 All right, let's play this in full here. It's a longer piece. No sound there are some stepped moments some linear moments and This is flirting dangerously You are wondering if this can be kept as a long piece or Having edits in there. Okay, some of the staging I think we could tweak a little bit Oh It's heavily long And you mentioned that we could potentially just cut this up on a reel and show different shots in between. Okay, I Think as a whole it's a cool idea. I like it You got a couple questions. Do you want to be since we see her from profile? I mean a couple things this totally up to you. Could you or would you Consider turning her over so we don't see her wings so that now That's the wing reveal Then as we might not completely understand what's going on Would you also do this and then do a little flutter or do you really want this to be? That is the reveal. I think either is fine. It's just a question for you But then you can play with little things where she might do this And then right at the very ends do a little bit of a turn around again and then flutter wings Just as the thought But as a shot You know if you want to cut the shorter It could also be something where you start here like you don't have to have this whole entrance front So it's this could be something again. Let me turn over. Let's pretend this will be shorter This could be others moments where she's a bit more facing him. We don't see the wings She just does this we get the points that she's flirting and looking away And then she could have another look maybe compensating for not looking here, right where she does that wink So what if it starts here? To hear she turns around Winks and as she turns as the flutter or flutter and then wink It's almost like I got wings wink wink for whatever reason This one I'd be careful because we are we're fairly close to edges here. I think you'd be okay Potentially cheating and having him here. What do we see here? Yeah, I mean, you know I don't think anybody will care. So just for balance. You might have him here So that they're closer and you're gonna have that move that camera over so she has a bit more room It's basically that she would be here and he would be here type of thing Because as we're doing this, it's just a bit uncomfortable how close to the edge he gets all the time and her as well Where does me this seems a bit more comfortable, but then it's still a lot of empty space So my question is what are you trying to show in the shot? She's walking He's walking, but then he's gone. She walks through the edge and does this I mean to me it seems like you can do all of this, right? And she can do the wink to turn around wink and imagine that edge is already here Again, I'm talking in a way. That's completely destructive destructive and destroying your shop, but just as a Shot shortening idea Right, so you start here go back. She stops Winks again flutter turn around wink or turn around wink flutter Just to kind of get the audience interested like what is it? She's got wings and then you would start the shot here I mean you can go crazy and what you can do is start here walk walk This or you can be even crazier Where you do this? Stop turn around wink whatever thingy here and the edge is here and Then we cut to this right Turn around jump that makes sense. So let's go back just to be super clear She is here edges here. She turns around but don't have a turn back She looks at him and then we cut to this shot where again He might be here and that way we see a bit of a reaction in him as she jumps down So you compress this whole thing was basically it's just a one ginormously long walk Which I'm not sure on a demo reel if that's needed that it's so long You know, it's it's losing a bit focus and interest so like I said, what if she turns around and Doesn't look back and the look back happens here and then she does Here I'd be careful probably not going so close because we're starting to get very edgy here It's a bit too close. I will probably stay within like that type of framing Maybe at the end when she gets so here we can get closer Like that's where the camera ends. So she's leading the camera, but it's still more comfortable. She can do that That's all cute. I'll be careful with not doing this That's probably just a key. I would just you know cut here not have that That's like introducing one more thing right before the cut But then you can do this that's all cute You can do that and she do she does this here jumps to pick him up Into that and that's really cute. I think that could all work. It's still fairly long, but let me just see So let's pretend you shorten this whole thing She jumps down does this it's really cute. You see all of this Question for you. Do you want her to blow him a kiss but still look or does she not care? She's still looking there, right? I mean it could also be just kiss and she still looks and And then he goes down does this that's fine. I think just for a visual thing I would just cheat this surface and bring it all the way up And I know this is technically not what it is in 3d space, but it's almost feels like it's not that high It's not that dangerous But just to kind of cheat the feeling of he fell down the cliff I'll personally just cheat this and have this all rock face, but then she goes up picks him up Again, this could be a bit further away so we can see a bit more You don't have to but I'm wondering if they could be just be a bit further away Maybe I don't know actually I take this back I think it should be okay, and you can really focus on on the head and it should be messier You're not so clean so that maybe he's turned a bit towards us and he can look down or well I know he's transfixed by her, but he's easy always at what point does he snap out of it? I mean that's a question for you Or maybe he just always looks at her but she looks around so we can see more of the face Or this is all about mechanics and you catching this character and the weight of it Totally up to you because we are cutting back to this then let me just see this also seems long She puts him down fine And has a reaction of come on wake up No, that should be fine No, it's cute. I think that could be okay. Just the My question to you is that I mean at this point he gets shaken and laughs But is he always completely Transfixed I mean he's completely hypnotized all the time. I wonder would that be an interesting thing of Waking him up and doing something is that like I said something where this actually wakes him up Maybe he's all freaking out freaking out until she does this and that moment of pause gets it back into And he's back into leaning forward and being stars in his eyes, and then they continue That could be an interesting contrast for him. So that scare wakes him up And she does that you know like come on this maybe that's less of a wake up more like calm down calm down. It's fine It's fine, and then she has that look and then he gets back to being hypnotized type thing And then they walk out. I don't know that's a thought lots of thoughts lots of crazy thoughts. Let me know You are open to cut changes you say, but I don't know so I'm throwing things out there Let me know what works for you. Thank you All right, there's an email you can sign up you can start whenever you want you can submit whatever you want You get 16 submissions either way a like and subscribe would be awesome. All right. Thank you