 Alrighty, we got version two here. It's cute. I like it. It's a good edit Actually, my only comment would be see how you have from here on just a little bit of Heritations shrug just little leans and accents in there. I'm kind of missing it at the very beginning if you watch this just that Can have a ticket ticket ticket the energy goes up in the voice. She feels a bit tense Then you might argue I will tense up the head movement and everything But it's there's a slight feeling a of it's all in one axis going up But it ends up being super still with only movement here And I would have a little bit more even if it's just something like this Little bit of up and down with a button with a little bit in the Y in the slight side rotation just a bit and then and then you have a bigger move through there, but it just feels just a bit too Like CG locked and there's some moments where it feels like the head is really not moving whatsoever While this is moving and you might even have when she goes and leans This way It's good that you have movement in here But you could even imagine like she has maybe a slight side shift in a route A little weight adjustment so that this line here would end up being even if it's a little bit to the right But if you look at this and I should probably Change I know Change colors slightly right so if you if you cater in in this you can see some onion skinning How she's totally locked in this is a little bit to the left here, which is good But I wonder at the very beginning it feels Just one axis up and down basically and I would have a little bit of She could you know, she could think about it And then when she started saying this you could kind of almost take a step Not to step back as in like a massive move, but visually it will go a bit more to the right Kind of creating some distance through there. She doesn't want to engage too much Like she's almost embarrassed of just ordering just that and then Actually addressing that's when she you know She takes a bit more control of herself and what she really wants and that's when she would take a little bit more Of a move to the left, which you have a little bit here, but it could be even a bit stronger And I think for this is super peculiar like proper animation, but I like that this is moving That this would be sliding around, but it there's a slight Maybe it's okay. I was wanting maybe like a slight Rotation and a little bit of translating this so it just doesn't feel so glued to this Only also because the voice Is that all like it feels very annoyed and that would be actually like being so annoyed voice wise It's like doesn't really care too much how how plops that plate down That's why there will be a bit movement in here and a bit more in here might just be me It's a slight sound of Brad Bird in there. I like all of that. I think the lip sync is a bit off on this one just a bit I Was that whole beginning here once you hit only it's okay Just the beginning feels like it's missing. Watch out on pig Highline it drops a bit low and this is the one where it's bit one axis turn off this growing here Where she could have a little bit of a bit of an arc and why it may be a bit tilt in the head Just a bit watch out hits that rotation on that head It's a bit harshly here And maybe it's accentuated by that sudden move to the right Right there. Then we have that and you get some changes in the hands That'd be super picky You can see that change in the forearm With no real change in here like it would pivot off of here But the wrist would or the hand would rotate down a bit with a forearm. I feel it here But it feels a bit missing here just because I feel it just looks very IK And I know it's kind of at the bottom and hidden in the slash shop But just want to mention what I'm seeing but it's a fun ending seems up more It's like a tighter cuts than what was the first one That's kind of that. Yeah, I like it Any questions always let me know the email and that is that. Thank you All right, there's an email you can sign up you can start whenever you want you can submit whatever you want You get 16 submissions either way a like and subscribe would be awesome. All right. Thank you