 All right, let's play this whole thing here. Why is that dad? Listen, you don't bring me here offer me a small fortune to not tell me what's going on. I'm dying John You can't explain it to you Okay, just go. Hey, listen. I don't this doesn't that damn it all right Cool stuff actually I only have one or two things where I wasn't quite sure if it will work Which of course is always the realm of Subjectivity, but let's play this again here. Let me go through and tell you what I like it kind of just my impressions Why is that so this is all cool. Why because not moving that was first dropping. Why is that? He is moving and As an audience, I'm checking right away this section. There's nothing competing here. So I do like this section here Why is that dad? But now I'm looking at him and I be careful. There's Again, this will be you know somewhat different as you spline this but I just be careful How much movement he has this is also over one frame. So he would be he'll be spilling the whole thing in his face It's gonna be much slower, but I'm concerned that it's going to conflict With this and he also again has a move here And I kind of want to look at him the whole time. So it's almost like why is that dad? Why is that dad and? maybe it's just Maybe it's just like a frown and look down being ashamed or or just don't want to talk about it right now Whatever you want to do, but I I wonder if you're gonna have to tone that stuff down and potentially not do anything with his arm Listen, you don't bring me here offer me a small for because as he continues on listen, you don't bring me here You even have him drinking So I think the main thing There were two things to me. Let's just go backtracking here. I'm not sure about this exaggerated paper thing and Where to look those are for me the two big things And you can see this at the very beginning so Again, this might be different in spline in terms of the rhythm and this maybe this arm move slows down a bit He starts moving and then he slows down a bit and he moves, but it's I think it's potentially Uh too busy on both sides bring me here offer me a small fortune to not tell me what Also careful as you do step mode stuff, um, you know for me to hear is a ginormous change As he has as he takes steps and slows down and and stops and puts his arm down And then leans on it. That's that's gonna take a long time So for big changes like that, I would definitely add more breakdowns offer me a small fortune to not tell me what's going on Same thing here. It's a big thing Through all of that and I be careful because if you listen to the voice offer me a small fortune to not tell me what's going on It's a little bit of energy up. What's going on? But you have to be careful that this gesture is not too big body wise With the sounds, you know, the audio not having that Mirror it's meaning that I don't hear No, I don't hear coughing for sure I mean, I don't hear the voice straining Or changing because of physical exertion if that makes sense. So be careful. What's going on? But this is almost I don't know again This is up to you is very subjective to me feels like in this is because I'm very biased It's a very serious line to me. The mood is very serious to then have that Playfulness here in there. I'm not sure but then again, I'm not going to say don't do it. It's just not something I would do Because it to me it's almost. Ah, why why putting that flippiness in there for something that's so serious and subtle But again, it doesn't mean it's wrong. It's just that's just kind of how I feel about that moment there And again If he drinks if there's something in there BAM grabbing this This whole thing would just splash everywhere I'm dying. You do have time up until it says I'm dying But I don't know if you want to have all that movement and then he almost interrupts that movement by saying I'm dying So this is one of those step mode things where Uh It definitely needs more breakdown so you can see what the actual time is going to be And if there's so much movement if the audience Is being jerked around too much in terms of where they have to look that makes sense That's I'm I'm usually not a huge fan of step mode if there are not enough poses in there Because it can be very misleading and cause problems down the line I'm dying john. I do like this though just I'm dying john idea of potentially rubbing hands together so kind of nervousness I'm dying john And then it's the same thing careful how much he moves again. That's a big move That you want it to me at least should be more on the slower side But you're gonna take a lot more time, but that's gonna Conflict with this move down Same thing here careful. Now you're gonna have two moves at the same time there And I don't know if that's an intended thing where it's almost like they're mirrored at this point. They're both Realizing how bad it is. I don't know. Maybe that could be something and and that's why you're you're mirroring poses Uh, I can see that and again once you spline that maybe that's going to be okay Just mentioning but I do like this again the nervousness and I'm kind of peeking to see how he's taking the news You can't explain again one of those where from here to hear a lot more breakdowns and poses So we can see what the timing is and how he gets up But I do like that. He is smaller in frame and he's now taller and Just that change Okay, just go. Hey, that's all cool, but definitely more breakdown so we can see how that really unfolds. Okay Just go. Hey, listen I don't this doesn't but we talked about that last time I do like all of this Uh, yeah, just careful with how you how much time we're going to need and Are they going too far, you know from here to here It might look like yesterday too many quick steps or for an older person taking a big long step might look weird You know even from here to here all that should be okay I don't know to me the main thing is watch out timing wise because you're gonna have to add more breakdowns Um, I don't know what we workflow is. Maybe you are switching to spline every now and then to see and it's gonna be okay Um, but my main thing is this I'm not sure but I'm gonna leave that up to you And the bigger thing is where do we look and again, it's tricky with Step mode because it pops obviously and we kind of just popping around in terms of attention But maybe once it splines it will have a better flow So just watch out for that as you go into more breakdowns or into spline That the audience always knows where to look All right. Thank you All right, there's an email you can sign up you can start whenever you want you can submit whatever you want You get 16 submissions either way a like and subscribe would be awesome. All right. Thank you