 We shall continue with this ever review then looking at this I don't know if that was like this before but I feel the beginning is taking a long time until he shows up. I don't remember if it was always like that I don't know what happened but I'm it feels like you could just start right here and if you do that I mean I would have his reaction so when he goes was that kind of happens at the same time there if you watch this in real time and then it comes out immediately and I think it would be better to have that and then maybe 10 frames later he comes out so again if this is exactly like before then I apologize for this brand new thing I'm just curious why I didn't pick up on that then this is all good uh this feels a bit too early like he is he's already hitting he's here to me it feels like this is the anticipation and he's already looking and then he does the knock I mean you couldn't I guess you can imagine what you can hear his uh the chair but I would still have that later so maybe five frames later because you want to look here you want to look how this guy is enjoying it and doing that that part here and then the guy turns over that's all hey sports I heard someone got engaged you dog um when you do this I'd be careful about a move like that because you are moved like that being this guy here because you're moving the arm away from us and it just perspectives a bit tricky and it's it's you always want to have you want to have a bend in the arm and things that are flat and straight towards us are sometimes a bit hard to read so it would just be tricky I mean you could have that not lower but let me actually quickly change the color so it would be you go here and then just go up a bit so it's not just a a straight line that all works I just be curious here it's tricky you would have to have that arm a bit lower or this guy a bit further back but the thing is this gets a bit close this is almost like he's already going to hit him with that arm but he doesn't really react to that if someone would do that to me you can flinch but he's actually moving towards the guy so that's kind of an odd thing and then here is behind him I think it's just a bit too overlapping in terms of where the characters are and if you anticipate I will bring this guy a bit further back so that on this pose it's still clear from his body it's for cleaner silhouette again same thing here anything you can do there that the thing is he has such a long arm you know if you could you could have him I know it's gonna fuck up you where his position is but imagine the guys here or just you know attack closer but you can always have that shoulder bit more here that will be here you know it can go that far meaning that you can have the body here and I mentioned this because they would help you with this section and then it would help you with the overlapping part here because then you form a tangent with the head here I think it might just be attack clear the same thing here someone got engaged you dog and then same thing here when you go down that you just don't want to have and it looks like it's there's an intersection but you don't want to have that much overlap you want to keep it clear and he forms a tangent or looks like he hits the knee and then same thing here I mean they could be awesome if he actually hits him and then he falls back it would just make all that stuff cleaner he's sports I heard someone got engaged you dog nothing gonna hurt you now you're a man heard someone got engaged you dog gonna hurt you now I think that drop is cool I think as you go down you could this is a bit I mean it's step mode there but just start working on this section here I think you can go from here down to here I mean I might be unrealistic chair wise but I think this is such a big move when he goes here so when he goes back for all that thing suddenly feels all that is feeling small when he lands here because he gets into that and then what's the compression from here there's nothing you get a little bit of a chair stuff here but I would have that really go down and then him he can bounce up so you can have his butt a bit here and then come back down into that post it could be I would have that a bit bouncier someone got engaged you dog nothing gonna hurt you now you're a man yeah not that there is sound to support it but it's as if this chair would hit the back and he would be maybe after the bounces would be like this and then when he hits the wall that's when he goes back with the head like this and this is the same as before so I would bring out these arms just for silhouette oh nothing gonna hurt you now you're a man I think here you might have that arm out here so this is not hidden and then is this oh nothing gonna hurt you now you're a man in love is he laughing I'm assuming he's laughing if he's laughing at the end it will also be cool to get that get that blocked out other than that it's getting better and better there's the one of things that stood out terms of screen direction and and timing hey sport I heard someone got engaged you dog hey sport I heard someone got engaged you dog gotta get hurt you now you're a man yeah the only thing that I'd be picky about even though I think it should be fine it's you have this ginormous move on him and he goes back and we're all looking at this and then he's doing this awesome thing I love that the acting on him and this is a bit conflicting because you don't know where to look I heard someone got engaged you dog nothing gonna hurt you now just happens at the same time you're gonna hurt you now you're a man see how he is at this point kind of it's as if you want him to do it just a tad later like you have this move on him happen eight frames later I don't know if that makes sense it's just they both so awesome and I think it's just a tiny thing was you have that pause and they're gonna let oh god oh nothing and the men before he falls and since you have no no sound for the drop here oh god oh nothing gonna hurt you now you're a man in love it's tricky because you don't want to make that drop too late because once start talking we want to look at him tricky thing worst case you might have to make this a lot smaller let's just leave it for now because it will be okay it's it came in easy thing to go from here and here and just tone down his arms but I think it's let's just keep going I just really like that moment and I want to kill it but maybe you have some ideas as well it's just the only thing at the end if that's what we're looking at that guy leading back and it might be too much back and forth in terms of audience attention but that is it already as always email me if you have any questions all right there's an email you can sign up you can start whenever you want you can submit whatever you want you get 16 submissions either way a like and subscribe would be awesome all right thank you