 All right, so let's watch this in full first 1037 NNJ here's Pink Floyd All right, cool, let me bring down the sound a bit 103 it's cool. I like definitely the beginning here how you have that The thought process there slowly going down. I think I can this is not getting into the nitty gritty You know performance stuff and it's very subjective So all of this like yeah, whatever you can take whatever you want out of that out of those notes Personally, I feel like when he gets up here It would be neat even though it's not in the audio To feel more of a slight puff up of the chest and opening of the mouth for an inhale You know, it's kind of his last effort of Okay, let's go Just get a bit more instead of just that mouth there that doesn't quite move 103 I mean again, we don't hear it in the audio. That's why again, it's all very subjective, but It could be something actually like the Repeat timing is it slightly even One two three, but at the same time he's to me it's also counting it out in a way Let's go inhale 1037 103 7 the only thing I would say here lip sync wise it personally I would push the poses more or the Contrasting shapes 103 71037 Hold on let me scrub this here You know the when you're on the s really bring up those lips and show the teeth of this And then seven Like that that would be your seven and N and J would be bigger even bigger and J here Pink Floyd And I'm not quite sure what the where the P is in here, but I really curl those lips in Hold and pink Floyd Floyd Floyd like really like he's exaggerating It's like again like his last effort before he's just completely. Oh man 1037 and NJ here's pink Floyd Yeah 1037 and NJ here's pink Floyd Watch out. I still just from a mechanics point of view as the head down feels a bit Simple than axis and then it comes out a bit straight towards us arch wise and then it stops And it comes up fairly straight and then Hits bit of a hard hits now as you frame through it's not that hard, but you watch it pink floor Oh, it just feels a bit like this And I think you can soften that a bit more pink Floyd and really going to Floyd like Floyd Go up with the curve and then down versus like that Pink Floyd and then something else once we get to here. It feels like we're stuck in this pose Even rotationally watch out. I mean, I know there's a bit of a why rotation account is there But the mouth is there something that and again, this is subjective. This is why I would it's almost like The inhale that I mentioned here like getting ready and then it's completely almost overanimated was its last effort there with all those shapes and everything and then That is like a big exhale or maybe through all of this a clenching. Maybe the lips go together And then I like that so you have a big change here for another exhale This is probably too much, but he could also almost have a bit of a Like a cheek puff Into them that Watch out. This feels a bit Translating in the head there. Just how that neck goes forward There's something odd in the in the deformations there. I feel like this section of that neck translates down Floyd Here's pink Floyd, but it's already great stuff in the fingers. I see all that detail in there. That's great I know probably still push a little bit that head mentioned last time where the head kind of Presents itself to take off the the earphones. I like the headphones I like how Offset the hands aren't everything and the mechanics of all that is cool But there's just that slight like only rotation in here I know there's something could be a bit stronger there and it might just be also just in the face I just feel something something kind of dies of it through this section in the head and face Love the end though That whole sinking in the details the fingers and that inhale the closing of the mouth. This is really cool So it's piggy things very subjective stuff Check super close to being done here, but that is just what I have subjectively for this shot. Thank you All right, there's an email you can sign up you can start whenever you want You can submit whatever you want you get 16 submissions either way a like and subscribe would be awesome. All right. Thank you