 Alright, let's watch this in full first. This is K9 unit K27, I'm gonna need immediate assistance. My dog's been shot. I repeat, K9 shot. You're a good dog. You're a good dog. Alright. So the main impression that I have here is that it's a bit that, to me there are two sections. The first half here feels a bit too contained in basically this pose. That's my, those are my skills, my outlining skills. So that, if I go into this mode here, you throw the whole thing, it's just always in there. Now, this doesn't have to be a bad thing depending if you can compensate with all this stuff, it feels like this is K9 unit K27. It's kind of lingers. I'm gonna need immediate, then you got the break there. My dog's been shot. But even here, like everything has this, if the body moves, it feels like the whole thing here, including obviously with the dog here, everything is moving together, but even like the head, like all of that, it seems like it's one big piece that kind of stays there with look here to break it up a little bit. But once we're here, I feel like the finger stuff seems very random. You have a lot of separate finger moves that kind of go around, and then you have that section. But even then, when you're here, you can see how just everything, this ginormous piece just goes up and down where it doesn't feel like the sobbing comes out of the chest. It feels like you need to have a lot more nuance in there. And that's kind of the main impression. It feels a bit too simple. Honestly, it's a weird feedback or maybe too harsh. But so for me, it would be... This is K9 unit K27. Like there's a history. Like something happened, right, where he got shot, and imagine he is just, he just got to him, and maybe the pose is something where he's a bit higher. And it's just finishing the grip. And as he says all this... This is K9 unit K27. I'm going to need immediate... While saying all of this, he kind of leans back into this, and I will probably have... maybe looking around, maybe something happened around him, maybe whoever shot him is running away, or he can look more at the dog. I feel like they need to be just more break up and more activity. Not for activity's sake, but something where there's a progression in his mind where... Right now this to me feels all the same. Like you are, I can scroll up here, I can bring this up. It's like almost half way. It's all the same in terms of when you scrub the posing. I know there's some changes in there, but this is when he finally gets to the dog, but even then I would have a bigger contrast of he's occupied with what just happened, just checking in what's going on, I need help, where am I? Like what is this world? And he finally decided to put this down, and now it's all about the dog. And instead of maybe just that, I would give it... Like I like that he's just touching the ear, but again it feels like the fingers are random. Or maybe it's just something where he knows he's hurt, maybe he's just trying to pet him, but he doesn't want to pet him too much because I know it might hurt the dog. And then with this, it's basically again the same pose, just head down with this where it might just be a different, more delicate hand underneath the nozzle here, the nose and the jaw, maybe bringing the head up a bit to kind of have that final snuggle. And I feel like this could just be pushed more. So that's my biggest concern, that for this whole half it's just kind of, it's kind of it. And then here it's just the randomness of the fingers kind of, not my thing. And then again, everything is kind of stuck in that overall body shape there. And I wish there's something that you can add in there. You can see this how it's always the same. To give him visually a bigger progression of there's something crazy that just happens. I need help. How's the dog? Not doing well. I need help. I hope I'm not the next I get shot, but the dog really needs help. That type of thing is constant going back and forth. All right, well I did my thing, I called him. Now, you know, maybe he noticed that the dog at this point now is dying like what you have here. And that gets him into an adjustment of the pose. Like I said, bring the head up a bit higher. I know that to me it might just be rambling, but I feel like I'm not quite invested in that whole situation, which is also very subjective, but that's, I think to me that's a bigger issue than detail stuff for animation review. If that makes sense. I hope that makes sense. Anyway, let me know. You can email me and I'll leave it at that. All right, thanks. All right. There's an email you can sign up. You can start whenever you want. You can submit whatever you want. You get 16 submissions. Either way, a like and subscribe would be awesome. All right, thank you.