 Okay, here are three mistakes that students make in an inspector calls essays, according to first rate tutors. Number one, students always forget to mention pre-sees socialist message in the thesis statement. Remember, it doesn't matter whether you're answering a character question or a theme question, pre-sees always has a socialist message that underpins social responsibility, gender, age, and class. Number two, stop being so basic. In other words, stop using basic vocabulary to describe characters. Instead of saying, Mr. Berling loves money. Say things like, Mr. Berling is a greedy capitalist who exploits labor, especially working-class labor, like Eva Smith. Don't say Mrs. Berling is horrible to Daisy Renton. Say instead that Mrs. Berling is cruel and callous as she looks down on working-class women like Daisy Renton. Number three, poor paragraph structure. Do not describe what's happening in the play. Do not go off and start listing lots of pointless creations. Use...