 Alrighty, as always this play is in full first. There is sound Halfway through I didn't come in from stupid bill on last last night's bus Okay, hold on is this the camera? No, he has a bit of a Let me move there. I think generally the ideas are there the accent there also works in terms of Composition we are in our third. She is in the right area Composition it works. The eye line is a bit funky there. It's a bit better ish bit weird Bit low again of it almost a bit to the right And then there's nothing here. So watch out for the eye line My thing here is that This I think Personally, I would give this bit more time where we can see a bit more in the face right now She turns around and it feels like she's going for a head shake. Maybe This definitely works into the broader move because we don't see her face But then watch out. It's ever so slightly. I can't even draw a straight line It's ever so slightly twins there And I wonder my thing is I want is there anything we can do where it's a bit more It's a bit more quote-unquote original and it's easy to say and really hard to do You have to go to work, but if I would approach this shot to me it would be You don't have to look at him. I mean, that's okay to be already disengaged, but something where it's a It might be from some emotion to another emotion or something a bit more of a change through there Also, this is again fairly straight in default. So think about How does she feel right now? But this just feels like it's the default rig pose with the arms brought down Is there anything you can do in your posing? She might just finish off from a gesture or You know be a bit more leaned in and just something and then she leans back Something a bit more pose wise that will tell us something about the character and then this instead of that I mean you could do something since this is already here imagine She goes back and she's just so exhausted and angry that it's more that she leans on this Where her hand is on this and she would have something where it's like I can't believe that You know we talking about this on blah blah blah and get the lean on that hands on the shoulder Bit of a nicer line of action That and then she can still bring that arm down into a turn to lead into this Now that being said, I know you're turning this way I was going to say turn this way, but again, these are very destructive notes I'm just thinking out loud. This is what I would do Something like that at least And then watch out from a from a technical point of view that Doesn't quite feel like a weight shift. There just feels like a straight line there on the roots I see changes in the hips, but then it just kind of stops abruptly and then moves sort of left and it has that Ark through there. It just feels a bit like this. I think that could be worked on a bit more in terms of the body mechanics where Let's pretend you're keeping all of this where Also has that Just a very straight rotation in there and I would go with a bit more of a weight shift Turn and then with a slight rotation that goes into a translate for a weight shift then into a turn That might be led by the arm or the chest Or more of the head and you're leading with the head. That's okay Just as that's like feel of all of this here is moving as one here that rotation To me, I would break that up a bit more a bit more side to side Just on that moving over step over then into this you want to feel the root going up a bit more Then it can go back down and then back up again. Just a little bit So it almost turns Italian there So gesture, but again, I'm wondering at least something like that. It's I at least it's not your typical arm up fan out gesture It's it's helped by the hands by the fingers there But again, I'm wondering if that could be something a bit stronger Then just that again, this is usually not done like this. I like that. It's a bit more original and usual gestures But question for you and would you would you be able to explore that a bit more? Not that you have to act out the words, but it could be something where it's like she has Maybe the hand on the head. It's kind of not tapping that the temple but something where it's like on the head and then Hold on my webcam is turned off. I was gonna act it out I'm gonna I'm gonna stop this and I'm gonna do a part two so that I can turn on my camera. Hold on So I mean she goes Stupid Instead of just doing that it could be something where it's like Do that she is not just like you're an idiot something but something where it's a bit more like you in the stupid button Like it's it's almost a mix of Dapping stupid and then going into a gesture like that's what I'm imagining instead of just doing that arm Fan outs type of thing that's more common again I do like the fingers, but what if we explore that more and what you do with the fingers there is at the end But he's like stupid you might do this and then get into that and then into this That's kind of what I'm imagining there. I do like this once though. I like that Take my camera off here. I'd like the accent on the head But again, I feel like it could be Then more incorporated into the body right now it feels mechanically how it just kind of Translates in a straight way and it's kind of stops a bit of a harsh stop there You don't quite feel the stop it up as one leg Stops that movement and there's a weight shift and the root goes up a bit And it could be something where you involve the shoulders and arms a bit more This just feels a bit like it's just one big piece. You're moving Where most of it is done in the head and I'm thinking you have to do a gesture But it could be something a bit more involved That's that's very Again, if she could lean forward a bit more with arms back and then come back into a position Something where you want to break this up a bit more and involve that into your acting moment So it doesn't feel like again default default parallel twins and just kind of moving over if that makes sense All right, thanks All right, there's an email you can sign up you can start whenever you want you can submit whatever you want You get 16 submissions either way a like and subscribe would be awesome. All right. Thank you