 All right, let's check out this guy here. I think you can probably Right there That see if you look at the spacing here here here. Boom soundly goes down So at that point you start to lose the weight and watch out It feels like you're going down and it's only to the left If he goes up it will be this and right now for like in midair. He starts to flatten out Let's watch out for that Other than that, I Think it's definitely better this arm This guy at this point is still popping so watch out Even here you can see here pop pop back That too like how quickly It's into the bends and here you have a little bit of an extension pop. That's cool At least I love the hit. It's great. I think you can still I think you can still do more in the root and chest up and down Thing is imagine if that's the ground and that's the chest It feels like the chest goes just like that while arms go up and down And I don't feel like there's a bit of an up and down in the root and chest Because of this right that's gonna influence that It feels like the the roots, you know, if you look at the root of his crotch It's just gliding up. There's really not much in up and down It's gonna help you add that to it. I'm not sure what the head is doing though Like there's a weird this almost feels like I Got no where the eyes are right. So to me this feels like the underside So he knows is really high up and then suddenly it pops and like dips really quickly and Then here again very very quick up and down Not quite sure what that's supposed to be and then that's weird quick left and right. It's like a little no I'm not quite sure what that means acting wise That all works and that all works. Yeah, it's just that This guy What are you doing here Reynolds your DVD player broken? Nice takes a couple frames until we get to it. I think Cut the beginnings. It's a bit distracting to have I think what's a bit there's something about this arm When it's done like he hits boom It's weird like he almost goes for another hit But then but then he doesn't and then just kind of eases out and then slowly goes down It's it's a bit weird I will probably have just offset the animation so that when this door opens his hand is You know like here ish going back and it's just about to hit it's kind of a global offset and Then I know it's just a little rough but as you continue on don't forget all that It's gonna be a lot of movement here and here because of that arm shake That is a bit weird like how far like this to me is interesting It has a certain attitude and pose like tired or whatever it's going on and then That her rotation feels very a from a mechanical point of view very separate Where it's just the head going up. It doesn't quite involve the chest I would reduce the head because then here you have this weird It's like the lower neck Like it feels like that's a lower neck and that's your head and now suddenly the lower neck rotates back into this And it feels weird because like why would he go back like this like is he surprised to see him? That's a weird to me a surprise move. I would stay within like this attitude That feels a bit weird and it goes back in one axis and it just kind of overshoots and comes back. It feels very animated I'm not quite sure about that guy. I Think those eye darts are a bit fast and they go a lot of up and down up and down Like to me feels like stare like he turns around stairs and then down hold up That would be enough like what down up. What the hell are you doing here versus this nervous up and down thing? It doesn't feel Like you are your eyes don't do that like if I would dark open that up and on like that It just feels weird like I'm not focusing on anything. There's not enough time to register at any points. That makes sense What are you doing here Reynolds? Let's see What are you doing here Reynolds your DVD player broken? Yeah, rest is cool. It's just you know, it's just still rough in terms of When what moves? Would I say this? What are you doing here Reynolds, you know, like it's just it's you just go down into this pose and then you have that shake What are you doing? For instance like his like that is not represented in there It just doesn't feel it's my picky thing about it doesn't feel like the body is connected to the audio at all What are you doing here Reynolds your DVD What are you doing here because he was what are you doing on what I would feel like the head would just jolt up a bit and And then here's your what and the what just feels It just feels like it's just a jaw and then you're doing a move up I don't I don't quite feel like if he's this point goes what are you doing like what? So just have a little bit more impact on the head Even Reynolds would have something So right now I feel like that move is because of a post change in chest and head But it the head doesn't look like it's saying Reynolds DVD player broken Rest is great like that works a lot better DVD player broken What I would just do here. There's a lot of I feel like the concentration is heavy in the horizontal move So you can have a bit of up and now like a DVD broke like DVD could be up Sorry DVD player DVD player DVD like DVD will go up and then player will go down you play a broken And they can probably continue the animation a bit more like after this Here just kind of everything we're thinking about this is that the body kind of stays put but then just the facial features relax And then nothing else is going and then you have just a dart and nothing else in the body is moving So I'm just going to put that down to you know, it's just rough for you just still figuring things out because if I look at This one it's so much from polish. So I know you can get there So I'm just I'm probably just pointing out all the obvious things that you know Your internet activity over the last 10 years is being scrutinized and cataloged No, this one's weird. I'm not a fan. This is personal, but I'm not a fan of one I rise up one eyes down and then Change to the other side. Yeah, they're turning into Jim Carrey not a fan in my newt vivid detail And I think That last one is too fast I would give this like three more frames from here to here and then ease in like you can almost get to like this and then As the heck goes up you can kind of finish That amount like even ease into that as it goes up. It's not so harsh in the detail Careful you got some blur issues on your background Your internet activity over the last 10 years Your internet activity over the last 10 years is cool I mean the thing is I'm just super picky on on on arms and hands But I don't want to drive you crazy But I miss to not point out that your wrists, you know, this is up and this is it feels like that's your orientation, right? Now look at the elbow All right, look at the elbow whoop. See how much the elbow dips But a rotation stays the same in your wrists as opposed to at this point Like your wrist was like this and your forearm was like that now your form is like this But your wrist is still like this as opposed to going up at least that way You know, just a bit more so it just doesn't feel so IK activity over Divide over the last 10 years is being scrutinized and cataloged funky stuff on the fingers see that going through and close It's just feels a bit random And then at the end your fingers is a stray key see when you scrub through Same thing in your chair feels like your chair and your fingers only just move up and you can see it in the section in that arm So you're super close. It's just you know, a little polish things on there and just be careful be mindful of That part here on the arm But the biggest thing to me would be I'm just not a fan. It makes me a bit too comical The eyebrow change here and then that just feels too snappy given his detail It's more like a swab and arrogant and like, yeah, I got you and then suddenly boom eyebrow snapdown is kind of a betrayal of emotion in a fancy way All right, that's it though. Thanks All right, there's an email you can sign up you can start whenever you want you can submit whatever you want You get 16 submissions either way like and subscribe would be awesome. All right. Thank you