 Alrighty, so let's take a look at this whole thing overall it just felt a bit slow and even in timing Now then again, it is also very Loving and slow idea wise So let's go one by one. I will probably take a look at the overall staging is okay up until here so I'm not sure if If you're just looking into mechanics and then you're gonna do a little reframe and you're gonna do the camera later to tilt up So I'm slightly confused at this this framing here This is fine here But I think we might get away with either two ways either you do this Just in terms of general framing where you keep them low Where you kind of continue with that idea of I got a I got a sneak Not be too loud and instead of a regular posture. It's more something like this where he kind of Gets close to her and it's kind of trying to be quiet And I think that's okay, even though only if you could just kind of pan over and reframe, but You could probably just leave it like this or you leave him low and he does a bit more of a sneaky approach No, not sneaky terms of you know mischievous, but he doesn't want to wake her up And does that or you keep this and we tilt up follow him down and Then do a reframe and pan over So that it's a bit more Balance we don't have that massive empty frame coloring and lots of here And I don't mind panning over since we're already doing a tilt It's kind of it's it's within the shot that we're reframing I'm not sure that if you keep him low all the time that we need to reframe because then it's only Might draw attention to itself might be too weird, but I think it's something that we can definitely You know add at the end. I think it's an easy tweak or just an exploration My biggest question to you is what are your intentions with this? How come he is so off? A frame there Do you want to tilt up or do you have another idea was I'm looking at your email? And I don't see anything regarding that moments that to me is the biggest The biggest section in terms of blocking. I think it's a little bit rough in terms of ideas where I think you could have something where I Don't mind because it's not long You can have something where he's got a slight look over to the TV and I might don't to be honest I remember what I said last time so I might I might be saying something where you go away But last time you said something else and I should probably watch what I said, but here is my my unfiltered Thought process there that Right now he always has that same expression and I think even in early blocking you want to communicate and convey a Change or just whatever goes on and right now. He's always kind of that same Emotional state and visually the same expression not saying you got to do the crazy facial stuff in blocking, but Basic basic changes if there is anything so that's why I'm wondering well if he looks a bit You know takes a step and looks a bit at the TV or something where you might just have a less amused look and then head turn You know even even if it's through here That's just his secondary actresses He just wants to put it down because there's food and as he does this he realizes Oh wait, she's asleep and then you could use this moment Maybe has a slight pause of and he has that expression change if oh, she's asleep and then As he takes the handoff. It's a very deliberate slow Delicate handoff so we understand that normal move. I'm just gonna put this down. Oh wait I'm seeing her. She's tired. She's asleep. Let me now change my movement to be quiet Which includes not propping this out hard, but making this nice and soft So this move will be slower and then getting into this hunched over quite quite quiet into this and again this could be with mouth open and big eyes like Wouldn't be just be quiet. It's so cute so cute and then once you're here You can change into this where it's just a lot more subtle and loving where you get into this and And then that and that way to me at least there would be a different state of mind at the beginning an expression Then a different one as you get closer and then the last one where it's just all about I love her and she's so cute I Mean that's just me. I just it will give you just a bit more contrast and progression and change versus This always being the same thing Now that being said You might have you know other things in mind that are just not visible here And you just you know, that's just your early taken and there's gonna be more so that's just More like me brainstorming thinking out loud asking questions suggesting things but not, you know I opened all kinds of things right so whatever you want to let me What are you gonna tell me let me know the email So we kind of get a bit more of a clear sense of what's going on. I think that's about it Yeah, just films and again, I know this is early, but You may argue well, you know, they don't have to do all the crazy steps and you know the weight and everything But I know just all that feels all very slow and floaty, but I know it's early But I'm looking at in terms of what can we do to give this a bit more contrast and progression and change and just interest So it's not just one state of mind throughout the whole time into this Anyway, yeah, that's kind of I mean looking at this would be kind of cute Just a bit of a change and maybe you know, even if he looks up Maybe he looks at down at this and you don't need to have the TV and you know flickering lights or whatever just Goes down and has some food and then on this looks up and realizes. Oh again I can say she's asleep and then you get that pause here And you can have maybe a quick glance down there And then you that soft putting down and then soft timing of taking that hand off to the mid So now we understand now. He's being trying to be quiet and then just the difference Yeah, this is my biggest question of what your plan is in terms of this All right, I think that is it I will let this be you let me know via email how you want to proceed and then we shall continue. All right. Thank you All right There's an email you can sign up you can start whenever you want you can submit whatever you want You get 16 submissions either way like and subscribe would be awesome. All right. Thank you You