 Okay, let's check out this guy here, whoa Who nice is this? Yeah, that's a cut. Sorry. I was a bit confused about this one because of the cut because Because of that fast move it almost looks like he's advancing really fast. He's kind of the same space She's kind of the same space. It just kind of felt like a quick pop into something new so maybe Pushing the change of position between characters. Not that you want to completely confuse the audience, but It will also help to have other structures In terms of geography to know where we are that's all in that in this viewing is first time seeing this a bit jarring And the same thing with this where it's pretty much the same space kind of the head just pops In a different spot, so it's like hmm the cheetahs disappear. It's a bit of a weird cut Where you know it would work if you bring it just closer and it's just all about the roar for instance That's cool like a lot. This I almost wish it was Imagine we were zoomed out so So imagine it was kind of like that right he does the whole but He will be Could be here and you have all the pieces down and you know pieces here whatever Your sets gonna look like actually it's probably the set we've broken here But you know, maybe this is too much, but this could be your framing where you can see the rest of it pieces falling down it's kind of a full-on silhouette of the body and everything Versus Versus going up with the camera Oops That makes sense Something that could be cool seeing all of this here would be translate so to me. It's almost like you want to You may be around this position Like it feels like characters here. She's here set and the camera travels In terms of translates from here to here And I wonder if you keep it here and all you do is just rotate and pan with the character but you're overly You're globally further away to frame the whole thing. I don't know that's just me Maybe it's also again because we're just seeing nothing if you have The rest of the set or clouds or something to understand what's going on then that could be different It's always a bit weird when you see nothing in the sky Some of these shots like here So maybe if you put a skybox or you know a sphere for your skydome or something that might be better Understand let's just understand a couple things. This is cool. I like all this Like that. I don't think it changes the pace. It's great That's cool Yeah, it's just some Just a cut scoopy with clear, but yeah, it's cool. I really like it There's just some changes a lot as I mentioned terms of camera angles potentially, but again Clouds or whatever you want to put in there might work already So I would say just send it again just with that and then I can give you my quick two cents Potentially, we still have to maybe change some camera angles. Maybe. All right. Thank you All right, there's an email you can sign up you can start whenever you want You can submit whatever you want you get 16 submissions either way a like and subscribe would be awesome. All right. Thank you