 Alrighty, so I'm checking out this guy here and it's cool. My main concern is this. We play this here. People who aren't alive anymore because of me. Oh my God. Yeah. I know. I feel terrible about it. And I really need your help right now. So I think overall it's cool. It's headed in the right direction. I think the biggest thing to me is that there is a bit of a disconnect between this section which I think works really well and then that section where this seems more in a spliny direction where it's kind of working with the audio versus this that feels very IK and has kind of those repeated moments here for like stuff like this where it's kind of like just up and down, up and down in a straight way moments through here, going over the table and especially this here that feels very, very IK just how the the what's it called? The arms kind of come up off the table here in hands and then you got that your IK thing of this is staying put while this is changing direction changing angle that type of stuff and I know this is also for later point where we just do more technical stuff but just watch out for that so to me it feels like keep going the way you have it definitely address the section here on the hands people who are alive and then when you go with, when it goes 3P, 3P, 3P, 3P people in that section so make sure that see in all of this here what you have at this point is just a rotation in the head, it's in one axis and it doesn't do anything more than Y or any type of tilt where he might be looking this way and then turn the head a bit and looking down there's some complexities in the area here 3P people who are alive in the movie cast that's cool, right? how you initiate it with the eyes that's great that's great too it's a shift of me and it's a turn it's a shame in that look I think you could keep this closed and then when she goes that's when it reopens he's shamefully looking away and waits almost for as a permission thing I'm waiting until she acknowledges what I just said or reacts to it and then I'm going and open the eyes this is really weird so this is where I get that hand thing where this happens no arcs, all that IK stuff at the same time you got the head that does this angle here and this kind of move around that feels totally disconnected from the rest of the body just through here it's kind of funky that's cool, right? that's okay and I like what arms are doing just look at technical things like fingers and arms and everything but at this point I think it switches where this kid's better but then that is weird where he doesn't really move the head according to the audio so if you watch terrible about it and again like terrible, the head can come up a bit terrible about it a bit of a Y rotation over towards us that stuff is kind of weird and then watch out like through here see his head is doing kind of a down and then through all of this especially when you scrub through you just see just jaw stuff but nothing really in the head I don't know if this is first passes but it's going to be also a lot of stuff sold through his eyebrows and eyes and stuff I wonder if at the beginning see how he's just kind of looking and staring has one thing up and then does that it works, I'm not saying it's wrong I'm just curious how it will play if he has if he looks here he has lots of eye darts looking over here here's lots of little moments where he feels a bit more nervous and then he goes into this where he stares because he's thinking back to what happened so there's a clear shift of I'm kind of reliving I'm nervous and I'm thinking about what's going on right now and then after that question he's staring because he's rethinking about what happens which is not wrong I'm just curious how it would feel like for contrast because right now it's always kind of the same until here so now one of these would be a cool break of all this bit more panicky darts and head moves and then he goes into this that's kind of it though I would really continue and really try to put in all the head stuff in sync with the audio and the biggest thing that's going to break you is this section here I could really have to from a technical point of view get rid of those IK arms because you can have fantastic stuff through here but then that's absolutely going to kill you you ready? that's kind of it for me, thank you alright, there's an email you can sign up, you can start whenever you want you can submit whatever you want, you get 16 submissions either way, a like and subscribe would be awesome, alright? thank you