 All right, so looking at what you have here So this is already the change, which is well like we talked about it's kind of a bummer It's kind of cute How she I mean you can always technically if you're really if you want to have a bit of a delayed entrance You can always open this and imagine arm Imagine her arm is here thumb is here holds the door and You know, she's she's here So that first you see the arm and the door opens you on there Oh, who's opening this and then later on she enters. That makes sense like you don't You don't have to have her come here. See how she's already here with the head. She's almost she's already inside I mean you're intersecting here Imagine that arm is just here, but then the head is technically still on the outside and And only later on she come in. I mean, you know if you want to that that could be a way To have a different entrance But you have to work on is when she comes in she just looks like a robot because there's you know, there's no blinks They're not I darts. She just kind of looks straight just with You know kind of a glossed over robotic look versus she looks and maybe she catches this first Blinks and then looks at this and then switches to this back to this. So there's some more facial stuff That you can put in I'm not sure how much you have. I mean you have stuff here already That's why I'm wondering why isn't there anything right here. This just feels a bit dead. That's just looking like at the wall You know imagine this is behind the camera like the wall of the fridge weird Also just body wise you can see the angle of the chest and all that Stays in that angle you through all of this all I'm seeing is up and down But there's no side to side. There's no y-rotation. There's no other change in the body there Since you're not actually grabbing the food here a and not for the cut I would have you would have to cut here on frame You don't have it you need a frame Counter so I can tell which frame on my frame is frame 125, but you know, I don't know where that is so Somewhere here or wherever you want it. I need a friend All right, so you need to cut out here While it's still moving Instead of stopping was you know what's going on and then she wraps it so cut out sooner And then I will probably cheat and put the plate here Donut here ish something the thing that's a bit weird right now is that She comes here and stops and it's it's exactly cut off her head is it almost feels like that's her head That's her body. It's just it's a weird look So it would be awesome if she was either she was taller which you can cheat right you can easily Actually, if I think about it now you have That is the fridge. So you got your My sloppy birds here Right her eyes are here. They will be ideally better here So what I would do is just cheat she comes in here and her head instead of being here is actually this high You know, it's just higher. So that way her eyes are here compositions a bit better Then her, you know, her head would stop running here ish That way you still have part of the neck and it feels like a more complete person versus right now It's just nice. It's just completely cut off Right here, you mean Like you want to see this amount But above here Yeah, rest seems okay. I mean there's some You know as she as you put your finger there and she comes closer. There's gonna be more pressure on this So you're gonna push down those fingers. So they're gonna have slight movement Some keep alive that's Cut out sooner. She gets to this Fine, but careful. See you have you have a couple things you're moving her leg and her arm Leg goes down arm goes back You know, it's a bit in sync so I would you could keep her leg up and almost in a pose that's more like this Silhouette wise it's a bit cuter than Then kind of that what you have here Imagine, you know, she could be just a bit higher Keep that head up with that leg up until You know, she starts to grab Because then it's not so twin. You don't have movement here and here at the same time And then she can put her leg down as she goes back here That's cute You can also cheat the door Open that just a bit wider. So when you're here There's no danger of her hitting this and hitting this Because you know, if you open the door here, you can easily just open till here And then even at this point you can open it more. No one cares. No one's gonna care about that continuity But when you move your when she moves her arm here, right on this There's a movement right here and then it's kind of cut off here and there's not enough in the shoulder There's nothing in the chest as this arm goes forward and back. So you got involved that chest It's kind of cute. I like that. I think this is a bit too bouncy if she would really lift up Like bring that plate up and down like this the donuts whatever they will bounce around Especially that second one Boop right there. So that feels a bit much It's cute walk down That's cute too. She just gets a bit off balance. So this is okay ish This I'm not quite buying how she can quickly move her root over and I don't know how she's stopping She stops on a dime as if she hits this door So you got to stay within this area and kind of come back with it Be a bit looser in the roots and at this point. She's pretty off balance. I will keep her More around this angle While she does this here So this here root here This you know This to me is a bit more balanced That feels a bit broken when all that stuff is moving here, but then the hips are not moving And again, she feels off balance Just how slow she puts that leg down. She would have to put that leg down so much faster to be balanced again Yeah, so it's just it's taking too long You got to be more in something like this throughout the whole time. This feels more balanced And again, if you're jumping like this These guys would go So either you compensate And when she jumps that plate is dragging and then it comes up and then it comes down slower So you could do that or you just don't jump as high. You don't make it as much And then again, you got to cut out sooner Have you caught here? Maybe and then, you know, she's going to look here. Is she looking here? I'm just going to make sure that Yeah, if you know some more stuff in their face going on But it's cute. It's cute. I like how, you know, you have that turn and then that little walk That'll change here and all that it's just It's interesting to me that this is what you put in the shot now, but we talked about this In my class as well You know adding on personality having more contrast in the movement So they go somewhere go somewhere here. So it's not in one axis Do little kits Things like this is not how an adult will close the fridge. This is more what a kid would do So I'm always interested in like how come this is now in your shot, but when you were working on it in my class And we were all critiquing it like you didn't put it in your shots then I'm actually very curious What prompted you to make Her walk like this jump over do this and hop over Like how come you made that change is that the current class the people that told you or how did that come about? I'm very curious And then quickly Let me see here if I bring up Maya For your sound what you do is in order to have the sound down here Here so like you know in here, obviously, you know, you would have the sound So what you would do is you do file import And then you would have to go Hold on How to switch to different folders so you just navigate your folder to To any audio you have so I have animation audio stuff in here So let's say I take lost How about this one? Although that is an mp3 that is a mistake here. I got to go back and find a way file. There you go. So now It's in here. I never entered the numbers right And you're going to have to extend You know make sure that your first and last frame responds with your actual audio And let's pretend that You have a scene that starts at frame 60, right? And then your audio is the audio is cut off here Like you want that to begin sooner you can do a right click And uh, you can't see it. Hold on. I would have to bring up Your right click sound This is the one I just imported go to the option box And then in here you have an offset So since my shot starts on frame 60 If I put in a 60 frame offset you can see that the Sound starts here the actual sounds, you know that I recorded appears here, but my sound file starts here So if I wanted this here you can say well instead of I can go back Uh, and then you can start readjusting right so you can see 40 frames brings me to this Well, then I can say 25 frames brings me to this so you can start adjusting And I can do this very precisely so it says if I say offset 15 for me This is exactly where the sound starts. I never entered the numbers I never press the button I never end there you go And if you know you can extend this longer to see if the sound is longer for me it is actually there's some more silence You know and then it's up to you to cut out whatever you need You're lying I forgot how long this is for me. There's more No, I'm done lying It's interesting. Anyway, do that file import again file import And then you import whatever sound you have let's pretend I'm bringing another sound file Then you can go again in here, and I'm going to move up my Maya You can go right click with your mouse in the in the timeline right click sound and now you can see These are the two first one I put in and this is the second one So I bring in the second one and you can see it cuts off the beginning So I'm going to go again into Sound of options here And then set my uh offset actually my frame Should start on one that's what it was And then here we go. That's my beginning There were 23 people on that deck And it would have collapsed whether you went out there or not So that plays yeah, but I did walk out there And it did collapse. There you go. It's a good line. I'm gonna animate to this one zoom And I killed it. It was an accident. That was my fault There you go and stop see it stops around 502 so I for me I will put in 502 and then there you go That's my thing. Anyway, I hope this helps. I have no idea if this helps if that was your question So I'm gonna leave it at that and then you can let me know. Thank you All right, there's an email you can sign up you can start whenever you want you can submit whatever you want You get 16 submissions either way a like and subscribe would be awesome. All right. Thank you