 All right Diffin shot. Let's take a look at this. This is not spider-man for once Look at the reference And I look at it is already before and you mentioned that the original looks more pushed Than your animation and I agree. There's just some very Switch to here very very nice lines here, especially stuff like this So really nice forms It's hard to see sometimes with the lighting, but You know through this this is need to with the with the reversal Going into this how far he goes Even that's really really nice lines. It's all cool And then the exit is to jump out And it's cool it's cool to see this You know when a human does that my thing is always that if he translated this into animation It just becomes I'm just not a massive fan. This is this is has nothing to do with your animation, but it's just not as interesting Now there are a couple things here when I watch this this feels too broad in terms of The body going left and right. He was a bit more self-contained And there's something slightly separated where I see a breakthrough here. There's a lot of women through there But it doesn't quite match It feels like it's just a counter this moves this way this moves this way, but at different speed while There's a locked foot there and there's something about this step that doesn't quite feel like it's supporting the weight There's so much going on here But it doesn't quite affect the the weight and the balance here. I know there's something that feels slightly too separate It's a bit too harsh Arch-wise Where that feels like it's going this way then it's a pretty straight path this way and it kind of stops Let's bring back the reference here There's something much smaller and I see there's something bigger in in the arc of his arms And it's like he switches that leg over to kind of rebalance and then does all of this while this is thing put there Let's go down here Or see how far already this move is just so much bigger and that move is almost too late like you need to adjust that It's almost like he readjust for balance so that he can do that move It's not too bad, but then this gets a bit slow through here. That kind of works But then this gets a bit Dead here and I know he does Let's bring it back up here Hold on There you go See, I still see some it's like a moving hold like he keeps going forward and down Into those poses But he just kind of stops and then does that back and forth Which just also doesn't have as much power and snappiness as he goes out more snappy Even that has a bit of a slow feel and also the constant bent legs gives a bit of a just less of a Dynamic and elegant look to it. What is he doing in real time? This seems just fully stretch. I mean, there's a bend here, but still Overall to me, I would push down and just stretch those legs out But the thing is if I look at this, right, there's just something just not this was the difference when you see it in real life Right was a human does that it's impressive to see but then in this case You know, you could start that beginning You can almost change a couple of things where you can hold or maybe he goes up a bit for the participation And does a really nice smooth Down into this with a bow a bigger push not that he has to get off the ground But there's just some moments that I would that would push and hold and behold this a bit longer to go A bit faster into this and then really push those moments a lot more than the real life reference And again, this I would potentially hold into something and then Get into this a bit faster really push this maybe potentially get higher, but definitely stretch out the legs So I'm not just quite seeing the value of just copying the reference This goes all beyond into you know, even if you have to stand to go martial arts It just ends up being just movement and there's not that much. There's no conflict It's not that much interest to watch now This is just me and some people might love watching this either because it's martial arts or or dancing You know, obviously there are some great examples of just that they're just moved But it's so really well done and the timing is pushed But right now your timing it's it's just not push enough and it's not as elegant as the The real life counterpart here So I wonder to me at least I would push this push the timing push deposes Exaggerate more just take some liberties here and there And to me it's even Not that you have to do this, but if I have a shot like this what if You know, what if there's a couch here with his cat this is living room and and maybe he's He's cooking here There's something that he does but he needs to go from A to B and he's holding something that he's going to use here But he's so into his maybe has headphones on and he's he's so into this moment that he does all this and when he does this It's a bigger jump, you know Maybe maybe it's just a little bed with the dog or cat and he does this when he jumps over it And then dog or cat has like this weird people that look at what the hell are you doing here? And then he gets back and instead of the jump out He kind of slides into place to do whatever he needs to do Maybe maybe prepares lunch for the pets, you know, maybe at the very beginning when he starts off here He does kind of a hey you Like pointing towards the pets and he shows that maybe he has the pet food here Maybe here's the ball, you know, I mean he goes and then he points at it like it's full on pantomime Hey, I got your food here and the dog's head goes up and the Tail wags can't even talk anywhere And then he does his whole thing here and then jumps over it Holding the can and everything and at the end and so the jump he goes down and then opens the thing and the food comes Out and and the and you know the dog comes up and takes a couple steps And maybe those couple steps are also very similar to that dancing where you know pet owners become their dogs or vice versa Like that to me will be you can use this reference But then push this and do something more out of it and just kind of change the environment to give it a bit more story But more context bit more humor Versus just kind of imitating You know the The live action kind of part. All right, but again, this is very subjective You can do obviously whatever you want, but that is just my view on this. All right. Thanks All right, there's an email you can sign up you can start whenever you want You can submit whatever you want you get 16 submissions either way a like and subscribe would be awesome. All right. Thank you