 about the thesis statement. In this video, you're going to learn how to write an effective thesis, the following are key characteristics of thesis statements. First, your thesis statement should narrow your subject to a single central idea. Second, your thesis statement should claim something specific and significant about your subject. It should be an idea that you can support with evidence. It should not be a fact. For example, the Apple brand has an estimated value of 98.3 billion US is a fact and therefore not an effective thesis statement. Third, your thesis statement should convey your purpose and reason for writing. Your thesis statement should provide a roadmap of your points for discussion. The step is not mandatory but often provides focus and direction for the reader and writer. An example of focus and direction should be sustained drug use has negative impacts on the individual, the family, and the society. The following are examples of effective thesis statements. Because they had so many opportunities for leadership as young people, many new grads find it hard to accept routine entry-level jobs when they enter the workforce. Because artists can now publish their music directly via the net, consumers have more choices than traditional distribution allows. To compete well in the global economy, Canada must make higher education affordable for any students who qualify academically. Now that we've liked some examples of effective thesis statements, let's follow this simple checklist for thesis revisions. Is your essay focused on the proper topic? What claim are you making about your subject? What is the significance of your claim? Can I say so what to it? Can your statement be made even more specific? Do all words or phrases in your thesis statement contribute to the single idea? Here are some examples to help you revise your thesis. This new product brought in over $300,000 last year. An improvement would be, this new product succeeds because of its innovative marketing campaign, including a product placement in a blockbuster movie, celebrity endorsement, and a viral video. People should not go on fad diets. An improvement would be, fad diets are dangerous because they deprive the body of essential nutrients. Seat belts can save lives. But now car manufacturers are making cars with computer sensors that can avoid accidents. An improvement would be, seat belts are an important feature. While new crash avoidance systems have potential, seat belts have been scientifically proven to minimize injury and death. There you have it. Now you're officially a pro at writing thesis statements. Thanks for watching.