me it feels like sleeping and he has the tension up to me You want to bring keep that wrist up and I wouldn't drop it here I would just drop it on and And damn it's kind of like this anticipation before the tensing or you bring it back up a bit You will not take that away from me. Okay. Now saturday Is a day for cool stuff though in the hips and this and the steps. Okay. Now saturday Although probably through here right through there There's enough of a shift that I will bring that side of the hip up a bit sooner And probably if you go down and now there's all that weight on it I would also bring the root upside the root does a bit of this get a good upper thing Otherwise, it feels like he's getting into a squatty potty here It's a day for sleeping and damn it you sleeping Day for sleeping and you could exaggerate a little bit It's a day for sleeping with the root goes up and down on sleeping sleeping But just a tiny bit other huge things that the whole thing moves up and down But a little bit more in here sleeping and damn it you will And then you can almost drop the root the tiny bit again I'm talking like from here to here like tiny stuff and then you go down and damn And damn it and then on damn it a bit of more tension It just seems like there's more tension in the voice and you're starting it here But then it kind of it's kind of missing in places in the rest of the body not take that away from me You can even exaggerate a little bit of I take that away Away from me even like the root goes up and then down on me and again. I'm talking minimal I don't want this whole block to go up and down But it would be interesting to feel a little bit whatever accents you add in here and attention goes down It's a little bit in here as well for me. Okay now saturday Is a day for sleeping and damn it you will not take that away from me It's a great line though. It's very cool great character. The setup is great. It's really cool. It's being super picky Just because you are mentioning that in your email. You want some picky notes, but I'm gonna leave it at that Let me know email me. Let me know your thoughts and what you think about that. All right. Thank you All right, there's an email you can sign up you can start whenever you want you can submit whatever you want You get 16 submissions either way a like and subscribe would be awesome. All right. Thank you