 All right, so you talk about the ending you're not quite there. I think at the end. That's what you mentioned there Looking at the beginning. There's some really neat stuff there. I can see There's some more there's some more sliding a lot of the rotation thing I think we need to kind of do more of a the fingers kind of like the thumb You know, that's your thumb here and then on the down like thumb come out kind of a spreading as opposed to a constant sliding there of the hands Not too bad Nothing crazy. Like you're starting off with more foot stuff here, which is good This feels a bit linear how you get that foot off It also feels like very straight on as opposed to kind of a bigger arc Same thing here. This was a bit a bit linear Something about this foot as it comes off It's kind of angle of the foot is the same and then the way it comes down here doesn't feel like there's a lot of Rotation in the leg there and the foot it kind of works This is a bit tricky where it feels a bit too post-to-pose where even though there's an offset in arms If I watch in hands if I watch this in real time, they kind of come up pretty much at the same time And I know if I frame through I see the offset But there's something about this coming in Not too bad, but the tricky thing with this one is that the moment you lift this up Like it feels like you want to have get into a pose like this with one arm one hand and a bit earlier As opposed to hold and I feel like if both go up here He will kind of lose his grip and start sliding down. It's interesting Timing theory feels a bit off And it's a bit too you hold is too long to be kind of an anticipation to this thing It's a bit tricky Watch out this this hand kind of pops out up here A bit too linear also. It's kind of a big move On that throw I'm not sure if I saw it at last time too what it feels like on that on that um Push off and throw what's called twist There's something about this coming down and rotating which works But then once you hit this point, it feels like you're suddenly rotating out of really this neck And he's not really falling down anymore. It's like a full rotation with the pivot in the neck as opposed to continuous translate down So watch out how you suddenly have that It's kind of a weird pivot point on that on that drop Oh But the offset there is good Like I look around um, you might still argue that potentially this is a bit too close the knee and And the hand there Same thing here that hand and that foot there close in terms of tangents Same thing with this guy your rest is and you got that hand right there with where that leg is I think you can you know bring out that arm just more And uh and really separate that thing Careful how long you linger that spear with that leg here so it doesn't overlap as long It's a bit tricky. I mean it's not So that's super short killer We're just like right where that leg rests you got a lot of overlapping Moments where leg and spear kind of line at the same the same angle Then you get a moment of stopping here where that tip is kind of too close at hand again forming a tangent And this being a bit too aligned But you go back here, which is good And then he goes forward and again. I will keep this guy. It's a bit longer If you can just it feels like you're lifting The amount of push off from that foot is not quite enough And I don't see like there's no change in the rotation that foot Like you want to keep this so that you can go really far back with that foot roll It feels like he starts to use this leg to push the body over here But by the time you lift his leg he's still kind of leaning Back here. He would he would start falling back You want the body like here the body over this leg You're really over that and then this leg can come off It's a bit late You kind of boom comes to Just a bit pose to pose on that stop there I mean come everything kind of stops almost at the same time Then you got that move where arm and body and leg everything kind of goes up and stops at the same time So it's a bit too pose to pose But it's better. It's just being picky here just something about this being Comes in goes into one two But I like how you have that sub pose where he stops and then does that little peak just great And this is still something that I've always been mentioning And it's a little bit tricky where like he feels like he's really leaning and like he's getting ready And he got that nice curve and it's going yeah, I am ready And then he goes into this and everything kind of drops and it feels more like it's kind of tired Tired kind of a Sunday stroll It doesn't feel as energetic As it should be Same thing here with your push-off you're getting at this point already lifting this up While send the gravity is not quite over this leg enough. So at this point he would again fall over should be around this point With the head here This was a bit more balanced. So the foot would be rolling off here Giving again more of a lean forward a bit more dynamic pose That's better and then you mentioned the same which Not good there. So yeah, it's kind of that pause and Goopy is a bit more dynamic there. It's kind of neat though You can probably bring this guy just further back a bit So that's kind of I see it you're getting there. It's definitely in the right spot. So tangent things there and kind of offset and Watch out your your If you hold the pose and it starts like make sure that you kind of ease out enough It doesn't kind of pop out And watch out how you get into that kind of a tired pose there But overall it's it's really heading into the right direction It's being super picky making sure that I'm covering everything and you know and depending on how much time you have You can also kind of choose What is important to you or where you want to push things, but I'm just mentioning what I'm seeing But compared to what you know, you first submitted. This is a really really really good progression there All right, there's an email you can sign up you can start whenever you want You can submit whatever you want you get 16 submissions either way a like and subscribe would be awesome. All right. Thank you