 Alrighty new version here with sound let's watch this in full of course. I have super powers I have super strength. I can fly I have laser vision all the good stuff is just you know I got to keep it on the down low All right, I'm turning on the sound on my end just tad That's all pretty cool. I like the changes that you made how tiny things here and there, but other than that You mentioned an email first pass Kind of a rough Idea of what she's going to do. I think that's pretty cool. I think those that's all the right idea Just watching this. I know I know it gets into this, but then you still got kind of a 20 pose. It's almost like I'll just put that like she has her hand on the thigh here closer And maybe that just you know, maybe goes up a bit might not have enough times And we just maybe split the difference here with a bit of a Just like a gesture like a finger Point or something I mean, it's not a point But just something a bit different from this side I could be a more triangular simple pose with a bit more complex finger pose getting into this Just so it's not the Kind of same pose kind of twins. I Think that's cute. I think we could Potentially can push that a bit more off to one side And that way it will also get away from that idea, but with arms here So if you have potentially this hand here right and in this hand here It might force her into a bit more of a lean maybe I'm not sure but and then that way you have Just the overall feel of head and arms giving you that kind of line towards the girl if that makes sense Where we can kind of push that line of action a little bit That's super cute. I mean I like all of that. That's all cute Same thing here Again, I'm harping on things, but then you get into it's getting a bit similar I know there's an offset there visually getting very close here to a mirror And I know it's kind of anticipating into this, but even that if they could be maybe Maybe there that has a framework to offset and giving us a bit of a Lower arm High arm and I know at the end it's kind of almost the same But just I'm trying to get away from believe a mirrored aspect was then you got That feeling just a bit mirrored there And even if you get up on something like this, maybe she could just have straight a leg so that when you go into this That's the big contrast. So otherwise we're getting kind into the same leg poses as well just with the weight shift And same thing with that where we kind of go out even though it's silhouette wise offset for sure I wonder if there's anything you can do differently I can fly with this this is more like a tada or something, but what could be a cute little thing for a kid I can fly This is like don't do that, but like, you know arms down Iron Man style With the head like a head wiggle or something and imagine she gets on her tippy toes again legs together and and she will go up up up Knows up a bit something and I feel like that could be something a bit more interesting with that moment I like that. This made me laugh. This was really good. And then here not sure that you need That I'm all it mainly be acting because this is all cute, but then watch out again. We're getting into similarities there Yes, it breaks it up here But what I like is this that you she's telling her something It was okay. Well, I got to figure something else. I got a light to her I had to say this and if we could kind of go from that to that where her arms again might be down where Hey again in an offset thing where maybe When you go down, it's kind of like the way you have it here. I like this a lot where one is is Hidden so you maybe go from here Straight to that arm hidden and this could be the tapping the sides or she could have kind of a finger wiggle Like she's getting nervous and it's kind of the body Kind of telling that idea you like to face lies, but the body can't So yeah, she has a bit of a nervous thing with the fingers kind of figuring out What should I say and then that leads into this? That's really cute. I like how you Down low and how you go then down with the head into that. I think that's really cute I would just look at eyeliner gets a bit tricky there So it's kind of working on that a bit And you're asking about steps To spline and blocking it always kind of tricky. I think what I would do is people kind of lost I would look at transitions and kind of the beats if you look at okay. What is she doing from here to here? But with this clip she has very clear beats where she goes always into a separate move That are there's always something new and I think you can really then What I call this is chunk it up into different sections and work on that and by working on that I mean you look at like all the pose that we talked about look at eyeliner and all the details But then I would look at just kind of the breakdowns like how do you want? Care to go from there to there like what is the body part that leads? Where can you start finessing things a bit more? You will have to kind of work on contact there a little bit Turn transitions as that arm goes up and suddenly stops. It's kind of making sure all that stuff gets a bit more It's love there in terms of just the breakdowns and in-betweens. So you have a bit more control of that But it's already really promising. It'll be like the timing Like the way it snaps into this. It's all really promising. So to me just kind of changes here in terms of posing Other than that and I will elaborate a bit more in the email if you want Just let me know and that's that. Thank you. All right There's an email you can sign up you can start whenever you want you can submit whatever you want You get 16 submissions either way a like and subscribe would be awesome. All right. Thank you