 Alright, so looking at this in your question, um, I personally probably would not have... It's a tricky thing. I would probably have a smaller version of the shot and have your text, you know, imagine this is all black here. Then you got the text underneath. You know, sometimes on Reels you have a certain area below and then, you know, people write down, I did only this person or this background stuff or whatever and then I think you could have subtitles there. Um, I think it's a tricky thing because I usually don't see it even if you have a foreign reel. Um, I just would not have it over your animation and the problem is I immediately, I think people will go to the text, you know. That's usually the problem with subtitles, that people go and they kind of miss what's going on. And the thing is you could have it without the subtitles and then at the end of the reel you can say, by the way, here's the shot with subtitles if you want to know what they're saying. For me it doesn't matter because I understand it, this is the whole German. I know the actor that says it and everything, so it doesn't really matter to me. But as a whole, I'd probably take it off and then at the end have it and even then have it below the animation. I have to understand something, otherwise I can't concentrate in the school. The action to the head here is very separate to what's going on to his body even on something like this. She has a lot of movement with all of this going on. You would have a slight change in the upper body and the elbows coming in and the shoulder moving around. Even on that change here, this would go a bit lower, there's a bit more weight involved. Also Ash is changing, it's just kind of a rotation in the leg, but it would still be a slight change in his wrist and fingers. I do like what's happening there in his face, but again she comes down to I.K. where the wrist is kind of stuck. His hand stays put through here, like the finger poses. If your kid is doing this, you would also re-grab and grab her here and readjust the grip to go, holy shit I'm not going to want her to fall down, actually I would probably take my arm and go around her waist and this. Even if you're holding here and you can't hold here, she's going to fall down. So as a parent, I would say that hand will go up here to really stabilize. And even animation wise, I wouldn't be too bad because it's a bit more contrast when you change the pose. And then I'm curious, once he gets there and she goes over, I'm not sure why he lets go. I know she does this, but the thing is if he's okay with her strangling him and being like this, why be concerned about holding her at all if he seems okay for her to be like this and hold on to it? You know what I mean? It seems like, oh I'm confident that despite you strangling me, it'll be fine. You can just monkey around and you won't fall down. Yet here he holds on to it. I don't know, something slightly weird? I think if you're doing this, then I would have an expression with him where his head goes up and he has a slight... whoops, I have no air. And then when she does this, you might argue that she's letting go of the grip a bit, her legs are a bit more relaxed. And because she's holding on to it with her arms, that's when he lets go and then can grab on to that. That's just from a technical thing here. Your arm here is super straight, there's no arc and kind of stops on the linear key, like hits this wall. And then when she gets off here, same thing, she pushes off, there's nothing going on in his shoulder and everything. Again, IK arms, it's just... Now, all that set aside, when you listen to her audio... Otherwise I can't concentrate in the school. And I can't concentrate... That's the right thing, because it's such a... moment there, that's a bit weird. I understand you're going for streaks here, but... That's a bit weird, but my main problem is that this whole action of her going over there and all that stuff, none of that fits the audio, you know? She really sounds like she's just sitting or standing there, not moving whatsoever. And having this massive action here... ...doing this, like, whoa, like, you know, this change through here... This is a common problem in feature animation where the voices don't quite match what the action is doing, but at this point, this is like times a thousand, so that's my biggest problem. Like, as always, your animation is great. It's just, this comes now to, well, your voice does not match the action at all. Like, you're just taking this and you just want to animate it like this, but you're not really paying attention to the audio. It's kind of a problem. And that's kind of a cute, like, oh, yes, but then that's more like, holy shit. So for that on her, it would be a bigger smile. Like, that's how the audio comes across and how she says it. Yeah. And then when she says, Concentrion is her, this needs to be more like that at the end. Concentrion. Concentrion. It's an N, E, N. Concentrion. So out, maybe some teeth. And then here, that's actually an M, so maybe you can roll in the lips a bit more. It just feels like he has his mouth closed and opens it. Have you ever lied in a star? The D is, that works really well. Have you ever lied in a star? Have you ever lied in a star? Lieda, Lieda. Here. Have you ever lied in a star? I wish I could scrub in quick time, but when it says Lieda, Lieda, I, I'll bring out the, the corners more. Where is it? Have you ever lied in a star? You know, this section, we have a Lieda, just pushing that a bit more. And then... Max, you show co-pups. Have you ever lied in a star? Have you ever lied in a star? And it's, it's weird. Something that's really weird is that, like, Max, you show co-pups. Like, do you, do you like the co-co puffs? Just, yes. And then he goes, well, I don't have any, but he is showing it to her. So, are you saying... It's just weird because the way he says it... So, show co-pups. Have you ever lied in a star? Have I ever lied in a star? It means I don't have any here. You know, and it's just weird for him to show it because, now, A, you're saying you just really mean and it teases her that, well, it just doesn't work with the audio when he says, well, I don't have any here, but you just showed them to her. So, are you saying you're just gonna, it's just kind of that to be mean to her? I'm not quite, again, it's this weird combination of, I'm not quite getting what you're doing with the animation compared to what the audio is. Anyway, I don't know. It seems like I have more questions and I might need some more answers from you and then we can go from there. Alright, thanks. Alright, there's an email. You can sign up. You can start whenever you want. You can submit whatever you want. 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