 Alright, so this time I'm going to do a video review and I'm curious about your feedback Please let me know if that is okay for you. If it's better. It's worse. You prefer Written you prefer pictures and so on and so on. So I'm open to feedback So you are giving me this guy as a single shot here. So as we play it, I think it's totally fine Even out of context, I think you got him following the beat reacting and I like your What's it called the pupil? pupil changes there and it follows where the guy is going. I think this is all great Yeah, I really like it Okay, let me pause this quickly. All right. I'm back. I just have to get my Pen sorted out. So yes, again, this is all good So let's actually move on to the other one. So So far this seems good as well The music here, I think this is all working really well. This is all works so you made the changes of The sections going in and down and compressing more and adding that Contrast between going out and in which is good and it looks like you were You're not planning on having it go out go this way and then as it turns Have the head actually move this way, right with the body and that guy and everything kind of turn this way Again, it's definitely would change the shot I think if you are done with your whole thing and you want to revisit one or two shots to see where could you improve things? I think this would still be okay for contrast. So it's you go from here to here. All right with the head looking this way but The rest all works and you're asking for these guys. So This one's a bit unclear only because I mean, I'm assuming you're going to move the hands. They're going to be moving so he's following It's the focus on this or Is it the focus on this or is it by any chance focusing on this you're gonna have to make sure that in your animation It's gonna be clear What do you want to do is at this point? here It's just circling around. There's no real Emphasis and then here the same thing it just goes up So just make sure that once you animate this we know exactly what the focus is of this shot And then as we move along He's looking in that it's fine. This might be a bit long again, I mean if you have him come in and this might Squint his eyes a bit more, but as of now it feels a bit long. I think you probably cut that Seen a bit shorter The idea here is he is a little bit freaked out come back I Wonder to me is given all the previous shots where he moves around is he is you know He had his hand his hand out and it's a massive long arm Let's do that again something like that, right? He had to stick out and then the bee was coming out and swirling out of his arm There was a lot of motion there and i'm curious if at this point he would be a lot more Um irritated and nervous and and mad So that the movements here, that's fine, but this I feel like could be a bit stronger Acting wise this could be also a bit stronger That works. So you almost have to have a couple of those for him to really get out. This feels a bit Small compared to what happened before let's see That is fine, and I do like the contrast of the bee at this point doing a flip and then coming back Again, this seems a bit more like this seems very small this little wave that he does in his arm It feels more like oh, I'm just annoyed But not like this is I don't know how many times this bee is back. So I will In this shot make the moves definitely a lot faster So watch the whole thing It all seems fairly small This works. I mean, this is all clear That's okay This feels a bit weird only I'll this is okay But then once He moves this is a fairly big move. It's a twin pose except except for the fingers here, but There's something about something about closing it And opening it like that I wonder if you would have This arm right stays like this and it's only this arm that opens up and As the shot continues he could have An open You know an open palm here Maybe with his arm there With that arm still out there, right? That makes no sense, right? But this guy out here But basically he takes his wrist and flips it around. I'm not too sure if just this Acting moment here works with both arms Uh going out there. It feels more like there's some guy With a gun here You know, it's I don't know. It's not quite connected to this guy. I'm not too sure about that But his reaction at the end. I like if he's like, uh, like he's satisfied. He's happy. Finally. I did it The bee is dead That works And that is it These are my thoughts on those shots overall. So, uh, let me know if that makes sense Let me know if the video review made sense And uh, yeah, thank you very much All right, there's an email you can sign up you can start whenever you want You can submit whatever you want you get 16 submissions either way a like and subscribe would be awesome. All right. Thank you