 All right, this is a new version with arms and splines Let's play this again. I could see this guy in a Like waiting in line like there are there are other people here. I Don't know that maybe cut someone off in front. Ooh, let me go here. I was sorry has nothing to do with your critique. So I Thought it's pretty cool. I guess little technical things here The first thing was that this foot feels a bit soft how it kind of slides over and Then slides over there. I know to me feels like you want to just go into a foot roll from here To do this and I'll have that that slide over to the right. There's something that feels Slightly off mainly because if you would take the weight off of this I will probably be leaning a bit more over there with more weight on that side of the Pelvis I'm exaggerating there, but Just seems a bit like you're taking all that weight off. You're still fairly Balance there in terms of like a balance pose, but I don't there's something that feels just a bit off and soft There's a technical terms off and Sorry That and then the other thing I'd be careful. There's some moments where those arms feel ever so slightly Locked together. There's something right through there where they kind of move forward It's like both wrists are moving this way There it gets better you're separating them out here, but once you're back together here It feels a bit a bit to parent it again, then you come out of it, which is cool But then they have that kind of togetherness again here at the end So it's just tiny things just tiny offsets on arms The other thing is once you are going over there and You put all that weight on this leg. Whoop. It's good. You got that shift there But then as you go back, I wish you would push that little moment of That hip sass You know my usual horrible Drawing. Hello smoking never mind Pushing that up and just a bit more and again I'm talking about it from here to here like it's this tiny change, but a little bit of This I see something in there, but I wish you could just push that more so this line here Which I can't draw apparently this line will just be pushed a bit more up this way Just a tad and then the other thing is There are two more things but something in the wrist here feels a bit off to be So flat towards us and then rotate over. I would probably stay in this so from like this To that and not have that turn here towards us It feels a bit of a random Non-purposeful wrist rotation there And then the last thing is something right through there on doing that step It's very subtle, but there's something that There's something as you start moving through here if this character had a nose Maybe it'd be easier if you add a nose just for tracking purposes and look at the arcs There's something in the chest and in the head once you get into this And gets better, but there's something right through there that fills Jittery in how that head goes side to side And it might even be because of this Very subtle, but if you can just track that a bit more. I feel it. I feel there's a jitter There's something strobing that head It is a bit smoother and that Parenting that I mentioned about those arms parent it as in they all move together like off of this axis here Almost starts through there already and these guys are a bit too twin Then you go work together and then over and I think that was it was one more thing, but I think that's it Probably as you do a weight shift and there's more weight on this leg You can add some more compression that foot. Maybe a little slight tilt over this way Over this axis of the foot there Being super super picky here, but as you can scrub you can see there's nothing in that foot. This is cool I like that lean over rotation over this corner as this leg pulls You know that foot over here. It's all very cool And I like your Off axis put downs. It's not a flat foot coming down Maybe a bit soft if I'm being like a hundred fifty percent picky Maybe take a frame or two out of that Stop there It was ever so slightly soft how that foot comes down, but then again is also fairly Swingy and relaxed. It's not like he's stomping over. So that would be really be a an extremely picky At the end of you know, whatever notes I gave you. It's like down here. Even if the notes ends down here It's the last one That's kind of it. You're super close little technical things and clean up them for some final polish. Alrighty. Thank you All right, there's an email you can sign up You can start whenever you want you can submit whatever you want to get 16 submissions either way a like and subscribe would be awesome All right. Thank you