 All right, let's check this one out be honest. We're out. I'm feeling more intimidated than impressed This kind of company scares me holding a bit Interesting detail how your cup moves on that was neat I still wouldn't do that massive dip here But right now boring it feels like a bounce boing And the thing is because all that stuff is moving I'm looking here and here and here and here and here and so on and I'm not looking here and Technically you want to stay there. I mean subjectively. I think that you want to stay there. So we see You know, he's looking at the thing is I will probably look at the cup is why I have it up here Unless he just had a thought process and it's interrupted and then he stops here I mean, it's up to you, but they could be a moment to me subjectly what I would do is I would have His eyes look here Don't really move. There's some keep alive. It's tiny. There's some movement, right? then glances up I dart to where you have it now and Then maybe if you have time another I dart to the side Then dart up to then saying something because that way it feels like he was just concentrating on something There's a thought process going on and now he delivers The line and I don't think you have to look down here I think I would just I would experiment experiment with keeping the head everything else and Keep the eye direction, right? So eyes like this looking this way Keep looking keep looking keep looking. What's gonna happen is you might have to Heighten the lids here bring them up. Otherwise you might have a really sleepy eyes but He's been drinking here. Maybe it's not the first time. He doesn't really need to know where he sets it down It's it's just it's not hard like, you know, you just put it down. It's a reflex almost he knows the distance but by Looking here and then look going down with that but still looking it makes it to me more dramatic It would be interesting how that plays. Maybe it's maybe it's wrong, but I would try it I think it would be more interesting than what you have now and Looking to see all wearing it. Where do I need to put this cup? It's more like I'm gonna hold this stare I'm gonna look at you in a serious way because this is important Then he looks away Looks around and then boom locks in again. I think that could be really cool Be honest, Wilton I'm feeling more intimidated than impressed. This kind of company scares me It scares me Head stuff is cool. Just watch out your arcs if I track That's his nose here, right? You're starting in a good way, but then you go up and down And it's mostly like this Versus Scares me or scares me something that's a bit more arky. It's a bit smoother right now. It feels a bit too harsh Tracking that head Fingers are a bit too slow and too smooth usually fingers are pretty spastic there like the muscles and stuff. It's not gonna be Not gonna be that smooth there And then once we get to here it gets very IK again was you have a lot of movement here, but this is kind of stuck Again that feels a bit too slow all the fingers move at the same time as well. They spread at the same time I'm not buying that they should be spreading especially this one just moving over if you move over this way They would all move kind of this way to kind of rotate and tip Pivot off of here the spreading implies a lot of force down and pressure, which I'm not really seeing there This falls weird at the end because you got Handgoing down kind of detecting but these don't connect that left hand is sliding and this is only Translating with more movement here. So this is again a very much an IK hand But I don't buy how they are connected if if you would move this and rotate this wrist around a bit as well It would impact those fingers and they would move towards us and up a bit Watch out your bam your jaw starts on a linear key there without bam Nothing overall it goes too far down. This is more like a There's a lot of Anil would have a much of a sideways So overall it feels chatty. I think I would cut your Whatever you have your jaw rotation Scale it down cut it in half I would do 50% of the intensity and then you can accent the lips a bit more to get those shapes going even though I would prefer it than this and this is enough It's almost breaking the shape of it. It's a bit too Coming out like a monkey It is seems very chattery. You have a lot of hard hits especially through here On your jaw lots of linear keys hard hits, and I think it's just the way he talks Be honest, Wilton I'm feeling more intimidated than impressed. You can do a lot with barely opening the jaw Listening to his voice and this kind of company scares me. Yeah, I don't like scares me could be the biggest one scares me Which works here, but again you're opening things and hitting them on linear keys So start splining I was planning jaws corners to the lips so whenever you hit shapes They don't just hit from a to be you want to have a little bit of stretching out coming back in some Settle there just like settle as in that's like you want to hit that shape in and relax a bit Muscles they'll fire and just relax a tiny bit and move your corners in an arc It's not not so a to be in terms of you know, there's a mouth shape. Here's a mouth shape, and that's it They want to go have something to them I'm feeling more I do like this though That little but again, it's just a lot. There's a lot going on in the jaw But at the same time there's not much in the eyebrows Like Not that you want to mimic the eyebrows to the intensity or you know the tonal Changes of the ball of the audio Meaning that you on as well like the voice goes up eyebrows go up But it's always I know it sometimes it works as a starting point You can always tweak and a change and delete it, but Here it might be the cliche first thing to do But I would give some eyebrows some more life to see how far is too much I'm feeling more intimidated than impressed and even here like his voice goes down. He settles more in I Would start off with settling those guys dying those guys down as well. This kind of company scared And then potentially do the opposite where it's When he has that stare and bringing them down Maybe that's too on the nose where he settles that has a stare and he brings them slightly up So it's the contrast of I am Straight here looking at you straight, but I'm bringing up my eyebrows a little bit for some softness And then scares me you could then bring up that one eyebrow the way you have it here, which is good Giving us that opening there Be honest, well I'm feeling more intimidated than I still feel there's a whoop here a dip and it's the dip Shoulders a chest everything goes down from here to here a bit too much It's good to have a little variety, but even that I would reduce by 50% Because then you have it again here, and that's a big one too that would There's a lot of wiggling in the shoulders. He's like he's dancing a little bit And actually This is gonna be super weird, but the bald a little bit of hair the opening the color and Him doing his dance. I know this is a strange reference. This has nothing to do with your critique, but what this reminds me of is this That's more like it Strange very strange. I don't know what's going on. Why I thought of this, but anyway That is The impression that I have on this section So I would tone down the up and down at least 30 to 40 percent reduce your your wiggles When he goes down to me seems like you don't want to go down actually you want to play up that pressure That's okay, even though right now you're countering exactly the amount down and the amount up Makes it look like this is stuck in space. This corner here Always this kind of stays put but by reducing the amount you have here It's gonna fix that but there's a bit much here. This feels like well, I got to go down. So I got to go up For no reason. There's not that much pressure here to bring this guy up This is okay Good chest movement. So it's not so still that's good Yeah, so that's kind of it. I mean there's a lot of notes there. So I would hit those first and See what that gets us. All right. Thank you All right, there's an email you can sign up you can start whenever you want you can submit whatever you want You get 16 submissions either way a like and subscribe would be awesome. All right. Thank you