 Alrighty, let's watch this in full here. It's pretty cool. I like that robots come on All right, so what I'm looking at here, there are a couple things I think generally is pretty cool I think there are two major things missing though. So let's go one by one. I Like this intro. I like how she comes in. I think it's it's a bit Contained in terms of the Silhouette in terms of how far the arms break the body silhouette So it's always kind of in front of it. Watch out. You got a flippy wrist here And then it kind of stays put a bit of a tangent there You just kind of by staying put tension here It feels like it just kind of contained there as opposed to really understanding and seeing The structure of those arms and even as this arm swings back It feels like this is just kind of locked in that area. I know I was seeing moving but And we're kind of reacting to this moment where it feels somewhat locked and Then as you go forward you move forward over one frame and it kind of stays there one frame and goes back But again, the silhouette is muddy that we don't really see what's going on And then as the other arm moves back it has a bit of a Move back down and then it kind of stays put it and then something goes back up with a really bad wrist And then as it goes back again, especially with the dark in front of the dark of the robot the silhouette gets kind of Muddy as opposed to potentially bringing this out You might also have to change the colors. Imagine you bring this arm out You're gonna have that white in front of this white Just you have to kind of look at how we can get a color silhouette out of this But I think the arms are a bit too Contained and then you go back here and shoot forward Over two frames and then we lock. Do you see how those hands shoot up and then just kind of stay put So it feels like that swing is too big for something that only goes this high That is cool. I love this though. That is great going up. You can probably offset the legs a bit more Yeah, maybe kind of it Into this that's cool into like an immediate Into this that's neat and that's cool to she's kind of just and then moves over I think it was probably combined as moves where it's not it just goes up stop left versus combining that a bit more and I think the hookup is okay taking the arms below. I think it should be okay. She looks over. Yeah, I would buy this That's the yeah, that's the little technical thing the two major things I was talking about is this when she turns around She besides a broken race I don't want to go into crazy detail here because my question is What is this face? What she's looks super bored Now I'm gonna assume that you just haven't got their face yet and again watch out for silhouette I'm kind of losing the structure of those arms there But what what does she feel like? Why does she go over there? Is she being chased which you look around still is she just is not alarm She's just ready to fight and she's just determined or She is but then she's still kind of nervous. Maybe on the way down The eyes just look up and she has a bit of a concerned face What are you gonna do with that? And I think however she feels is gonna change Some of the moves here potentially some of the moves here probably not too much But that's what I'm gonna get more into detail here and once you get into this we're Super super twinny. I know there's an offset in terms of height here, but generally she feels It's very mirrored even the last pose You know, I know if this has joysticks that you can grab she can maybe you can add some buttons that she can push All depends unless you just want it to be stoic and then she goes down But it just feels a bit lifeless. So that's what I would Suggest there. The other thing too is that we see this close. We recognize that looks like a face This closes that's gonna make you think we go up there and I was waiting for eyes to turn on if those are the eyes I don't know. I'm not quite sure what I'm looking at But imagine something happens head goes up and gets ready to fight. It feels like there's an ending missing And all I'm seeing here is this is your submission for review It's been a while since you've animated and a bit rusty So I don't really see any history or context or if you want to add something after that either another shot or Extend this so it's kind of like half critique half question And I hope I hope that helps. It's really cool though. I would love to see this fully animated. It's a cool Rig, I wonder is that a keel figure? Let me know what kind of rig that is. I'm very interested in mecky stuff That's all cool. All right. That's kind of that. Let me know if that makes sense or not And if you have any questions or not and that's that. Thank you All right, there's an email you can sign up you can start whenever you want You can submit whatever you want to get 16 submissions either way a like and subscribe would be awesome. All right. Thank you